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    All Shook Up, Ch. 3

    Story written on October 6, 2005 by Foxfire.
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    As the dust begins to settle…

     

    “Jenny?  Where are you?” she heard Bette’s voice shouting in the distance. 

     

    Jenny stood up quickly, finding two pillows and carefully placing one below Mark’s head and one below his feet.  Wishing she knew more basic first aid, Jenny cast one last worried look at his prone form before grabbing the jack and leaving.  “Hold on, Bette!” she yelled out, sprinting toward the house.


     

     

    Alice shook her head, trying to get the cobwebs out.  Squinting blearily around her, she assessed the situation.  Let’s seeI’m hanging upside down and held in by a flimsy seatbelt, my head dangling inches from what used to be the roof of my car.  My arm’s broken, my ankle hurts, and I don’t know what the ***** to do.  And Dana

     

    “Dana!” Alice gasped out, twisting uncomfortably to look beside her, seeing Dana in the same position but appearing to be unconscious, the ends of her long, dark hair grazing the top of the car as her head hung lifelessly.

     

    Alice tried to reach for her with her good arm, but felt the seatbelt holding her back.  “Stupid ***** seatbelt.  Why did I ever start wearing one?” She remembered then that it was Dana who had convinced her to start wearing her seatbelt over two years ago.  Dana had nagged Alice about it so many times when they were in the car together that eventually it had become habit to automatically put it on before starting the car, whether the brunette was present or not.  In truth, Dana’s persistence had probably helped save her life.

     

    Working her good arm around beneath her, she managed to find the seatbelt release button.  “Oof,” she muttered, hitting the top of the car with a small thud, the seatbelt tangled around one leg.  Frustrated, Alice let out a little growl as she fought with the seatbelt to free herself.  “Piece of *****!” she shouted at the offending seatbelt when she was free. 

     

    Beside her, Dana let out a little moan, her eyes flickering slightly but not opening.  Alice crawled to her and laid a hand on her blood-covered cheek.  “Come on, Dane, wake up,” she pleaded.  “Time to get up, honey.”

     

    Dana let out a small murmur but still didn’t wake up.  Alice managed to maneuver herself around and release Dana’s own seatbelt, attempting to catch her as she fell.  Dana slid out of the seat and fell against Alice’s body, one shoulder smacking against the ceiling of the car and her hand flailing up and poking Alice in the eye.

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    1. Here I thought hurricanes were bad. At least with a Hurricane you know that it is coming your way and you can get out of the way. There is no telling when an earthquake is coming. Love the story. Hopefully all will survive and piece their lives back together again. Keep writing.

    2. Lara died,Tina under a frig.Jenny house is burning,Mark is out cold Alice and Dana is chewed up and spit out and Our Shane and Carmen Lord only Knows. Thanks god it fan/Fic. You are giving our girls hell. Angie slept through the whole thing. Thanks for this.

    4. pressing, firing, hooking, killing(?), dropping… you did a lot. ditto to another. only complaint is you just cut at the most curious point. I love the way you write by the way. thanks, foxfire.

    16. Wow, major drama. Feel bad Lara is gone, Shane/Carmen were not sure, great job of depicting the events of an earthquake especially in southern Ca. Feels like your version of the Northridge quake. Hope our other girls make it through okay.

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