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After the storm.. the rainbow ch 16
Bette: ok Peggy but I can’t promise anything
Peggy: thank you my darling, and have a great Christmas evening with your family and call me if you need anything
Bette: thanks Peggy I wish you the same
Bette ended the phone call and got up
Bette: baby I will put your sister in the crib please behave and don’t play
too much near the pool ok?
John: yep
Bette went to the bedroom when her cell started to ring again on the chair
and John ran to answer
John: hello Santa?
John didn’t see bushy and he stumbled and almost fell in the ground but
didn’t stop Bette’s cell phone to fall in the pool
John: bushy what you did (starting to cry)
Tina heard John crying and went to see what is going on
Tina: baby
John: mommy (running to Tina’s arms)
Tina: what happened?
John: I was talking to Santa and bushy was in the way and I felt and dropped mamma cell in the pool
Tina: oh baby is ok
John: mamma will be mad (sobbing) and I will be grounded and will not see Santa
Tina: yes your mamma will be mad because you know you shouldn’t play with her cell
John: I know mommy but I thought it was Santa, now she will be mad (crying again)
Tina: baby don’t worry lets do something lets write a letter to Santa and see if he can give to your mamma a cell phone for Christmas
John: mamma said he is busy
Tina: yeah but we can try ok?
John: ok please mommy help me to do the letter
Tina: I will baby let’s go to your room
Tina was helping John when Bette opened the door
Bette: baby did you see my cell phone? I could swear I let on the chair by the pool
Johns tears was coming freely on his cheeks
Tina: Bette calm down, John was talking to Santa in your cell and accidentally he dropped the phone in the pool
Bette: WHAT???
John: im sorry mamma
Bette: you should be
Tina: Bette
Bette: Tina I had a lot of clients phone number in that cell
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(72 votes, average: 4.01 out of 5)
Great chapter P…I loved the part when Bette flipped out on her son….she had a right too…you gotta start somewhere…so…the mystery caller was Tina’s mother…hmmm…I like it…I hope everything works out okay and I hope that Bette’s able to return Peggy’s favor…I smell Drama coming…how about you?….
oh god john now has a bike peolple watch out little boy riding his bike is in effect. and what does tina’s mother want hear her out before u snap tina.
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! santa is real!!!!!!!!!!!!!! stop cheating i want to b 1
I was just going to leave a comment on the previous chapter when I saw you’ve already posted this one.. 3 great chapters in a row.. Now that is one hell of an xmas gift..Oh so the woman is Tina’s mother.. I never would’ve guessed in a thousand years.. I thought it was Kevins wife.. or Helena.Thanks.
Pan..really loved this chapter. Kind of feel bad that Bette flipped out on John about the cell…it was an accident. About Peggy’s favor…that’s just trouble waiting to happen — Helena’s a spoiled brat, who is attracted to Bette. And the mystery caller is Tina’s mom — WOW, didn’t expect that. LOL. I agree with V…BIG DRAMA is coming. Happy holidays….
Great as always ;) Oh my, John on a bike… lol Watch out Alice lol And Tina’s mom, yeah,some drama there, please post really soon
Yeah for SANTA and yeah for another chapter on Christmas Eve :-)I just love that john, but uh oh, a bike. We all do know that bike/car (accidents in general) are the #1 cause of injury to children (i.e., TBI), right? Hope there is no more drama with John. He was already hit by a car.
THIS STORY IS SO CUTE…i love it… i was also womdering who the mystery caller was… so hello grandma… should be very interesting… MERRY CHRISTMAS
mom??? oh shit….thanks for the post…
Great chapter…. and where did you learn to do so much drama…. because for someone that doesn’t love a drama you are doing a great job. I see a lot coming…. thanks
Good chapter. This is sweet and drama is coming and Tina’s mon on the phone. Ok please post soon please, thanks! Merry Christmas!
Hi, great story, I really love it! please post soon!
OKAY Babe — what shall i worry about the most ? peggy or tina’s mum or the new bike for the accident waiting to happen John ? — i’ll start with tina’s mum for now — great chp
I don’t like that Helena is going to be around the gallery…she is trouble, but Bette can handle her I’m sure. Watch out…John an a bike…a dangerous combination LOL. I think Bette was right about John and the cell – he has to learn. Please post soon…