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    All Shook Up, Ch. 3

    Story written on October 6, 2005 by Foxfire.
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    As the dust begins to settle…

     

    As she went to push more of the materials off of Lara, Kit pulled away her hand and noticed blood.  More digging revealed a frightening sight:  a large, jagged piece of wood had pierced through Lara’s back, coming out of her chest.  Blood stained Lara’s clothes completely.

     

    “Oh God,” Kit murmured, dropping down to her knees beside the chef.  Lara’s eyes watched her silently, following her movements.  “Okay, Lara, I have to get you out of here.”  Kit reached toward her, but her hand was stopped as Lara weakly reached up and grabbed her hand.

     

    “It’s too late,” Lara said softly, her voice faint.  As she spoke, she choked a little, blood coming out of her mouth and splattering across her chin as well as onto the front of Kit’s blouse.

     

    “No, it’s not.  I can save you,” Kit protested, her heart in her throat.

     

    A tear escaped Lara’s eye, making its way down her porcelain skin to mingle with the blood on her face.  “Kit, it’s too late,” she repeated, her voice faint.

     

    “It’s not!” Kit objected.

     

    Lara pulled Kit closer to her, squeezing her hand weakly.  “Stay with me, please?”  Her voice was merely a whisper.

     

    Kit let out a small sob.  “Of course,” she managed to say, sitting down beside Lara.

     

    “Do me a favor?” Lara asked softly, choking again and spitting up more blood.  “Tell Dana to be happy.”

     

    Kit smiled through her tears.  “I think she already is.”

     

    “Good.  That’s all I’ve ever really wanted,” Lara replied, closing her eyes tightly for a moment.  “I don’t really feel the pain anymore.  Promise you’ll stay, Kit?”

     

    “I promise,” Kit swore, her eyes watering.  She watched as a small smile graced Lara’s lips and she closed her eyes.  Kit squeezed Lara’s hand, feeling a tiny clasp back.  Stroking the chef’s red hair back away from her pale face, tears cascading down her own dirt-streaked face, Kit began to sing softly:

     

    “Amazing Grace

    How sweet the sound,
    That saved a wretch like me.    “

     

    Lara’s chest was barely moving, her breathing shallow.  Kit clasped her hand tighter but received no response.  Continuing to stroke Lara’s hair, Kit took a deep breath and continued. 

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    1. Here I thought hurricanes were bad. At least with a Hurricane you know that it is coming your way and you can get out of the way. There is no telling when an earthquake is coming. Love the story. Hopefully all will survive and piece their lives back together again. Keep writing.

    2. Lara died,Tina under a frig.Jenny house is burning,Mark is out cold Alice and Dana is chewed up and spit out and Our Shane and Carmen Lord only Knows. Thanks god it fan/Fic. You are giving our girls hell. Angie slept through the whole thing. Thanks for this.

    4. pressing, firing, hooking, killing(?), dropping… you did a lot. ditto to another. only complaint is you just cut at the most curious point. I love the way you write by the way. thanks, foxfire.

    16. Wow, major drama. Feel bad Lara is gone, Shane/Carmen were not sure, great job of depicting the events of an earthquake especially in southern Ca. Feels like your version of the Northridge quake. Hope our other girls make it through okay.

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