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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 10
Breathing was rapidly becoming an issue for both aroused women, and they broke off their kiss reluctantly.
let me love you Bette groaned softly to Tina as her lips travelled down to the blondes delicate neck.
Bette? Tina pleaded breathlessly, Please, I..I want you Tina grabbed Bettes arms, and pulling her forward laid her body on the floor, Bettes body above her. Tina was beyond speech, god she needed her so badly. She felt the ache building inside her, she needed to feel Bette against her, skin to skin. She started to pull at Bettes safari shirt. Off, she growled, I want this off
Bette raised herself up, straddling Tinas hips, and with a seductive smile started to slowly undo her safari shirt, before removing it, and tossing it over her head, to fall on the floor behind her.
Tina reached up behind Bette and unclasped her Bra before practically ripping it from her shoulders, and throwing it to join the now discarded safari shirt on the floor.
Bette smiled wantonly before lowering Tina back to the floor.
Bette lowered herself back down, almost all the way but not quite. She deliberately placed herself so that her right leg was between Tinas legs, her thigh pushing gently against her centre, her nipples fractionally above Tinas, and taking all her weight on her arms, slowly started rocking her body, ensuring that her sensitive, and by now very hard nipples were touching the very tip of Tinas. At the first feel of their nipples touching Tina moaned loudly, and arched her back towards her soon to be lover, aching for a firmer touch.
Tina could hardly bare it. She had locked her self away from the world for 5 years, never letting anyone close either emotionally or physically. Tina believed it was her punishment for what she had done.
But here suddenly she felt alive again, she craved anothers touch, a craving that most certainly had been there since the first moment she had allowed Bette to penetrate her world.
Bette could sense the heightened emotions now coursing through Tina, wellthat and the fact that Tina was writhing almost uncontrollably beneath her. She lowered herself still further until their ***** were moulded together, giving off the most delightful sensations either woman had ever felt.
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(64 votes, average: 4.13 out of 5)
yay finally! lol. excellent as always…
Whew my eyes actually watered at the intensity of that. Wow. Gotta love it. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Holy Mother of God!!!!!! That was…gulp…gorgeous; breathtaking; just plain old, f*#kin HOT!!!!
As I read this I let you take me there. So I read slowly and well it’s almost as if you consum me with your feelings as you wrote this.. It was beautiful. Just as you showed me the land, you showed me their love. Thank you for taking me there I truly enjoyed the tenderness.
Holy fucking shit TB you need to stop kidding when you say you have never written NC-17. Fucking awesome!! Where’s the beast in Tina, she hasn’t had sex in 5 years?? Shit Bette would have been taken down and strip in 15 sec’s flat. Tina needs to become 1 with her intermost lioness.When you bring the beast out there has to be finger nails in the back and marks left everywhere on the bodies. So real funny about your dog, you know they never do anything when they should, just kidding. Scar twins?? for now NO but maybe if I have the plastic surgeon do something. Since I’m not paying for any of this it’s cool with whatever. Damm your story kicks ass, So now I have to wait until Sunday! kinda pissed about that but what can I do?? So when is tina going to start howling at the moon and making midnight kills?. It would of been tight if they used some of the lion’s skin. Or maybe just werid. I loved the idea of tina taking pictures and then painting. ok now I’m just starting to run on, but your story does this to me, and is there drama coming, can’t wait to see where you going, or maybe i should just rub my scar and see if any ideas come into mind? i might post again after i read it a 2nd time which doesn’t happen that often.
amazing chapter, seriously hot. please post soon.
WOW!! That was incredible…I love this story! Cold showers all around!
tb, this was amazing for your first time!!! I’m glad Bette and Tina are feeling things on the same level. Thank you! :)
Oh My that was Great! So this is a two parter?
Megga- WOW! That was crazy intense! I love how almost all of the authors on this site say that their chapters are too long so they split them in half. . .do you think that we care if a chapter is too long? THE LONGER THE BETTER! Hahah, please keep it up. This story is so beautiful and I can’t wait to read more.
“A wimoweh, a-wimoweh a-wimoweh, a wimoweh…”
Bette Porter – good to go on any continent! She shoots, she scores! Yessssssssss!!!!
Whoa! I’m sweating here. that was f**king HOT! Thanks for not making me wait to long and thanks for……..writing this…….whew.
OMFG, that was incredible. Can’t wait for Tina to unleash her inner beast on Bette. Love it!!!!
OMG…WOW. Amazing. First the beauty of Kenya, and now the beauty of their love. WOW…
That was awesome. I just caught up with all your chapters and this is an amazing story. I have been to Zimbabwe, Zaire and Uganda and your story brought me right back to that beautiful country. Thank you.
*THUD* Oh My F*ing God TB !!!! Now That , was absof*ingly Sizzling HOT !!!!!! woooohoooo !! ;))
Another amazingly “HOT” update !!!! :D
Hey where’s the 2nd part ?? Come on now, don’t be such a Tease !!!! ;)hehe
I can’t wait to read the next post !!!
post sooooooooon… pwease pweaty pweaseee =)
Ur writing is so beautiful . I could feel the emotions , the intense love between these two . It was so tender and touching that it moved me to tears :) . I swear B&TEE are made for each other , period !!!!!! :D
Thank you for bringing out that sincerity and intensity thro your writing which goes along with their emotions :D I felt it go straight to my heart . It overwhelms me :)
I LOVE This Story !!!!!! *happy sigh*
* sends u sweet sweet kisses * ;)
Eagerly Awaiting ur Next post Mate . Hurryyyyyyyy !!!! LOL ;))
Gazillion x 100 stars to u all the wayyyyy !!!!! :D
Thanx =)
Unbelievably hot!! If Bette feels vulnerable now how is she going to feel when its Tina’s turn? Look out Bette! Thank you and more soon please. lol
TB that was beautiful and hot..now Tina hasn’t been with anyone for 5 years…oh god, the animal is going to be released from her cage….LUCKY, LUCKY Bette…..
Thank you.
K
WOW, that was so hot, sweet and sexy! Loved the emotions in this chapter. Just love this story. Can’t wait for the next one, hope it’s soon!!!!!
WOW….OMG…. this is definately HOT and also different and yes we want MORE…. it’s Sunday and were are chapters 11 & 12????? MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!!
Damn that was so fucking hot and amazing, love it. Post soon, thanks!
All I can say is, “What the fuck was that!” I was there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!