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All I Need (chapter 8)
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“Why not?”
“Because of you, and the way I feel when you’re around. I’m so confused right now, and I don’t want to say something to her with part of my heart still wrapped up in you.”
“Then come back to me, Alice.”
“You know I can’t do that.”
“You can if you would just trust me again. I promise I won’t let you down.”
“I thought I could trust you in the first place, and look where that got us.”
Dana shook her head as her anger began to grow, “You won’t even give me the chance to show you that I’m capable of standing by you. Don’t I at least deserve that?”
“Please don’t do this.”
“What, tell you that I love you, that she’s not the person you’re suppose to be with, or that somewhere down the road you’re going to realize that you made a huge mistake when you closed the book on us.”
Alice forcefully pushed her chair back and stood up, “You’re the one who turned away from me, Dana. You decided that you couldn’t handle whatever feelings you were having, and you left me for another woman, and somehow it’s my fault we’re not together. That’s bullshit and you know it.” Alice turned her back on Dana and made her way to the bathroom.
Dana watched Alice’s retreating figure before getting up from her chair and following. Swinging the bathroom door open, she found Alice staring into the mirror. “I did walk away from us, but I realized what a huge mistake it was, and now I’m back begging you to let me get close enough to show you how truly sorry I am, but you refuse to let me in.”
Alice stared at Dana’s reflection before turning around to face her, taking a few steps forward, she left only inches between Dana and herself. Grabbing the tennis player’s waist, Alice pulled Dana into her, “Is this close enough? Can you feel the pain you caused me from this position, because I can’t get away from it. Every single day I’m reminded that the person I trusted more than anything in this world threw me to the curve, and every day I have to fight off that urge to lay back down in that grave of depression you buried me in.”
Alice went to push Dana away, but was surprised when the brunette grabbed her arms, “You’re choosing to hold on to that pain.”
“No, I chose to let go, and find somebody else, and I did, so why is it so hard to forget about you.” Alice searched Dana’s eyes for some sort of answer, and when she couldn’t find one, she leaned in and captured the brunette’s lips with hers. The kiss was hungry and painful.
Once Alice’s lips were pressed against hers, Dana took the opportunity to try and express the emotions stirring within her. She tried to make the kiss slow and meaningful, but Alice’s mouth attacked hers with a force driven by her need to forget.
Alice allowed the kiss to last for a few short seconds before she pushed Dana away from her, “I can’t do this.” Alice took a few steps backwards. “Not to myself, not to Kerry, and you.” Tears began to glide down Alice’s cheeks. “I have to go”
Dana tried to grab Alice’s arm as she rushed towards the bathroom door, but the blonde was too fast, so Dana followed her out. When Alice realized Dana was behind her she turned around, “I need to be alone right now, so please allow me that, Dana.”
Dana nodded her head, and watched as Alice walked out of the of The Planet’s doors.
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shit. i really dont want kerry to get hurt. im not sure how you’re going to fenagle this one…
damn…that was really emotional. and fantastic. i can feel alice’s pain and dana’s desperation. what a situation. can’t wait to see how it plays out, you’re brilliant!
Ouch, that was pretty painful for all three of them, but still such a great update! Also congratulations on the job, I just hope it doesn’t prevent you from updating anytime soon, lol. Please post soon:)
oh my god how could you stop there?? i hope you will post soon… i’m hooked on the lezbo drama! amazing work!
Excellent chapter, keep it up. Its heartwrenching but addictive. Lets hope your new job doesnt get in the way of your posts – congrats by the way xxx
Great update – can’t wait to see what happens next. Obviously my biggest hope if that Alice & Dana get together again and soon.
ahhhh well this is hard to fathom they were back literally where they started…back in the bathroom!!
cana is right if alice had chose to let go them there would still be some pain and she would still be in love with dana but only eought to then be able to love someone else but alice is holding on to dana without thinking about it she has told dana her true feeling for kerry but she has not told kerry yet she needs to take a break from both of them so she can make up her mind of who she really wants please post soon great update
hey, great update! lots of angst – poor Kerry, i admit i’m starting to like her too… but not as much as Danish! Look forward to the next installment, it’s good that Al and Dana have been able to be honest about their feelings but I hope that they can resolve their issues soon :) congratulations on the new job!
Im really likin the way Danish are openly taking about their feelings with each other.. even when they are both hurting!! I feel a bit sorry for Kerry because deep down i think she knows that Dana is Alices true love, but because she is so in love with Alice herself she will try to bury it within and try to ignore it. Great story! keep it up. Oh and congrats on the new job!!
well, what else can I say than: excellent. that’s what it is. excellent. keep writing. please.
I must say Danish 103, your right that cop was bored, that’s a sh*&%%y excuse to pull someone over (on behalf of my profession I apologize), hope ya didn’t get an outrageous ticket. That’s lame. Congrat’s on the job!! This is my first time writitng ya, I’m one of those too busy ‘silent readers’ love your fic though. Well, my thoughts, I do think Alice needs some time alone as well. I think that Dana should not back down, but be cautious of her actions, they tend to push Alice further away. I hope they at least can have one good sexy night together, but I’ll take what I can get. Thanx for the posts!! Cheers! Aidan.
Lovely work. I’m really interested to see how all this Danish tension will be fixed… and I’m grudgingly becoming somewhat fond of Kerry so it will be heartbreaking either way. Congrats on your job as well! After that hell of a day you deserve it!
That was one bored cop! But one good thing came out of all the crap that happened, you’ve got the job! Congratulation.s :D This chapter was funny. Lol@ the scene where AlShaDane were bickering over Flavor of Love and Alice ‘comparing’ Dana to a puppy. (In some way she does have a point, Dana will be following her like a puppy.) Why is love always that complicated? I can imagine the struggle Alice is going through. I loved the role reversal, Dana dropping the line ‘Then come back to me.’ Can’t wait to see how you will bring back my two fav girls together.
Danish and bathrooms a lethal combination! They love eachother so much but they both need their space right now. I do feel bad for Kerry but I think deep down she knows that she will never get all of Alice’s heart. Great update and congrats on the new job.
Wow … I just read all 8 chapters in one sitting & I’m really enjoying this fic … eagerly anticipating another update … hopefully soon. I loved the line “Is this close enough? Can you feel the pain you caused me from this position, because I can’t get away from it.” Something about it just resonated with me. Keep up the good work.