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After All This Time – Chapter 2
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First thing she missed was her smile. She missed that smile so much. It could light up a whole room. Every time she looked at her fiancé, at that time, she couldn’t deny she found Bette more beautiful, inside and out.
Bette was tall and slender. Henry had gained a lot of weight and on the edge of getting fat.
Bette had the most beautiful and soft face. Those eyes, soft lips that could do wonders, soft cheeks… Henry had a beard and pimples and was always rough when he kissed her… Horrible.
Bette could always make her feel better when she had a bad day. Just with a hug, a little kiss, a joke… she could let Tina feel so loved and like no troubles, she had mattered because she was with Bette. Henry just left her alone when she didn’t feel good. He couldn’t deal with all the emotions. Bull shit. He was her husband, that was what he was supposed to do.
Tina figured that her constant comparing of Bette and Henry, had caused her divorce for the biggest part. Nobody could compare to Bette and she knew it but was she ready to have her back in her life?
Tina stepped in her car and drove to her new house.
For her work, she could choose between NYC and LA. NYC had been a great choice if she didn’t want to see Bette again but she didn’t pick that, no, she chooses LA. In the back of her mind, she knew it was because she craved to see Bette again.
When she had seen that sobbing brown-haired person on the bench, she knew immediately that it was Bette. She would never forget how Bette looked. Never. The brown-haired woman where she had shared seven years of her life with, the best seven years of her life was engraved in her mind. When Bette said her name, she felt goose bumps appearing on her arms. She had missed the sound of Bette’s voice. Strong but yet so fragile. She was sure Bette had seen the scar. When Tina had told she wanted a divorce because she wasn’t happy anymore, Henry had punched her in the face and screamed ‘once a lesbian, always a lesbian. I should have known.’
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Great update. Can hardly wait to see where this goes. Thanks for the update.
Another great chapter to a new story look forward to the next installment.
Great start, can’t wait to see where this goes.
Great start on this story, hopefully they can really talk it out and eventually start on the road to recovery and perhaps getting back together? Please post soon (I mean reeeeeeally soon )
The story is great for it’s idea! If there was a sixth star it would be my choice for the story. The problem is that I don’t like how weak is Bette or how could you have Alice talk about Bette like this. It’s nothing to do with Alice. Now I can be accused for not knowing how to love completely, but you have to earn my forgiveness. It’s just how I live my life and I expect from myself what I expect from others (probably I am more demanding with me). I said all this because wanting someone back after taking away my child and leaving with someone else (man or woman, I don’t give a fly. It wouldn’t be easier if Tina had left with Helena), no matter how much I loved them I wouldn’t take them back in a blink of an eye. No matter how shitty Tina’s life have been with Henry I don’t know how this has anything to do with Bette. Bette’s main focus should be Angelica and not Tina. So, althought you have a great story, I don’t like the way the characters react. And since I’m a bit angry with your characters, my choice for the stars would be minus if I had the choice. But because you don’t like less than four to your stories, I won’t touch the rating. But I said to you before, remove the choice from your list or take the rating like a big girl. Anyway, I guess it’s your story and your characters and I want to see where you are taking them so don’t be mad because of my comment, I have the right to tell my opinion!
another good chapter, can’t wait to see what the conversation between Bette and TIna brings out!
If I were in your shoes I wouldn’t pay much attention to theo’s comment. She is more mad with me than with your story! ;)But I’m with her for the rating part. If you don’t like the rating being less than four stars you can remove them. As for the characters, I don’t know if I like the fact that Bette has no pride left. She acts like a lost puppy. Don’t get me wrong, I would be the same devastating mess if I was her, but I believe that I would have some pride left to at least not show it that much. And since I don’t like Alice much, you can understand that telling all these shits about Bette to someone who hurt Bette so much is not my favourite part.
hey love the story but I must admit I am glad they did not go this route in the show…that could have been a show stopper for me..anyway can’t wait for this next disucssion
Enjoyed the update.
Loving the story. I’m mad with Tina because she didn’t forget Bette, but decided to stay with Henry all of these years. I want Bette strong to deal with Tina’s back and the first question that Tina needs to answer is that Angelica is not Henry’s daughter; to give Bette some hope! Please, update soon
You just keep getting better and better; while sad the story rings true
Bette-don´t.Forgette her.
This is so good and love it, now let they talk and work thing out. Please post more, thanks!
i do love your story but, i have to agree w/ theotlv and lizmar, bette seems to lost all her pride after tina left her. and i dont’ expect her reaction upon seeing tina who took her daughter away from her. and alice, i can’t believed she reveal bette’s life for five years…. I just felt like it’s so out of character for alice to go behind bette….But i do love this story…please continue.