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A Thin Line – Chpt 15
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Silence.
“You’re welcome. Good-bye, Bette,” Tina said.
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Bette placed the phone behind her on the counter, and sighed heavily. She was obviously upset.
Moving in front of her and examining her eyes, I asked, “Bette? What’s wrong? What happened? Is Angelica alright?”
She hesitated before answering, “Angelica’s fine. Everything’s fine.” She smiled unconvincingly.
“You don’t fool me, Bette Porter,” I said, putting my arms around her and nuzzling my cheek against hers. “Whatever it is that’s wrong, I want to help make it better.”
“Some things you just can’t make better, Helena,” Bette said, moving her lips towards mine.
“Yes, I can, Bette. Just give me a chance,” I said softly. “Can’t I persuade you to talk to me about what’s upset you?” I asked.
I could feel Bette’s breath on my face. She kissed me.
“I need you to fuck me,” Bette whispered, seductively pleading. She pulled me close, and held me, quite possibly, tighter than I’d ever been held before.
After what seemed like several minutes, I spoke.
“Bette, are you ready to go lie down? Let’s forget the shower,” I suggested, drawing away and looking at her face. “What do you think? We’ll just get all sweaty again, anyway,” I said teasingly, caressing her face, while pulling her hair back.
Bette smiled and reached up to unwrap my arms from around her neck. Taking my hand, she led me to the bedroom.
When we entered the room, the first thing I noticed was the rumpled bedspread, a reminder of our libidinous adventure earlier in the evening.
“I’m going to use the restroom and brush my teeth down the hall,” Bette said, leading me towards her bathroom. “But I have some unopened toothbrushes. I’ll just get one for you, and you can use my bathroom here,” she continued, entering the master bath and pulling out a cabinet drawer. Turning, she placed a fresh toothbrush package in my hand. “Make yourself at home.” Bette smiled and kissed me. “I’ll be right back.”
“Post-haste!” I encouraged her.
“Your mother says that,” Bette informed me, laughing.
“So I’ve heard,” I said, reaching behind her and pinching Bette’s ass.
“Hey, you owe me a kiss back there from that swat you gave me earlier,” Bette reminded me.
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Enjoy your writing, zheese, and also your vision of Bette and Helena together, which is sizzling hot and loving at the same time. I wonder when Helena will have the guts to tell Bette how truly, madly, and deeply she actually loves her?
I like that there is much feeling behind the f*cking in your story. I hope when Tina finds out she… oh, I dunno, explodes or something.
I love TiBette but dayum, woman, you make B & H a sexy, loving and caring couple. Tina just loves to rankle Bette. Tina is the gift that keeps on giving…more heartache.
We all know that Tina will be jealous of anyone that Bette will ever be with. If Tina has a house full of kids with her boy toy. she will always be jealous of anyone with Bette. Bette is getting to the point where she doesnt give a flying fig. thanks
I like your story… very much… bette is not the villain, Tina was the one that asked Bette to be together again… so this hell-ry guy where the hell comes??As long as I used to love Tina I’d wish I could find the reason to stop believing in her… and why I started loving helena…
Zheese I love your story very much and I hope that coniving bitch of a Tina will find out soon and choke or something.Keep the loving couple going please. I just love B&H
zheese, you continue to please!!! b&h are so erotic and just, well real…there is substance there. more please, really, truly enjoy your writing!!!
Hey zhese,if i could rate your story i’d give it 5 stars! I hate that Tina can still get to Bette that way. Bette needs to take Helena’s advice ad forgive herself-we all do make mistakes and just b/c Tina won’t let Bette forget their past doesn’t mean that Bette has to let it intrude on her future w/ Helena. I think Tina is going to be destroyed when it comes out that helena is the woman Bette is spending her nights with—AND I CAN’T WAIT!!!
Tina is a vicious, vindictive bitch. She knew that Bette was going to instantly return her call due to the last hour. She also knew that Bette would think something was wrong with the baby since she called that late. Tina needs to stop playing games. She’s got Henry; so why should she have her panties in a bunch because Bette is about to get her freak on? I will be delighted when Tina’s shit no longer has an effect on Bette. I’m glad Helena is turning into the perfect partner for Bette. IMHO, Tina NEVER knew what she wanted.
Really like knowing Tina will spend the night thinking about Bette w/ another woman. It will be interesting when it comes out who! Looking forward to your next post. Thanks for writing.
I fully agree. Bette needs to forgive herself. She made a mistake. How long does she need to walk on hot coals? Bette……….baby girl, stop doing this to yourself!! I also hope Tina spends a fretful night biting her nails wondering who Bette is being intimate with…….. “God, Bette, Angelica’s fine. Slow down! Where’s the fire?â€â€¦â€¦.. ‘On my couch and between my legs.’ But I restrained myself……………. Next time Bette, don’t retrain yourself. Tina has NO problem throwing Henry in your face. F*k Tina………show her what you workin’ with!!!! HELENAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Hmmm…so Bette has to be careful about what she says to Tina as long as her legal relationship with Angelic is legally nebulous, but that doesn’t mean she has to let Tina get to her. OK, so Tina knew she was with someone. So what? If Tina wants to portray herself as nothing but blamelessly hurt, then Bette should start to concentrate on the hot, needy creature waiting in her bed who wants her as she is instead of the vindictive, game-playing shrew on the phone. Did Tina call late as it’s the best time to interrupt ? Aha!
Excellently written as usual Zheese! Bette shouldn’t give a flying f*ck what tinho thinks anymore, that woman has no right to be judgemental towards Bette. Bette needs to forgive herself and move on with that incredibly sexy woman lighting a fire between her legs! Can’t wait for more..
It’s great… AGAIN . I’d really want to see Tina’s reaction to all this:)
Zheese, I think that Tina in a way is strange. Like the grass is greener on the other side – when Bette is finally financially comfortable having the Dean position and being very intimate iwth someone else (she doesn’t know who yet). However, she’s not too reliable when Bette is down and out, something that Helena has shown not to be. Bette needs someone who can go with her through her ups and down, and not a person who falls asleep when she’s depressed. Great writing! You’re really undoubtly a top notch writer! I LOVED every minute of it.
Another wonderful update from you Zheese. You portray the interaction between the two hot ladies so well. Wish Bette hadn’t restrained herself with ‘On my couch and between my legs.’ :-)
am a belena addict.. tina can be miserable for all i care.. would like to see her begging for bette to come back..ha..ha..bad me..