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    A Thin Line – Chpt 7

    Story written on April 4, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – The date begins

    When she placed the index and middle fingers of both hands around the stems of two glasses, I diverted my gaze. I couldn’t be caught admiring her physical attributes.

    Placing the wine glasses in front of me, she found me dutifully reading the description of the wine on the label of the bottle.

    “Here we go,” she announced.

    “These are exquisite glasses,” I said.

    “Thank you,” Helena beamed. “Now astound me with your decantation technique.”

    “Not too much to it, really,” I remarked as I picked up the bottle and poured. “Just an elegant little twist at the end to prevent an aberrant drip,” I explained as I successfully concluded my performance.

    “Amazing,” is all she would say.

    I handed her a glass of the cool nectar, and picked up the other goblet.

    “To an enjoyable evening,” Helena toasted, clinking my glass with hers.

    “To an enjoyable evening,” I repeated. And we took our first of many sips of wine that night.

    ****************

    Bette carried our wine glasses outside by the pool, while I balanced the cheese and fruit in one hand and gripped the handle of the ice bucket with the other.

    “Sit here, Bette,” I offered, nodding, “So you can appreciate an unrestricted panoramic view.”

    “This is truly breathtaking,” she said, looking out over the ocean and seating herself at the patio table.

    She reached up to assist me with the platter, placing it between us, as I set the chiller on its stand to the right of my chair.

    “This is a beautiful presentation, Helena,” she said eying the assorted morsels I’d prepared for us. “What all do we have here? I recognize the melons and berries, of course, and slices of Brie, but what are these other cheeses?”

    I pointed to the unidentified cheeses, and named them for her, “This is a Danish dill Havarti. And this,” I said, picking up the soft white cube between my thumb and forefinger, “is a Gruyère, imported from Switzerland. Here, try it, Bette,” I offered, holding it out. I decided it was much to soon to try to start feeding her. “You don’t mind us eating with our fingers, do you?”

    She looked at the cheese between my fingertips and then into my eyes. “No, I don’t mind at all,” she said, reaching cautiously, and then carefully plucking the tidbit from between my fingers.”

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    2. Great chapter as always. But now I really feel like Bette’s being with Helena because she want to be listened and wanted and Helena could give her this. Of course there’s physical attraction as well. But is it true love? I don’t know. But it’s always good to have someone when you’re in need or very vulnerable.

    7. HOTNESS!Tina, Tina, Tina .. it still makes me laugh, when I see how Tina just left Bette for Henry, in due time she will get her fair share of sufferin, until then bring on the Helebette

    10. oh god that was hot! i cant believe you stopped there. i am totally loving this, i personally feel helena is a far better match for bette than tina was. thank you for writing this, cant wait for more.

    12. ok ok ok……u cannot just stop like that…….er……i love this bette and helena storyline…..they would def make a good match……wowowwoowowow…….bring it on girlie…..i want some more…….

    13. Doing my very happy dance in the land of fan fiction!!! Who needs TV when we have beautiful and sexy stories to read & enjoy & treasure right here in the wonderful world of fan fiction. Excellent chapter and please, please continue soon. Thank you so very much for writing!!!!

    14. Well, now that I’ve picked my jaw off the floor I can properly review this. It’s funny because tonight I had a bit of free time and in that free time I found that I should reply to your message. So, I wrote that up in Notepad, because I have to reference your message to answer it and then I went on the site to post the reply. Lo and Behold, this lovely story was up. From a semi-rookie writing point of view, you are teaching me a lot. I am learning so much from your exquisite story…and oh my the way you write those two just makes me knees get weak. If only we could all go to our own little beach houses. I like how you worked that Bette had seen the house before, and the believability about having the custody battle with Angelica. I also like how you work the rogue curse into Bette’s point of views because often time she is a bit dirty-mouthed. I am so glad this finally happened to HelBette, Belena, Betelena…whatever, and I really can’t wait for more. :D

    15. Well, zheese, you left ’em wanting more. True for your characters, true for your readers. I have to go now and sharpen my sommelier skills, cause I want to land an heiress. Decant me, baby!

    18. You are getting there, Love these two together. We really need to have more fun and a lot more loving. Let Tina do her thing with her boy toy Bet Bette has the most fun. thanks

    27. i really like your style – its working well for the story and the characters show through clearly. ( I’m up to date now!) & looking foward to the next installment

    34. OMG, you are so evil!…I’m just catching up and I couldn’t leave without leaving a comment (wich I almost never do)’cause this story is just beautifuly written… I’m really hooked up this time (damm it). Honestly, you have a talent. Now keep posting, and soon!!!

    35. I was thrilled to see that u had posted, zheese… Another lovely chapter but my god wasn’t that hot!!! … pls don’t leave us like this ..post soon! ^_^

    37. Zheese, Finally some love action between Bette and Helena. And all it took was a moonlit stroll along the beach. Beautifully written, capturing all of the anticipation and longing that both Bette and Helena have tried to deny and dissuade. You can’t stop there and leave me waiting for the comsummation of this potentially powerful partnership. Your story is based on equals meeting and reacting to each others needs and demands. Brilliant and most entertaining. Thank you for this gift, Your Loyal Fan.

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