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After the Kiss: Chapter 45 The Gang
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Shane frowns and shakes her head.
Shane – They had to, with this name …
The women chuckle.
Alice – Anyway … I was writing this article …
She points to a table at the corner of the main room with a window view, as well as a view of the front door.
Alice – … sitting right over there at the corner …
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Flashback of The Planet, morning: Alice has long hair and is wearing worn out jeans and a t-shirt. She is seated at the corner table, writing on a notebook and drinking from a coffee cup. She stops to think at times, biting her pen and staring aimlessly at the crowd of women in an out of the café. The camera focuses on the page in front of her. The title of her article is: “TEN CLUES THAT SHE IS GAY!”
Alice’s voice over – “… when all of a sudden this Goddess enters the place … “
Alice’s eyes widen and her jaw drops as she stares at the front door.
Alice’s voice – “She was a stunning brunette …”
The camera focuses on the beautiful woman’s back, as she elegantly walks over to the counter in slow motion. Women turn to stare at her. Others stop dead in their tracks to watch her, as she passes by.
Alice’s voice – “… tall, slim, long curly hair, a body to die for, looking like a million bucks in a fancy and flawlessly pressed Armani white suit over a striped long-sleeved shirt open all the way down to her cleavage. She had these fashionable Dolce & Gabbana sunglasses, Manolo high heels and a Balenciaga purse on her shoulders … You know … the whole shebang!”
The woman makes an order at the counter and turns around in slow motion, taking off her sunglasses and glancing at the crowd. It’s Bette! Women gossip about her in awe of her beauty. The barista girl behind the counter has a big grin on her face.
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The Planet, late morning: The friends are paying attention to Alice as she tells her tale.
Alice – My mouth dropped open! And I was feeling pretty important those days … I had a job! And writing for an LA magazine! I was on my way to becoming the next Christiane Amanpour!
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Awww… What a lovely chapter, what a lovely, heartwarming, well-written love story! Brava, dbff! It’s nice how you reintroduced Dana and neatly tied up this chapter with Bette and Tina’s breakthrough kiss in a restroom many months ago. I’m glad that Tina followed her heart and how she encouraged and offered to help Dana follow her heart too. I’ll say this again, I love your depiction of Tina as a kindhearted, loving, possessive but confident, strong and accomplished woman, the perfect complement to strong, accomplished, charming, possessive, loving, occasionally vulnerable Bette. Your version of Bette and Tina is ten times better, more watchable than that of the show! A thousand times thank you for your talent, imagination and romantic, generous heart, dbff! :D
I’m curious how this will all end but it also makes me sad that this story is coming to end soon. This story–like “Western Skies” and the other TiBette stories in this site–has been my refuge, my haven, my escape from the humdrum of every day life and the harsh, sometimes heartbreaking realities in the world. Guess I’ll just have to reread your stories and the other gems in this site and just wait for you to be inspired again. Thanks again, dbff! :D Have a lovely, productive week! :D
check out a truely brilliant story by author, “BK” called: Remember Who You
The title then switches to: Remember Who You Are for the rest of the chapters. Think Author had missed the “Are” in the title of chapter 1.
If you want to know what happened after Jodi publicly humiliated Bette, and see the mature growth of Tibette, the story of Tina that wasnt revealed in TLW series, this story is a MUST!!!!
I can see why this chapter was supposed to be the last. Things have come full circle.
I’m still smiling: Grandma, the wild one, Kit and the introduction of the girlfriend, the Alice + Bette story, how Dana became part of the family and Tina finally being comfortable to be out in public.
Thank you so much for this cute and entertaining Tibette love story. Great background story that answered some of the questions of the original show.
Can’t wait to read the epilogue – even if it means the end of the story :-)
Very nice! Glad you are adding an Epilogue!
Thanks for posting look forward to the next
SG
Hi! Thank you for the chapter!
I forgot to mention i’m glad that you introduced Tina family (and yeah, Granma is bomb:)). Because if i remember correctly she was only one from main cast TLW about which family we knew absolutely nothing ( interrogation tapes it’s not canon for me)
So, waiting for epilog than.
Lovely story….full circle from Tina’s first kiss to first public kiss. I love the introduction of Dana tieing the beginning to the end. I love Bette’s persistence and her gentility as she pursued Tina, only to be snared by Tina for the capture. I love Meg as Tina’s best friend. Too bad that Meg and Brad are moving to Portland soon, but I’m sure they will be present for Bette and Tina’s commitment ceremony. I’m sure Tina’s parents will be there as well with Grandma too.
This is a very nice story….and I would love for you to present some more. I have read Western Skys and I love that one too…. Waiting for the epilogue on this one and feel that you will be presenting us with more at some point in the future….Thank you
I agree with alle the previous comments!
I truly enjoyed this story!
Looking forward to the epilogue!
Humm ok.. covered all the base I suppose and that a wrap. Thank you.
At the bottom of the last page it reads TBC so I suppose that will happen. I like this story
Thanks, Jane! Check the author’s notes.