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    A Thin Line – Chpt 7

    Story written on April 4, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – The date begins

    My gaze moved from my tingling hand, resting on the table, back to Bette’s eyes.

    “Of course, it’s all right,” I said softly. “Would you like to go for a walk on the beach now? While the sun sets. Before it gets dark?”

    “Sounds lovely,” Bette replied, caressing her wine glass.

    “Finish your wine then, while I take the food inside. Then we’ll go.”

    *****************

    While waiting for Helena to return, I removed my sandals. I wanted to feel the sand on the bottoms of my feet. Pulling the bottle of wine from the ice bucket, I poured a few more ounces of Pinot Blanc for myself and sat back down. I swished a long sip of wine in my mouth ,and over my palate, savoring its fruity flavors. It was cool, and felt good against my throat when I swallowed.

    The music Helena had playing inside on the stereo was piped out onto the deck. It was a smoky sounding jazz, with a prominent saxophone. I leaned my head back and closed my eyes to listen. The ambiance was perfect. I couldn’t help but muse, ‘If Helena’s intention is to provide an atmosphere conducive to seduction, her efforts are impeccable.’

    I heard the melting ice slosh in the wine bucket. When I opened my eyes slightly, Helena was pouring more wine into her glass.

    She saw me squinting to look at her with my head still back.

    “Just a few more sips for the road,” she joked. She placed her free hand on her hip as she stood surveying the shoreline. With the other hand, she freely sipped. “This wine really is extraordinary, Bette. Thank you for sharing it with me.”

    “I’m glad you’re enjoying it,” I said, my eyes taking in her slender, sensuous form.

    Emptying her glass and setting it on the table, she asked, “Are you ready to go for our walk?”

    She held out her hand to me, to help rouse me from my repose. I took her hand and she tugged gently. When I stood up, I found Helena’s face and lips dangerously close to mine and our bodies only inches apart. Our proximity was tantalizing. Her lips were so tempting. Her eyes, arresting. I could barely, but unmistakably, perceive her face moving slightly towards mine. Suddenly, she stopped, and let go of my hand. Fuck! What was I doing? What was I doing? What was I doing?

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    2. Great chapter as always. But now I really feel like Bette’s being with Helena because she want to be listened and wanted and Helena could give her this. Of course there’s physical attraction as well. But is it true love? I don’t know. But it’s always good to have someone when you’re in need or very vulnerable.

    7. HOTNESS!Tina, Tina, Tina .. it still makes me laugh, when I see how Tina just left Bette for Henry, in due time she will get her fair share of sufferin, until then bring on the Helebette

    10. oh god that was hot! i cant believe you stopped there. i am totally loving this, i personally feel helena is a far better match for bette than tina was. thank you for writing this, cant wait for more.

    12. ok ok ok……u cannot just stop like that…….er……i love this bette and helena storyline…..they would def make a good match……wowowwoowowow…….bring it on girlie…..i want some more…….

    13. Doing my very happy dance in the land of fan fiction!!! Who needs TV when we have beautiful and sexy stories to read & enjoy & treasure right here in the wonderful world of fan fiction. Excellent chapter and please, please continue soon. Thank you so very much for writing!!!!

    14. Well, now that I’ve picked my jaw off the floor I can properly review this. It’s funny because tonight I had a bit of free time and in that free time I found that I should reply to your message. So, I wrote that up in Notepad, because I have to reference your message to answer it and then I went on the site to post the reply. Lo and Behold, this lovely story was up. From a semi-rookie writing point of view, you are teaching me a lot. I am learning so much from your exquisite story…and oh my the way you write those two just makes me knees get weak. If only we could all go to our own little beach houses. I like how you worked that Bette had seen the house before, and the believability about having the custody battle with Angelica. I also like how you work the rogue curse into Bette’s point of views because often time she is a bit dirty-mouthed. I am so glad this finally happened to HelBette, Belena, Betelena…whatever, and I really can’t wait for more. :D

    15. Well, zheese, you left ’em wanting more. True for your characters, true for your readers. I have to go now and sharpen my sommelier skills, cause I want to land an heiress. Decant me, baby!

    18. You are getting there, Love these two together. We really need to have more fun and a lot more loving. Let Tina do her thing with her boy toy Bet Bette has the most fun. thanks

    27. i really like your style – its working well for the story and the characters show through clearly. ( I’m up to date now!) & looking foward to the next installment

    34. OMG, you are so evil!…I’m just catching up and I couldn’t leave without leaving a comment (wich I almost never do)’cause this story is just beautifuly written… I’m really hooked up this time (damm it). Honestly, you have a talent. Now keep posting, and soon!!!

    35. I was thrilled to see that u had posted, zheese… Another lovely chapter but my god wasn’t that hot!!! … pls don’t leave us like this ..post soon! ^_^

    37. Zheese, Finally some love action between Bette and Helena. And all it took was a moonlit stroll along the beach. Beautifully written, capturing all of the anticipation and longing that both Bette and Helena have tried to deny and dissuade. You can’t stop there and leave me waiting for the comsummation of this potentially powerful partnership. Your story is based on equals meeting and reacting to each others needs and demands. Brilliant and most entertaining. Thank you for this gift, Your Loyal Fan.

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