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    All Shook Up, Ch. 3

    Story written on October 6, 2005 by Foxfire.
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    As the dust begins to settle…

    Dana grabbed her by the waist and slung Alice’s good arm over her shoulder.  “I’ll help you walk.  Put your weight on me.”

     

    “Like this?” Alice asked, leaning heavily into Dana, pushing all of her weight onto the thin brunette.

     

    “Ah!” Dana yelped, nearly losing her balance.  “Not so much.”

     

    Alice leaned off of her a little, and the two began their slow trip across the grass towards the houses in the distance.  Several minutes later, the limping pair heard a loud explosion behind them, and turned to see a fireball rising into the sky as the Mini blew up.

     

    Sighing, Alice leaned back into Dana.  “And I liked that car, too.  Thank God for insurance.”


     

     

    As the shaking stopped, Kit let out a relieved breath and emerged from beneath the desk.  She was relieved that her office wasn’t too badly damaged, and hoped that the rest of The Planet had fared the same.  She pushed her overturned chair out of the way and hurried to the door, turning the ***** and pushing.  It didn’t budge.

     

    Curiously, Kit checked the lock, locking and unlocking it again to be sure.  Definitely unlocked.  She tried again.  The door wasn’t moving.  She leaned back against it and closed her eyes.  Now what?

     

    Kit pulled back and began hitting and kicking the door with all the strength she had, trying to push it off its frame.  Throwing her body against it, the door splintered slightly and shook against the frame.  After several more tries, the door broke loose suddenly and she fell through it, stumbling.  Catching her balance, she looked up intonothingness.

     

    The Planet was obliterated.  Nothing was left but a few beams here and there and small sections of the foundation, along with huge piles of wreckage.  Her office and the area around it had amazingly escaped relatively unscathed.  Thank goodness she hadn’t had many customers inside. 

     

    Kit inhaled sharply as she thought of those who had been inside, including Lara, Helena, and several other friendly regulars.  “Hello?  Is anyone here?” she shouted, carefully picking her way through the ruins, pushing things out of the way and looking for any survivors. 

     

    As she neared the kitchen area, she heard small sounds coming from beneath a mound of debris.  Her heart racing, Kit stepped over to it and pulled away boards and garbage with her hands, revealing Lara’s pale face, a small trail of blood by her mouth.  “Lara?  My God, girl, are you okay?  Let me get you out of here!”

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    1. Here I thought hurricanes were bad. At least with a Hurricane you know that it is coming your way and you can get out of the way. There is no telling when an earthquake is coming. Love the story. Hopefully all will survive and piece their lives back together again. Keep writing.

    2. Lara died,Tina under a frig.Jenny house is burning,Mark is out cold Alice and Dana is chewed up and spit out and Our Shane and Carmen Lord only Knows. Thanks god it fan/Fic. You are giving our girls hell. Angie slept through the whole thing. Thanks for this.

    4. pressing, firing, hooking, killing(?), dropping… you did a lot. ditto to another. only complaint is you just cut at the most curious point. I love the way you write by the way. thanks, foxfire.

    16. Wow, major drama. Feel bad Lara is gone, Shane/Carmen were not sure, great job of depicting the events of an earthquake especially in southern Ca. Feels like your version of the Northridge quake. Hope our other girls make it through okay.

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