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After the storm.. the rainbow ch 16
Tina: Bette is just a cell phone
Bette: you grounded you will stay here in your room until dinner
Tina: babe its Christmas please
Bette: no he has to learn about responsibilities I don’t wanna raise a spoil child
John: (crying) mamma Santa will give you another phone
Bette: im sorry son but you will stay here
Tina: (to John) is ok baby I will take care of the letter, go to your bed and try to sleep a little (kissing John) I love you
Tina stormed the room without talk to Bette and goes to the kitchen
Kit: what happened?
Tina: john let Bette’s cell fall in the pool and she let him grounded
Kit: oh
Tina; and she didn’t know I already bought a new cell phone for Christmas present for her
Kit: wow she will feel terrible
Tina: it wasn’t suppose to be that way
Kit: I know baby girl, everything will be fine later
Later in the evening everybody was there to celebrate Christmas as a family
Tina: ok guys dinner is ready
They had dinner and laughed and talked and soon were time to open the presents
Tina: ok Shane this year will be your time to lead
Shane: ok is my pleasure let’s start
They all sit near the tree and Shane started to hand over all the presents.
John received a lot of toys and clothes but he was concerned. Shane was almost finishing with the presents only 2 to hand when john came to Tina’s lap with tears in his eyes
Tina: what baby
John: Santa didn’t read the letter mommy
Tina: calm down baby and wait
Shane handed to Bette the present with a little card
“to Bette from Tina John and Eve we love you”
Bette opened the present a brand new Samsung cellular model D500
Bette stood up gave Eve to kit and went to where Tina was with john and put both in a warm embrace
Bette: (to Tina) thank you (kissing her lips)
Tina: is ok (kissing back) merry Christmas I love you
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(72 votes, average: 4.01 out of 5)
Great chapter P…I loved the part when Bette flipped out on her son….she had a right too…you gotta start somewhere…so…the mystery caller was Tina’s mother…hmmm…I like it…I hope everything works out okay and I hope that Bette’s able to return Peggy’s favor…I smell Drama coming…how about you?….
oh god john now has a bike peolple watch out little boy riding his bike is in effect. and what does tina’s mother want hear her out before u snap tina.
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! santa is real!!!!!!!!!!!!!! stop cheating i want to b 1
I was just going to leave a comment on the previous chapter when I saw you’ve already posted this one.. 3 great chapters in a row.. Now that is one hell of an xmas gift..Oh so the woman is Tina’s mother.. I never would’ve guessed in a thousand years.. I thought it was Kevins wife.. or Helena.Thanks.
Pan..really loved this chapter. Kind of feel bad that Bette flipped out on John about the cell…it was an accident. About Peggy’s favor…that’s just trouble waiting to happen — Helena’s a spoiled brat, who is attracted to Bette. And the mystery caller is Tina’s mom — WOW, didn’t expect that. LOL. I agree with V…BIG DRAMA is coming. Happy holidays….
Great as always ;) Oh my, John on a bike… lol Watch out Alice lol And Tina’s mom, yeah,some drama there, please post really soon
Yeah for SANTA and yeah for another chapter on Christmas Eve :-)I just love that john, but uh oh, a bike. We all do know that bike/car (accidents in general) are the #1 cause of injury to children (i.e., TBI), right? Hope there is no more drama with John. He was already hit by a car.
THIS STORY IS SO CUTE…i love it… i was also womdering who the mystery caller was… so hello grandma… should be very interesting… MERRY CHRISTMAS
mom??? oh shit….thanks for the post…
Great chapter…. and where did you learn to do so much drama…. because for someone that doesn’t love a drama you are doing a great job. I see a lot coming…. thanks
Good chapter. This is sweet and drama is coming and Tina’s mon on the phone. Ok please post soon please, thanks! Merry Christmas!
Hi, great story, I really love it! please post soon!
OKAY Babe — what shall i worry about the most ? peggy or tina’s mum or the new bike for the accident waiting to happen John ? — i’ll start with tina’s mum for now — great chp
I don’t like that Helena is going to be around the gallery…she is trouble, but Bette can handle her I’m sure. Watch out…John an a bike…a dangerous combination LOL. I think Bette was right about John and the cell – he has to learn. Please post soon…