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After the storm.. the rainbow ch 09
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The moment “Mr. Noodles” saw John he ran to hide under Dana’s bed and John went there after him
John: (bending ever) hi Mr. noodles I missed you, come here (taking him to a huge hug)
Mr. noodle purred with fear
John: do you wanna play? (Squeezing him) Let’s play on the shower
Meanwhile the gang was on the living room laughing and talking about Tina’s birthday
vacation for her and Bette
Shane: I don’t know Al, Eve is too small yet, to either travel with them or
stay without Bette
Carmen: yeah is a good idea but we have to talk to them first
Shane: Al, do you never learn?
Dana: talking in never learn, where’s John?
In the bathroom john was trying to play with Mr. noodles when
John: playing aunt Alice Mr. noodles needed a bath
John: bathing Mr. noodles aunt Alice he is screaming cuz he is having fun (smiling)
When
Mr. noodles started to run mewing like crazy passing by the living room to
the kitchen to hide behind the freezer getting everybody’s attention
Dana: what happened?
Shane: (smiling) I think he question is, what John did?
Dana didn’t know whom she would assist first, her poor cat or her hysteric
girlfriend. At first she started to run towards the kitchen once Shane and
Carmen probably went after
Dana: Where all this bubbles came from?
Shane: Carmen flushed the toilet then the bubbles grew higher
Dana: And why there were bubbles there?
Carmen: (showing the empty shampoo bottles) our little angel was giving a
bath in someone
Shane: (trying not to laugh) it was the more expensive bath I have
seen. Those shampoo costs U$ 25 per bottle
Dana: In the toilet? Who was taking a (suddenly understanding and screaming) MR NOODLLES sweetty mama is coming
it.
Dana: (ignoring Alice) We need to find him he must be freezing
Shane: calm down everyone, Carmen baby take care of John, bath him and put new and dry cloths on him before he gets a flu and we all know someone who will not be happy with that. Alice wait for Carmen to finish and take a shower too and go get some rest please and Dana? You come with me let’s go find him and take him to a real bath. It’s easy. It’s just to follow the bubbles footprint(smiling)
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okay so laughing so much at a cat’s discomfort isn’t nice right ? alice is okay to mock but it really isn’t nice to laugh at a cat being tortured — even if it by a kid that is as cute as bette/tina. you are so f — ing good pan !!!
that was funny… I hope you had as much fun writing it than we have reading it… so you post soon again. thanks
I love your story, it’s so nice to be able to laugh (LMAO) between all the drama that’s going on on the ff-board!!
Okay, since my room mate took forever in the bathroom, I got to read it before bedtime. That was hilarious, great update, absolutely worth waiting for. Now I have to go to bed… only 5 hours before I have to get up. Great update, poor cat… lol 5 stars coming your way. ;)
John is hysterical :-) I love this story. Sounds like Alice bought John a puppy?!?!?!?!? Am I right?
So funny,couldn’t stop laughing, Poor Alice is going to be in so much trouble with Bette, for brining a puppy home> Post a new chapter soon.
someone’s in trouble….LOL
That was hilarious. That poor cat! I thought for sure John was going to kill him. LOL. Al is in SO much trouble. Thanks..love the story.
This chapter is so funny and poor the cat, now the dog and someone is in trouble lol. Ok post soon please, thanks!
very funny! bette is going to kill al and still lovin you and thank no fire this time!!!!!!
OMG….i haven’t laughed this hard in awhile. That poor cat…Alice and John are a hoot together. Can’t wait for the next part.
pandora..that was fucking hilarious! Thank you! post soon
Soooo funny cant wait for Bette’s response
BETTE IS GOING TO KICK HER ASS… buying john a puppy… love this story… brings back so many memories… ok lets see bette’s reaction… bring it on baby
john is so funny and that puppy is going to be in some serious trouble and his name is J O H N.
another great update
Oh my God, John is 3 kids rolled into one.And what an imagination, he thinks of everything that he does not need to and so damned funny. Just hilarious. Boy, Bette and Tina have their hands full. Poor Alice with a dog. Bette is gonna kill her. Thanks for the post.
Hey pandora007…I have just been catching up on your story and what a great one :o)) This is so funny, sweet and adorable – I just love this little family including John…what not to love about him lmao. I can’t wait to see Bettes reaction to the puppy….