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    All Shook Up, Ch. 3

    Story written on October 6, 2005 by Foxfire.
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    As the dust begins to settle…

     

    “Ow!” Alice nearly dropped Dana from her hold.  “You are so lucky that wasn’t on purpose, Fairbanks,” she murmured, smack carefully at Dana’s unmarred cheek.  “Wake up, Dane!”

     

    Dana stirred.  “Not yet.  Give me a few more minutes,” she muttered softly, then letting out a small cough as smoke went in her mouth.  Alice looked up.  The smoke pouring out from beneath the crumpled hood had become darker and thicker.  She also realized that she smelled what might be gasoline.

     

    Alice would have laughed at Dana’s comment had the situation been different.  “No, it’s wakey wakey time – now!”  She slapped lightly at Dana’s face.

     

    Opening one eye, Dana let out another cough.  “Al, I had the worst dream,” she said, her voice strained.  She opened the other eye and took a look at her surroundings.  “Oh,” she commented dully, realizing it hadn’t been a dream.  Dana struggled to sit up, ignoring the pounding and dizziness in her head.  As she moved to her side, a sharp pain in her ribs caused her to drop back down.

     

    Alice was looking at her with concern.  “Are you okay?  Did you call for help?” Dana asked.

     

    “I’m fine, and no, my cell phone was in the glove compartment,” Alice explained, pointing at the dash.  The door to the compartment was missing, all its contents likely scattered out somewhere on the ground behind them.

     

    Wincing, Dana reached up to the right side of her head where she’d hit it earlier.  Her hair was wet and matted, and when she pulled her hand back, it was red.

     

    Alice grimaced at the sight.  “Dane, we gotta get out of here.”  She tried wiggling her way toward the window, but fell down in pain.  “My arm,” she moaned.  “I think it’s broken.”

     

    There was the sound of shattering glass beside her as Dana determinedly raised her feet up and kicked at the window with all her might.  She cleared away the excess glass with her fists, glass scraping at her knuckles.  “Ready?” she asked Alice.

     

    “You go first, and then help me,” Alice instructed with a nod.

     

    Dana managed to squirm her way through the small opening of the window, a large shard of missed glass digging into and cutting her stomach along the wall.  She pulled herself out onto the grass, her head spinning.  Gritting her teeth, she turned around and reached her hands back through the window opening.  Dana grasped Alice’s outstretched hand with both of hers and slowly began to pull the blonde toward her, being careful not to hurt her arm.  Alice used her feet to propel herself and in moments, she had squirmed her way out of the car and collapsed on top of Dana.

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    1. Here I thought hurricanes were bad. At least with a Hurricane you know that it is coming your way and you can get out of the way. There is no telling when an earthquake is coming. Love the story. Hopefully all will survive and piece their lives back together again. Keep writing.

    2. Lara died,Tina under a frig.Jenny house is burning,Mark is out cold Alice and Dana is chewed up and spit out and Our Shane and Carmen Lord only Knows. Thanks god it fan/Fic. You are giving our girls hell. Angie slept through the whole thing. Thanks for this.

    4. pressing, firing, hooking, killing(?), dropping… you did a lot. ditto to another. only complaint is you just cut at the most curious point. I love the way you write by the way. thanks, foxfire.

    16. Wow, major drama. Feel bad Lara is gone, Shane/Carmen were not sure, great job of depicting the events of an earthquake especially in southern Ca. Feels like your version of the Northridge quake. Hope our other girls make it through okay.

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