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All the Small Things–Chapter 9
Bette walked to her car and dialed Kit.
“Hey,” Bette greeted, after Kit picked up. “Can you call everybody else? It’s kind of urgent. No, don’t call her. Yes. Call everybody else but her. Thanks, Kit, I appreciate it.”
A few minutes later, Bette pulled up to the Planet and entered. The gang was all there—they made it on Kit’s said-so, but they all looked excited beyond themselves. Alice was practically bouncy. Helena, Dusty, Max, and Shane were giving her interested and meaningful looks. Jenny looked like a kid on Christmas day and on her birthday. Kit kept on wiggling her eyebrows as they sat down in a corner, away from the patrons and the new customers.
“So, Bette P., what do you have in mind?” Shane asked, playing with a straw.
“I was thinking of doing something romantic.” Bette announced.
“Like?” Max said, putting some milk in his coffee.
“Making her dinner. We’ve been surviving on Chinese take-out these past few days, I don’t think I can take it anymore. What do you think?” Bette said, smiling at her idea.
“Dinner?” Alice asked. “So what were you planning to do? Feed her and then give her the biggest shock of her life? Come on, Bette, remember when you took Carly to a yacht?”
“It’s not a shock, Alice,” Helena said. “She must have some idea.” Helena then turned to Bette. “I think you should go for it. By all indications, the feeling seems to be mutual. Someone straight and uninterested wouldn’t scowl the whole morning after your date. I don’t even begin to understand why you need our help with all this. Apparently you figured it all out.”
“I need your help with this because I want it to last,” Bette blurted out, and then she looked around to see if anybody else heard. When she turned back to her friends, they were all smiling. “All of my bad days turn into good ones as soon as I pull up the driveway and see her. I know it sounds crazy and maybe a little foolish, but when she’s out of the house, it feels worse than when Jodi left. I can’t eat without knowing if she ate already. I can’t sleep if she’s still out of the house. And I really can’t stand the thought of someone else being with her.”
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(36 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
Umm, let me see how about next Friday? Duh, post it now!!!! And after their declaration of love it’s gonna need a least a couple more chapters to get through the important stuff! PPS.
Oh I have checked the site plenty of time so far where’s the next freaky chapter :-) Please please down on 2 knees post the the next chapter.
I cant even describe how much I enjoy your story…
I am sad to see this beautiful story end, but excited for Bette and Tina to admit how they feel to one another. Wonderful writing!
The Pallegrino story, oh how I love thu. Post as soon as you could. This is the only story I’m reading on this site becuz I’m able to follow it up becuz you’re not giving me a chance to forget about it..
I’m definitely in the post ASAP camp!
I just caught up and boy, Bette and Tina can really be dense at times. It looks as though they may begin to step closer to girlfriends instead of house mates.
Oh Wow, the next chapter should be very interesting. And I am ready to read it. PPS
I´m not really that good at commenting, but I absolutely love this story – so you´re about to close it down – well at least there´s one more chapter . . bring it . . like NOW
ok ok now I am anxious you should definetly post two chapters for the holiday. :-)
Next post please..Thanks for sharing and I can’t wait for your next story. Now on to keeping the site “in”.
PPS!!!
what kind of question is that??? post soon of course… and lots of final chapters…
Can’t wait for the next.
at last…eat the freakin’ dinner Tina and tell her Bette!!!
blueskies, get your ass together and give another chapter.. such a eman place to end it!!
I don’t think I want to wait long for the rest of this wonderful story. I have enjoyed it from begining to end :)
You better not make me wait too long…I can’t wait to see what happens! PPS:)
Just take the damn package and eat woman! omg these two drive me nuts,lol. but i do think tina should tell better her feeling first so bette would be assured of not making a fool of herself! awesome :)PPS
haha toby4ever, exactly! Tina, shut up and eat it :p
Quickly, blueskies, quickly.
Tina, Tina, Tina….shut up and eat it. What a romantic surprise…and they both have one…Tina’s ready to tell Bette and Bette’s ready to tell Tina. Bring on that last chapter blueskies…I’m ready to read it!
Tina better eat she will need her strenght for what to come. thanks
This is gonna be fun, and surprise coming for you Tina!