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    All Shook Up, Ch. 2

    Story written on October 5, 2005 by Foxfire.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=56957
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    And the world begins to shake…

     

    “You know, Dana – “  Alice began. 

     

    A sudden shaking of the car interrupted whatever profound thing Alice might have to say.  Dana grabbed at the door handle.  “Is something wrong with the Mini?”

     

    “No,” Alice replied back, gripping the wheel so tightly her knuckles began to whiten as the movement increased, causing the Mini to fishtail to the right.

     

    Dana held her breath as she slid across the seat along with the movement of the car.  With a panicked look out the window, she realized that it wasn’t just the Mini shaking; it was the whole world outside, as well.

     

    “*****!” Alice shouted, looking ahead and noticing the highway in front of them cracking apart.  A huge, gaping hole lay within feet in front of them.  Alice desperately jerked the wheel to the right to attempt to avoid it.  The back left tire caught the gap, causing the car to shudder and bouncing the car up, throwing Dana and Alice around in their seats, seatbelts straining.

     

    The Mini left the road at a strange angle with too much speed.  Both women screamed in unison as the little car went airborne off the side of the highway.  In the air the Mini did one nearly complete rotation before hitting the ground awkwardly, bouncing it back into the air and rolling.

     

    Inside the car, Alice and Dana found their lives being literally turned upside down.  As the car rolled over onto her side and kept going, Alice tried to move her left arm but found it was somehow caught awkwardly in the steering wheel.  As the car jolted and continued rolling over, her arm jerked the opposite direction as her body and she heard, rather than felt, a strange crack in the limb.  Alice instantly knew it was broken.  She didn’t feel the pain, however; she was thankfully numb at the moment from shock.

     

    Beside her, Dana was being tossed about like a ragdoll and straining against the seatbelt.  She tried to look over at Alice to check on her, but as she turned her head, a large piece of glass from the windshield came across her cheek and sliced it open.  She winced in pain, letting out a small hiss.  When the car finished another rotation, her head was thrown into what was left of the passenger’s side window.  There was a dull thunk, and then everything went black as Dana’s head lolled limply to the side.

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    3. mahahahah. *evil laughter* right there with ya. but ya shoulda have IC there getting the ride of her life gf. hate earthquakes. lived thru enough of them. thanks.

    8. Dayum the girls got rawked!! Oh man have you ever had to move a fridge – those things weigh a ton. T’s a gonner for sure. Oh the cliffhanges – gotta love ’em with action packed storied like this one. Great writing – can’t wait for the next chapter.

    11. WOW. Not too big tho California hasn’t gone for the island option OR is there more in the pipeline LOL Poor Tina and Ang slept thru it! Nice chapter.

    13. Hey FF,

      Great to see you back and in such fantastic form.

      This story is completely absorbing and I am hooked.

      Please continue real soon as I await your next post.

      A Loyal Fan

      PS – More “Broken” will be fine with me.

    14. wonderful update. i have never seen an earthquake around me but i was scared and imagined what to do for my family or lover in that same emergency reading your story. i believe that all of characters gonna be alright. thanks for another great chapter.

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