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A Thin Line – Chpt 11
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"Yes, I guess I am," I reluctantly confessed.
"I can’t say that upsets me, Bette," Helena remarked, as she leaned over to kiss my lips. "Although I do understand , you need some additional explanation for my past behavior, which we can talk about whenever you wish. And I suppose I can accept it if you need for us to slow down. But, honestly, I’ve already waited so long for you, it won’t be easy. Especially now that I’ve physically demonstrated my feelings for you."
"I don’t want to slow down," I replied. "I just want some assurance that you and I won’t end up destroying one another. And there is no guarantee."
"No, I suppose there isn’t. And just because I’ve told you that I care about you deeply, doesn’t mean that you believe it, or accept it, or know it in your heart. That will take time," Helena said.
She moved our hands that were clasped together up to her mouth and kissed the back of mine.
"Bette," she continued, "I do have some idea as to how difficult your life has been the past few years. The last thing I want to do is to add to your suffering. All I’m asking for is a chance to make you happy. And if I need to spend all day with you here, explaining myself and trying to convince you to give us a go, I’ll gladly call the studio and delegate my responsibilities to other capable hands."
"No, Helena, of course that’s not necessary," I stated firmly. "And I do want to see you. And I do appreciate your listening to my concerns and talking with me. I feel better that you know where I’m coming from, and that I know that you care."
"Of course I care," Helena assured me. "That’s what I’ve been trying to tell you. To show you." She smiled.
I disentangled my fingers from hers and reached up to caress Helena’s face.
"God, I can feel it happening, Helena." I said.
Surprised, Helena asked, "What, Bette? What’s happening?"
I blurted out, "It’s why I’m so scared. You’re nothing like I thought you were. And I’m falling. I’m falling so hard for you."
"Bette. Oh, my darling, Bette," Helena said, pulling me in close to her, "I never want to disappoint you."
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Yes, I’m first! Off to read now. Bye!
God Tina don’t be so blonde
Love the development of the Belena relationship… can’t wait to see how Helena gets out of this thing with Tina, though I’d kinda just like to see her slap Tina and tell her to go back to her heterosexual life… I digress. Great post, looking forward to the next one!
Well if you hadn’t disabled the ratings I’d be able to give you 5 stars zheese. This chapetr was great. I still think Helena needs to explain to Bette what she was doing with Tina is she really had a thing for her from get. Ugh Tina, what drama is she bringing to Bette’s office today?? And hello, maybe she could knock once in a while!
I am loving this story and your writing.
Ha! You can’t stop here. I can’t wait to see how Helena will hide Bette from Tina while doing it not that successfully.
I love this story, Two beautiful ladies,would be hard to choose. Can I have both? guess not. How will Helena get over Tina listening and tell her a lie.that she doesnt know her. Did Tina ever know Bette and her moods. Let her live her life with a male that will alway have a doubt about her. thanks
well, that was one great chapter, zheese… i’m sure helena looks good under the spray in the shower and her and bette even better, hopefully we’ll get to see this in the nearest time.. anyway, i can’t wait for them to go out together and as for tina, well, just let helena tell her everything and slap her a couple of times just so she knows what she lost (and can’t get back, at least in this story ;). great chapter, love your writing, please post soon.
Great chapter. I am not a Belena fan but your writing makes me a believer. Looking forward to your next post.
damn….that was good. bette and helena are so good together…it seems all too real…great job, looking forward to the next post!!!
Z, the way you’re writing B&H, there’s definitely chemistry between them. Can’t wait to see when Tina finds out. Tell her, Helena!! LOL. Great job. Looking forward to the next post.
excellent chapter, you had me awww-ing all the way through, so sweet n cute! cannot believe you stopped where you did though. Love it! cant wait for the next installment. thank you!
Looking forward to where you take this story next. Thanks for writing! I hear you about how the characters lead you in a certain direction…
Ha! I almost want Helena to tell her, just so Tina can realize she lost not one, but two unbelievably gorgeous women and she has ZERO chance of getting them back. :D lol. Can’t wait for more
You write so well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You’re great!!!!!!!!! I love to read your stories!!!!
Great chapter, zheese. So love the interaction between the two gorgeous women ^_^ What’s Helena gonna tell Tina?
haha that Tina doesn’t have a clue!
oh please don’t leave us hanging too long, i’m not above begging!!!!