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All For Believing – 4
I hear someone moving in out kitchen, if Tina is
here, and so am I, then who could it be? I don’t think its Angelica.. I
try to get out of bed, but I feel a hand grab my wrist lightly..
Bette..
Good morning T..
Where are you going?
I’m going to check the kitchen I think someone’s in the house..
She shuts her eyes and falls back to sleep; I don’t
think she was even awake while she was talking right now.. Since I’m
still fully clothed from last night, I carefully pop my head out of our
room door, I see someone’s shadow, I walk slowly to the kitchen..
Ok little girl, you
need to help me out here a bit, what do your mommies give you in the
morning?? Lets check the fridge, I’m sure we’ll find something there..
I lean into the kitchen wall, a little smile forms on
my face, as I look at Alice holding Angelica with one arm and trying to
open the fridge with the other..
You will find nothing in there; even if you did she’ll refuse to eat it..
Whoa, Bette you scared the ***** out of me.. It’s about time you wake up..
You stayed the night?
No, I just opened my eyes and found myself here, with a baby in my arms..
Al, if there is one advice I can give you as a friend, it will be not to try to joke before you have a cup of coffee..
Are you trying to say Thank you for taking care of our baby and not waking us up when she was crying her lungs out??
How come we didn’t hear her cry??
because..
Alice points to the wireless baby monitor on the
couch with her free hand. I step forward and take Angelica who is so
quiet into my arms and check her diaper, I’m sure it is soaking wet by
now.. But to my surprise it’s not..
Did you…?? I motion to the diaper with my hand..
I had to.. or you would’ve found something to sell for the House Of Wax II producers in your house when you got up..
I laugh lightly, as I look back down at Angelica and kiss her head, I lift my head up again and
see Alice’s eyes directed on something behind me, she nods with her
head as to ask me to turn around, which I do.. I see Tina standing at
the end of the hallway; she sends a fake little smile our way, before
she enters the bathroom..
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(46 votes, average: 3.28 out of 5)
great..if they have faith and love they have everything ..BUT they have to talk and clear their thoughts..cant wait for more thanks :o)oh and Alice could be more funnny?..lol..
okay so your story has me captivated with each post…my only issue is, you post too far and few between!!!!! AND THAT’S NOT NICE!!! WHAT HAS TO BE DONE 4 U 2 POST MORE OFTEN????????
Why my/our/whatever Bette seems so miserable? She didn’t even get a chance to talk to Tina. Must Tina be strong enough to face everything after a complete outburst from Bette?
girl, where have you been? i missed this story and then you present something so sad and captivating at the same time…why two people who love each other can’t talk? but i think i can understand…thanks for the update
Oh my God, what more can I say? I am dizzy…
your story has mad me cry i love it and i hope you keep writing its amazing thankyou
Good chapter. Well they need to talk and work thing out before its get worst. Ok post soon please, thanks!
They love each other but Tina is no where near over the pain that Bette caused her. They need to make the time to talk and work things out. Please post soon.
I believe in them too…and you to give us more of this story very soon. Thanks for the wonderful chapter and I can’t wait to see where you take our girls.
Yes, they need to talk…”Tina, you know I’ll give you whatever you want, anything you want…”, but “Not now, it’s not the right time..”. However, “I believe in us…”. I’m hoping that you will take them/us there, eventually, where they will be able to deal with their pain. You’re doing a great job, Fa6Fa6. Please keep it up.
oooh great chapter. I like this story a lot. It’s sad, but theirs hope. even if it’s the slightest bit. keep writing. I’ll be reading.
okay — that nearly made me cry – gotta go and read the rest of the story but i really liked this — great stuff