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    A Thin Line – Chpt 7

    Story written on April 4, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – The date begins

    “I can bring out some appetizer plates and forks, if you’d prefer,” I said.

    “No, Helena. Really. This is wonderful just the way you have it,” Bette replied.

    I gauged her reaction to the Gruyère. “Do you like it?” I asked.

    “Oh, Helena, this is marvelous. It melts in your mouth,” she said excitedly.

    “Doesn’t it?” I laughed.

    Picking up her wine glass, and swirling it, Bette tilted it back between her lips.

    “And the wine complements the Gruyère nicely,” she informed me.

    Selecting a succulent-looking, large strawberry, I smiled and relaxed into the back of my chair, glass in one hand, fruit in the other. I know it wasn’t my imagination that I noticed Bette skim my cleavage as my chest expanded with a deep, relaxing breath. It was all I could do to restrain myself from reaching across the table to lean in for a kiss. I wanted to place her hand on one of my breasts so that she could feel my nipples harden and grow excited at her touch.

    I took a long swallow of wine. Bette did the same.

    “So, Bette, what shall we talk about? It’s not my intention to pry,” I said uncomfortably, “but I do want to offer you the opportunity to talk about what upset you earlier, with Angelica and Tina. Or we can discuss what happened with us the other night. Or whatever you’d like.”

    Bette stared into her wine glass. Then she shifted in her seat and gazed out over the horizon. I waited for her to speak.

    “No,” she finally said simply, setting her glass down.

    Oh, Jesus, ‘No.’ What kind of response was that? Was she angry? Was Bette going to get up and leave me here, alone and confused?

    “No, what?” I asked for clarification.

    Leaning over the table, Bette looked me in my eyes, and smiled. “You have beautiful eyes, Helena.”

    I averted my gaze. God, what this woman was doing to me. “Thank you,” I replied, reaching for another piece of fruit.

    “You’re welcome. And what I meant to say was, no, I don’t want to talk about what happened with Tina today. I’ve already ranted to you enough about it. And I don’t want to be upset again.” Bette paused before continuing. Slowly, as if in slow motion, her hand moved above the table and clasped mine hovering over the cheese and fruit. She placed my hand on the table, with hers covering it. Gently, she massaged her palm on the back of my hand for a moment, before pulling away. “And I don’t want to talk about what happened the other night. Not now. Not tonight. I’m relaxed. I just want to enjoy the evening in your company without any heavy conversation. Is that all right?” she asked. “Let me get to know you, Helena.”

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    2. Great chapter as always. But now I really feel like Bette’s being with Helena because she want to be listened and wanted and Helena could give her this. Of course there’s physical attraction as well. But is it true love? I don’t know. But it’s always good to have someone when you’re in need or very vulnerable.

    7. HOTNESS!Tina, Tina, Tina .. it still makes me laugh, when I see how Tina just left Bette for Henry, in due time she will get her fair share of sufferin, until then bring on the Helebette

    10. oh god that was hot! i cant believe you stopped there. i am totally loving this, i personally feel helena is a far better match for bette than tina was. thank you for writing this, cant wait for more.

    12. ok ok ok……u cannot just stop like that…….er……i love this bette and helena storyline…..they would def make a good match……wowowwoowowow…….bring it on girlie…..i want some more…….

    13. Doing my very happy dance in the land of fan fiction!!! Who needs TV when we have beautiful and sexy stories to read & enjoy & treasure right here in the wonderful world of fan fiction. Excellent chapter and please, please continue soon. Thank you so very much for writing!!!!

    14. Well, now that I’ve picked my jaw off the floor I can properly review this. It’s funny because tonight I had a bit of free time and in that free time I found that I should reply to your message. So, I wrote that up in Notepad, because I have to reference your message to answer it and then I went on the site to post the reply. Lo and Behold, this lovely story was up. From a semi-rookie writing point of view, you are teaching me a lot. I am learning so much from your exquisite story…and oh my the way you write those two just makes me knees get weak. If only we could all go to our own little beach houses. I like how you worked that Bette had seen the house before, and the believability about having the custody battle with Angelica. I also like how you work the rogue curse into Bette’s point of views because often time she is a bit dirty-mouthed. I am so glad this finally happened to HelBette, Belena, Betelena…whatever, and I really can’t wait for more. :D

    15. Well, zheese, you left ’em wanting more. True for your characters, true for your readers. I have to go now and sharpen my sommelier skills, cause I want to land an heiress. Decant me, baby!

    18. You are getting there, Love these two together. We really need to have more fun and a lot more loving. Let Tina do her thing with her boy toy Bet Bette has the most fun. thanks

    27. i really like your style – its working well for the story and the characters show through clearly. ( I’m up to date now!) & looking foward to the next installment

    34. OMG, you are so evil!…I’m just catching up and I couldn’t leave without leaving a comment (wich I almost never do)’cause this story is just beautifuly written… I’m really hooked up this time (damm it). Honestly, you have a talent. Now keep posting, and soon!!!

    35. I was thrilled to see that u had posted, zheese… Another lovely chapter but my god wasn’t that hot!!! … pls don’t leave us like this ..post soon! ^_^

    37. Zheese, Finally some love action between Bette and Helena. And all it took was a moonlit stroll along the beach. Beautifully written, capturing all of the anticipation and longing that both Bette and Helena have tried to deny and dissuade. You can’t stop there and leave me waiting for the comsummation of this potentially powerful partnership. Your story is based on equals meeting and reacting to each others needs and demands. Brilliant and most entertaining. Thank you for this gift, Your Loyal Fan.

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