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Abyss 3
**Tina enters the kitchen**
uuuuuuggggggggghhhhhhh, Bette, It stinks in here. Don’t you smell that? Is it the litter box or the trash? Have you scooped the box or emptied the trash?
Well no, no I haven’t. I thought you were going to take care of that while I am still recovering from surgery.
Aaaarrrrggghhh. Fine. You do know that I have a student this morning for a private photography lesson. She’ll be here in 20 minutes, can you help me out here.
Uuuuhhhhh, OK. Do you want me to light a scented candle?
Do something, open the window; light a candle or something.
Fine, I’ll do that. If you take the trash bag from the can, I’ll take it out.
**Tina’s thinking to herself**
Well that didn’t go very well, now did it? How can I expect her to want to talk to me, much less live with me for all of her days if I emerge as a tyrant first thing in the morning. I am going to say something to her to make it better; but what? What can I say that will open the door to a productive discussion; a rejuvenating discussion? When she comes back inside, I’ll just ask her to sit with me; to talk with me over a nice dinner tonight and remind her that I still love her and need her.
**Bette returns from taking the trash out**
Uh Bette?
Yes?
Uumm, did you have breakfast yet? Damn, I am such a chicken shit. Why didn’t I ask her to dinner like I planned not two minutes ago? We have been together so many years, why can’t I just ask her, tell her, plead with her to talk to me; to help me fix this.
Uh, No.
Would you like some?
No thanks.
Well, you really should eat something? You have to eat well while you’re still recovering.
No, thank you. I don’t want anything.
**Bette begins to walk away**
As she’s walking away, I ask – are you sure? I can cook for you or get you some cereal.
**Bette begins to ascend the stairs without looking back**
She repeats no thank you. I’m not hungry. Have a good class, I’ll be upstairs if you need anything.
Well that was a joke, wow, I really messed that up this morning. We can’t start many more days like this. There is no feeling, no nothing. It’s almost like she expects me to be bitchy; like she’s given up on me and on us. I guess she should expect me to be bitchy; I am so struggling with my attitude right now. I used to be able to blame her because she didn’t have the sunniest of dispositions to say the least. Now, the tables are turned. She doesn’t deserve the way I’ve been treating her. Damn, what do I do now? Looks like I have more questions than I have answers.
I have no idea what to do. I’ll talk to her later, something has to give. What’s it going to take? I’m losing it here.
**Tina’s student arrives**
Hi – come on in. I’m giving her a smile that I don’t mean. I really want to slam the door in her face and run upstairs; screaming at the top of my lungs and beg Bette, My Bette to help me, save me, and protect me like she used to. Instead, I hear myself say – Let’s get started.
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(18 votes, average: 4.56 out of 5)
WOW… THEY NEED TO TALK… AND FAST…please continue
Three chapters what a treat, the communication is there between Tina and Bette, but the words that are coming out are all wrong. This is going to be hard. Can their relationship be saved? I hope so, but working together and being a couple can be hard on both partners. I hope they can fix their relationship. I’m liking your story. Thank you.
This is really awesome. I hope they start to talk…please keep going!!
—–“Once we start peeling back these layers we may find that we are simply no longer compatible.”—-Or, from what you have written so far, they might find that their similarities totally outweigh the differences. This is great, thanks!
It’s great, keep going.
Okay so talking is not they’re strong point. But what happened, both of them started off the morning wanting the exact same thing, then the exact opposite happens. Wait on second thought that is usually how it goes. Come on they can do it.
more mo more
Great story – please let them talk together – maybe Tina can find Bette’s journal…that should help!
Ok Tina needs to cancel the apointment and talk to Bette…How sad is this, I hope it’s a happy ending but first they need to start comunicating. Post soon I am definetly hooked.
Sounds like Tina needs to provide love and nourishment to Bette’s brusied body and hurt soul. And soon. This is very well-written and a pleasure to read.
WOW!!!! i need more. I hope one of the steps up and starts talking soon. Thank you PPS
This is really good! I need more and more, please!