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After All This Time – Chapter 2
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Shane didn’t really know what to say. She was angry with Tina. Who takes someone’s child away? But she also understood that Bette still loved Tina. They belong together even though Tina didn’t saw that right now.
“Bette, don’t give up. Tina is in town. WeHo isn’t that big. Go talk to her. You deserve some answers, B…”
“I know, I know…”
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In the meantime.
When Tina walked away from Bette, tears escaped her eyes. She head Bette whisper ‘bye’. She just kept walking. She couldn’t let Bette in her life again. It was just too painful, knowing she had taken that woman’s daughter away, just to get back at her. She had forgiven Bette for cheating on her 3 years ago but when she left the house with Angelica all she could feel was hurt, betrayal and just plain hate for Bette.
Would Angelica be happier if Bette and she would have raised her? Yes. Would she be safe? Yes. Would she feel loved? Yes.
Tina still couldn’t think of one reason why she left with Angelica. She could have left Bette, but why did she take Angie with her? She had hurt Bette enough for going back to men and then on top of that she also took her daughter away… She felt like a monster. A heartless creature. She had hurt Bette so much and she knew it. Bette didn’t deserve this…
It wasn’t as if Angelica was better off now. Her daughter had told her she didn’t feel like she was really ‘home’ with Henry and her. She told her mother that it felt like Henry treated her brothers different then her. It was true. Henry did a lot more for his own flesh and blood then for Tina’s daughter. Tina didn’t really understand that because she treated Mickey no different from the other three children.
Tina sighed and folded her arms over her chest.
She had missed Bette so much the past 5 years. In the first 6 months after she had left, she didn’t miss her. She thought about her but with bitterness and hate.
Then the pain and hurt slowly faded away. After a year and a half, she began thinking about Bette with love again.
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Great update. Can hardly wait to see where this goes. Thanks for the update.
Another great chapter to a new story look forward to the next installment.
Great start, can’t wait to see where this goes.
Great start on this story, hopefully they can really talk it out and eventually start on the road to recovery and perhaps getting back together? Please post soon (I mean reeeeeeally soon )
The story is great for it’s idea! If there was a sixth star it would be my choice for the story. The problem is that I don’t like how weak is Bette or how could you have Alice talk about Bette like this. It’s nothing to do with Alice. Now I can be accused for not knowing how to love completely, but you have to earn my forgiveness. It’s just how I live my life and I expect from myself what I expect from others (probably I am more demanding with me). I said all this because wanting someone back after taking away my child and leaving with someone else (man or woman, I don’t give a fly. It wouldn’t be easier if Tina had left with Helena), no matter how much I loved them I wouldn’t take them back in a blink of an eye. No matter how shitty Tina’s life have been with Henry I don’t know how this has anything to do with Bette. Bette’s main focus should be Angelica and not Tina. So, althought you have a great story, I don’t like the way the characters react. And since I’m a bit angry with your characters, my choice for the stars would be minus if I had the choice. But because you don’t like less than four to your stories, I won’t touch the rating. But I said to you before, remove the choice from your list or take the rating like a big girl. Anyway, I guess it’s your story and your characters and I want to see where you are taking them so don’t be mad because of my comment, I have the right to tell my opinion!
another good chapter, can’t wait to see what the conversation between Bette and TIna brings out!
If I were in your shoes I wouldn’t pay much attention to theo’s comment. She is more mad with me than with your story! ;)But I’m with her for the rating part. If you don’t like the rating being less than four stars you can remove them. As for the characters, I don’t know if I like the fact that Bette has no pride left. She acts like a lost puppy. Don’t get me wrong, I would be the same devastating mess if I was her, but I believe that I would have some pride left to at least not show it that much. And since I don’t like Alice much, you can understand that telling all these shits about Bette to someone who hurt Bette so much is not my favourite part.
hey love the story but I must admit I am glad they did not go this route in the show…that could have been a show stopper for me..anyway can’t wait for this next disucssion
Enjoyed the update.
Loving the story. I’m mad with Tina because she didn’t forget Bette, but decided to stay with Henry all of these years. I want Bette strong to deal with Tina’s back and the first question that Tina needs to answer is that Angelica is not Henry’s daughter; to give Bette some hope! Please, update soon
You just keep getting better and better; while sad the story rings true
Bette-don´t.Forgette her.
This is so good and love it, now let they talk and work thing out. Please post more, thanks!
i do love your story but, i have to agree w/ theotlv and lizmar, bette seems to lost all her pride after tina left her. and i dont’ expect her reaction upon seeing tina who took her daughter away from her. and alice, i can’t believed she reveal bette’s life for five years…. I just felt like it’s so out of character for alice to go behind bette….But i do love this story…please continue.