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All I Need (chapter 8)
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“I would not.”
“Oh come on, who wouldn’t want twenty hot chicks fighting for their attention.”
Shane walked back into the room carrying a bowl of popcorn, and sat in-between Alice and Dana. “Look at Shane, before she had Carmen her life was just like one of these shows, and I didn’t hear her complaining.”
“Hey, keep me out of this little debate.”
Alice reached over Shane to grab the remote control that was resting on the sofa’s cushion, but before she could get a good grip on it Dana snatched it from her hand, “you are not allowed to pick what we watch until you realize Flavor of Love is not high quality entertainment.”
Alice folded her arms across her chest and fell back onto the couch, “Whatever, I don’t even want to watch TV.” Before Alice could continue to pout her cell phone began to ring.
Dana and Shane turned their heads to look at the blonde, “I can’t believe you have the theme song as your ring tone.” Dana exclaimed.
Alice flashed the two women a large smile as she grabbed her phone and walked into the other room.
“It’s good to see you two getting along.” Shane stated while shoving a handful of popcorn into her mouth
Dana nodded her head “I don’t know how I got through the last five months without her.”
Shane draped her arm around the tennis player, “All that matters is that you guys fought through a lot of bullshit to finally find your way back to this point.”
Dana rested her head on Shane’s shoulder, “You’re right.”
“I’d be careful Dana, if Carmen walks in she might kick your ass for moving in on her woman.” Alice said while walking into the room. “Could one of you give me a ride to Kerry’s place?”
Dana could feel the air being squeezed out of her lungs, but she plastered a large smile on her face, “I got you.”
Dana and Alice grabbed their purses, and hugged Shane goodbye before heading towards Dana’s car. Once inside the vehicle an uneasy silence coated the atmosphere.
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shit. i really dont want kerry to get hurt. im not sure how you’re going to fenagle this one…
damn…that was really emotional. and fantastic. i can feel alice’s pain and dana’s desperation. what a situation. can’t wait to see how it plays out, you’re brilliant!
Ouch, that was pretty painful for all three of them, but still such a great update! Also congratulations on the job, I just hope it doesn’t prevent you from updating anytime soon, lol. Please post soon:)
oh my god how could you stop there?? i hope you will post soon… i’m hooked on the lezbo drama! amazing work!
Excellent chapter, keep it up. Its heartwrenching but addictive. Lets hope your new job doesnt get in the way of your posts – congrats by the way xxx
Great update – can’t wait to see what happens next. Obviously my biggest hope if that Alice & Dana get together again and soon.
ahhhh well this is hard to fathom they were back literally where they started…back in the bathroom!!
cana is right if alice had chose to let go them there would still be some pain and she would still be in love with dana but only eought to then be able to love someone else but alice is holding on to dana without thinking about it she has told dana her true feeling for kerry but she has not told kerry yet she needs to take a break from both of them so she can make up her mind of who she really wants please post soon great update
hey, great update! lots of angst – poor Kerry, i admit i’m starting to like her too… but not as much as Danish! Look forward to the next installment, it’s good that Al and Dana have been able to be honest about their feelings but I hope that they can resolve their issues soon :) congratulations on the new job!
Im really likin the way Danish are openly taking about their feelings with each other.. even when they are both hurting!! I feel a bit sorry for Kerry because deep down i think she knows that Dana is Alices true love, but because she is so in love with Alice herself she will try to bury it within and try to ignore it. Great story! keep it up. Oh and congrats on the new job!!
well, what else can I say than: excellent. that’s what it is. excellent. keep writing. please.
I must say Danish 103, your right that cop was bored, that’s a sh*&%%y excuse to pull someone over (on behalf of my profession I apologize), hope ya didn’t get an outrageous ticket. That’s lame. Congrat’s on the job!! This is my first time writitng ya, I’m one of those too busy ‘silent readers’ love your fic though. Well, my thoughts, I do think Alice needs some time alone as well. I think that Dana should not back down, but be cautious of her actions, they tend to push Alice further away. I hope they at least can have one good sexy night together, but I’ll take what I can get. Thanx for the posts!! Cheers! Aidan.
Lovely work. I’m really interested to see how all this Danish tension will be fixed… and I’m grudgingly becoming somewhat fond of Kerry so it will be heartbreaking either way. Congrats on your job as well! After that hell of a day you deserve it!
That was one bored cop! But one good thing came out of all the crap that happened, you’ve got the job! Congratulation.s :D This chapter was funny. Lol@ the scene where AlShaDane were bickering over Flavor of Love and Alice ‘comparing’ Dana to a puppy. (In some way she does have a point, Dana will be following her like a puppy.) Why is love always that complicated? I can imagine the struggle Alice is going through. I loved the role reversal, Dana dropping the line ‘Then come back to me.’ Can’t wait to see how you will bring back my two fav girls together.
Danish and bathrooms a lethal combination! They love eachother so much but they both need their space right now. I do feel bad for Kerry but I think deep down she knows that she will never get all of Alice’s heart. Great update and congrats on the new job.
Wow … I just read all 8 chapters in one sitting & I’m really enjoying this fic … eagerly anticipating another update … hopefully soon. I loved the line “Is this close enough? Can you feel the pain you caused me from this position, because I can’t get away from it.” Something about it just resonated with me. Keep up the good work.