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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 20
“Yeah, thank god that herd of elephants moved on.” Bette laughed. “Now that was a smell!”
Giraffe, zebras, monkeys, birds, impalas, kudu and even rhino came down to the water while they sat on the ground with held breath and wide eyes.
Tina pointed out the troop of Baboons perched high in the tree tops the other side of the expanse of water, and Bette sat fascinated by the side show they provided. Suddenly, they became agitated. The high pitched sound of their calls carrying easily over the water, and scaring away the young Zebra’s grazing there.
Bette looked at Tina, fear touching her features. “T?” She questioned apprehensively.
“It’s ok.” Tina reassured her as she slowly began collecting their picnic up, putting it back into the hamper. “Look” she said, picking up her binoculars and handing a spare pair to Bette. It was then that they saw her, a lioness emerging from the undergrowth, her head held high in the air, striding proudly and purposefully toward the waters edge, and closer to the two women.
The Women watched mesmerised, until a few seconds ticked by, and then something else emerged through the binoculars that were becoming less and less necessary –she was carrying a tiny cub in her mouth.
“They are relocating” Tina explained. “Something must have disturbed their Den so she is finding a new one”
“How do you know?” Asked Bette curiously
“She wouldn’t be carrying her cub unless she was finding a new home for them.”
As the Lion got closer and closer, Bette got more nervous. “Don’t you think we should take cover?” She asked.
“No.” Replied Tina firmly. “We are sat upwind from them, so she won’t smell our scent.” She explained. “We will attract far more attention by moving.”
The lioness passed by nonchalantly a mere 20 feet away, turned into the bush disappearing amongst the dense undergrowth to deposit her cub, before looping around again to collect a second cub and repeated the whole amazing spectacle. Bette couldn’t help the shiver of fear she felt when her eyes focused on the oversized powerful paws, as they padded across the soft grass.
As the Lioness disappeared from view once again, Tina gently took Bette’s hand in her own and led her back to the relative safety of their make shift home, knowing that if this mother was part of a pride there were more of them nearby.
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brb — YYYIIIPPPEEE!!!! im first i hope
“THUD” Holy Crap what a way 2 leave us!!! Now there is no other choice but 2 wait until I think u said Saturday, hmmmmm oh well, I’m ah waiting!!!!
OMG!!!!I have so many comments I need to breath before I say them BRB
Oh right, leave us with a cliff hanger then tell us you wont be back until Sunday……very unfair Ms tbsaver!!
Hhhmmmm……I can just imagine being on that picnic withe them and all those fabulous animals…..one day I’ll do that myself!
tb honey, if the shoe fits then you must wear it. and you mustnt hide. whatever for. sure did miss you. i needed a one nighter, thank you very much. ;)) this was beautiful. loved your analogy, about the theater. CROO any room up there in that beautiful napa valley for a guest. havent been to my old stomping grounds in quite a while. OT – i love your writing, as you already know. had to tell you again. its seems so beautiful but dangerous all at the same time, which is intoxicating. would you really be my guide. it would be a trip. post soon, girl. glad your refreshed, im not,
OMG! And we have to wait until SUNDAY? Damn! Just shoot me now! LOL! Great chapter! Guess I’ll be anxiously awaiting Sunday.
ROTFLMFAO!!!!! The rhino, haha ok let me pace myself I just can’t stop laughing. Ok let me start off by saying have you ever been in a bar or club, and some ugly person wants you????
Hmm, That’s want I see when I think about the rhino. OH and the rhino is so a lesbian! and I might say it has good taste. WTF I know tina has some darts in the land rover, first of all the fucking rhino is running at the front of the truck, worst place to have damage too. So tina as her cool ass safari gudie self need to pull out the dart gun and pop that rhino in the ass!!
I think bette needs a pair of depends right about now LOL
OK this is my question for TB?? so they have be out on the plain lands and that stuff right?? So there having sex, so how are they umm how are they showering or taking baths?? cause I know those lake thing are not clean and theres crocs and gators?? Well if you ask me it fucking nasty. But I also don’t go camping cause I think it’s dirty.
What? You can’t just stop there. No fair.
ok I’m back, let me start out by saying I’m sorry I said something about ugly people which in general I was talking aobut myself lol
Ok everyone is welcome to my house, you have a couple of choices you can sleep on the floor or on the lazyboys or in my bed with me lmao. Cause you don’t want to know what happen to the couch.
So albees pack your shit up and stop by.
YOU’RE MAKING US WAIT! NOOOOOOO! PLEASE POST SOON!
HI!!!! Sorry it took me only twenty chapters to comment. :( I’ve been following the story though. :D Two more days before your next update, what to do…good thing I’ll be working LONG hours the whole weekend. Great update/chapter as usual, looking forward to your next post!! Don’t hide for too long.
So I guess there is going to be a sleepover at CR00’s house. Let’s get going. Great chapter and my stomach hurts from laughing. That Rhino was wanting a little action and wasn’t happy. See ya here on Sunday.
Human or animal, do EVER mess with a woman when she thinks she’s being sexy! Beauty is only skin deep, and in this case the Rhino might find it’s only as deep as Land Rover metal. I hope that Tina’s quick actions take them out of harms way. This is truly “live” theater.
It may be beautiful, but it’s called ‘wildlife’ for a reason. Great chapter.
K
Well damn. I hope they are ok. Can’t wait til Sunday.
Bette is made for the city !!!!!!!! nice post
Oh man you can’t leave us like this, please post soon, thanks. Glad to catch up with your story!
OMG!!!! Ok its Sunday we need to know what is going to happen!!!!!
The last 4 chapters have been terrific as always.
PLEASE post soon. Thanks
Wow talk about terrifying! It’s awesome that B&T get to experience all of these things firsthand, but it’s also extremely frightening!
“Yeah, thank god that herd of elephants moved on.” Bette laughed. “Now that was a smell!”
I can totally vouch for that lol Worst circus experience ever! Haha
I need to breath, What in the world. Just get then out of there. Poor Bette just peeed her pants. thanks