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All Shook Up, Ch. 1
The table shook suddenly – not hard, but enough to shake everyone’s cups, sending coffee sloshing out onto the table.
Jenny, her eyes wide, glanced around The Planet. “What was that?”
“Just a tremor, I’m sure,” Bette assured her, wiping a puddle of espresso up with a napkin.
“Like an earthquake?” Jenny asked, looking a little scared.
“Not a real earthquake,” Alice said, waving her hand dismissively.
“Wow,” was all Jenny could say.
“From time to time, they happen. Not that often, though,” Shane told her.
“But doesn’t that mean a bigger earthquake is coming?” Jenny asked her.
Shane shrugged. “Sometimes. I don’t think there’s anything to worry about, Jenny. Contrary to contrary belief and movies, California doesn’t get horrible earthquakes everyday.”
Jenny nervously twirled a straw between her fingers. “I’ve just never really experienced anything like that, you know.”
Tina leaned over and patted her arm sympathetically. “That’s understandable.”
Dana took a sip from her cup before saying, “I agree with Jenny. It’s still kind of scary. I meanwhat if, you know?”
Alice laughed at her. “You dork.”
Glaring at her, Dana mumbled, “Shut up, Alice.”
They were interrupted from continued argument when Kit walked up to their table, cradling Angelica. “Look here, baby girl, it’s your Mama B and Mama T.” Grinning, she kissed the sleeping baby on the forehead before carefully transferring her into Tina’s waiting arms.
Bette glanced up at her sister. “Did she give you any trouble?”
“No more than you do,” Kit answered with a low chuckle. “She was a perfect angel, as usual.”
“Thanks so much for watching her, Kit,” Tina said gratefully.
Kit waved off her thanks. “It was no big deal. Anything for my baby sister and her wife.” She paused and amended her statement. “Well, not anything.”
“Here, have a seat,” Carmen said, pulling an extra chair over and pushing it up to their extra-large table.
Kit smiled at her and sat down, stealing a bite of Bette’s croissant when she thought her sister wasn’t looking.
“I don’t think so,” Bette complained, slapping at Kit’s hand.
“I bet that’s what they were like growing up. You know, taking each other’s stuff while the other’s back was turned.” Alice observed with a smile.
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(37 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
Love where you’re taking it so far. All the couples trying to work it out. Except Jenny of course. What will they do with her?? Send her back to Chicago?
Yeah. Carmen and Shane moving together. That could be very interesting. Go on!
Some people never learn, Helene seems to be one of them. Alice and Dana needs to get together even if just as friends thanks
This is good I like it, let see what’s next. Thanks!
I like! Good to have you back and with a new fic to boot. Please post soon.
hmmmm. waiting.
me likes :D so is broken over? cuz tht was good… but i think i like this one more. it seems happier. for now anyway… lol
“Broken” is still around. I just suffered from a bit of writer’s block. I should have another chapter of it done soon. I also want to do more research. I’m aiming for accuracy
great start. i usually read sharnmen fics but you made me read all of yours. i prefer this, all shook up cuz happier than others. i like gangs with baby, i like dana and alice’s argue and… I love shane and carmen’s new residence.
it’s just awesome. thanks
It’s amazing to me that I like so many fanfiction stories better than the show itself. I loved your Dana and Alice scenes, and for a change, I was interested in reading the other characters’ parts too.
oh oh… i love this story… I love the idea of Shane and Carmen you are putting in my head. I really hope you continue with this story… I want to know all about Shane and Carmen’s new shop/love nest, Bette and Tina’s family, where Alice and Dana are headed. And Jenny too…
that was great..if those spoilers are true i prefer your story..go on please thanks
I LIKE IT… JUST KEEP TINA AWAY FROM THAT BITCH… so shane is moving out of the house …what will jenny do..sell the house…oh and please not to the bitch…. please continue
i like it! as long as u BETTE AND TINA TOGETHER!!!!they’ve been through so much already…waiting for ur next post(“,)
OK I’m on this train I’ll take a one way ticket to the end thanks.
What’s with the earthquake thing. I mean comeon an earthquake in California LOL
Whoa! Another Beautiful Story you got here I Love it Please continue Post soon Thanks!!
Love it…keep it coming lady!