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All I Need (chapter 8)
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She had successfully fallen in love with another person, but she was still stuck battling her feelings for Dana, and she wasn’t sure that war would ever stop. Drifting into a restless sleep, Alice wondered if she would ever be able to give her whole heart to Kerry, or if Dana would remain the only person who ever received it.
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Dana, Shane, and Jenny sat comfortably in their usual chairs at The Planet. Each woman sipping from a coffee mug and making small talk before the daily grind begun. Every so often Shane would look over at Dana and see the tennis player staring at the entrance to the café.
Clearing her throat Shane gained Dana’s attention, “I take it that you’re waiting for Alice to grace us with her presence.”
Dana began to shake her head no, but knew there was no avoiding Shane’s Yoda like qualities. “Pathetic, right?”
Jenny looked at Dana, “Love has a tendency to make us all look like idiots on occasion, but at least your not stalking her.” The writer smiled and refocused her attention to the pad of paper in front of her.
Shane rolled her eyes at Jenny’s remark, “Please ignore anything that comes out of her mouth, she’s a little too caught up in her own fictional world at the moment to consider her words may hurt somebody’s feelings.”
“She’s being truthful. I probably look like a sad little puppy dog waiting for her owner to come home.”
“Enough with the self loathing shit, Dana. If you want Alice so badly why don’t you do something about it?” Shane said while taking a sip from her drink.
Dana’s eyes moved from Shane to the entrance when she heard Alice’s familiar laugh accompanied by Kerry’s, “That’s why.”
Shane turned around in her seat to see Kerry and Alice approaching the table, shrugging her shoulders she got resituated in her chair.
“Hey guys” Alice greeted her three friends while sitting down. “So where’s Tina and Bette this joyous morning.”
“Probably at some Mommy and Me class, or whatever new baby craze they’ve found.” Shane answered.
Alice caught Dana’s eye for a brief second before the brunette dropped her gaze to the table. Trying to ignore the tug of guilt she felt, she focused on Kerry who had just arrived at the table with two large coffees. Alice smiled and took her drink.
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shit. i really dont want kerry to get hurt. im not sure how you’re going to fenagle this one…
damn…that was really emotional. and fantastic. i can feel alice’s pain and dana’s desperation. what a situation. can’t wait to see how it plays out, you’re brilliant!
Ouch, that was pretty painful for all three of them, but still such a great update! Also congratulations on the job, I just hope it doesn’t prevent you from updating anytime soon, lol. Please post soon:)
oh my god how could you stop there?? i hope you will post soon… i’m hooked on the lezbo drama! amazing work!
Excellent chapter, keep it up. Its heartwrenching but addictive. Lets hope your new job doesnt get in the way of your posts – congrats by the way xxx
Great update – can’t wait to see what happens next. Obviously my biggest hope if that Alice & Dana get together again and soon.
ahhhh well this is hard to fathom they were back literally where they started…back in the bathroom!!
cana is right if alice had chose to let go them there would still be some pain and she would still be in love with dana but only eought to then be able to love someone else but alice is holding on to dana without thinking about it she has told dana her true feeling for kerry but she has not told kerry yet she needs to take a break from both of them so she can make up her mind of who she really wants please post soon great update
hey, great update! lots of angst – poor Kerry, i admit i’m starting to like her too… but not as much as Danish! Look forward to the next installment, it’s good that Al and Dana have been able to be honest about their feelings but I hope that they can resolve their issues soon :) congratulations on the new job!
Im really likin the way Danish are openly taking about their feelings with each other.. even when they are both hurting!! I feel a bit sorry for Kerry because deep down i think she knows that Dana is Alices true love, but because she is so in love with Alice herself she will try to bury it within and try to ignore it. Great story! keep it up. Oh and congrats on the new job!!
well, what else can I say than: excellent. that’s what it is. excellent. keep writing. please.
I must say Danish 103, your right that cop was bored, that’s a sh*&%%y excuse to pull someone over (on behalf of my profession I apologize), hope ya didn’t get an outrageous ticket. That’s lame. Congrat’s on the job!! This is my first time writitng ya, I’m one of those too busy ‘silent readers’ love your fic though. Well, my thoughts, I do think Alice needs some time alone as well. I think that Dana should not back down, but be cautious of her actions, they tend to push Alice further away. I hope they at least can have one good sexy night together, but I’ll take what I can get. Thanx for the posts!! Cheers! Aidan.
Lovely work. I’m really interested to see how all this Danish tension will be fixed… and I’m grudgingly becoming somewhat fond of Kerry so it will be heartbreaking either way. Congrats on your job as well! After that hell of a day you deserve it!
That was one bored cop! But one good thing came out of all the crap that happened, you’ve got the job! Congratulation.s :D This chapter was funny. Lol@ the scene where AlShaDane were bickering over Flavor of Love and Alice ‘comparing’ Dana to a puppy. (In some way she does have a point, Dana will be following her like a puppy.) Why is love always that complicated? I can imagine the struggle Alice is going through. I loved the role reversal, Dana dropping the line ‘Then come back to me.’ Can’t wait to see how you will bring back my two fav girls together.
Danish and bathrooms a lethal combination! They love eachother so much but they both need their space right now. I do feel bad for Kerry but I think deep down she knows that she will never get all of Alice’s heart. Great update and congrats on the new job.
Wow … I just read all 8 chapters in one sitting & I’m really enjoying this fic … eagerly anticipating another update … hopefully soon. I loved the line “Is this close enough? Can you feel the pain you caused me from this position, because I can’t get away from it.” Something about it just resonated with me. Keep up the good work.