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    Almost Heaven 8

    Story written on October 13, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=67167
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    I’m close enough to trip the wire…..

     

     

     

     

    Jenny joined him her arms around him from behind. She was kissing the back of his neck and he was leaning back into her. It made my stomach turn. He was staring at me, what did I look like to him?

     

     

     

     

     

    “See Shay…I told she looks just like you….only older…..not much though….what do you think baby?”

     

     

     

     

    “Babe can you leave us alone…for a little while…”

     

     

     

     

    “But honey…I wanna stay…..plweaaassssse let me stay…..”

     

     

     

     

    “Get the fuck out of here you needy bitch….you are embarrassing me in front of my big sis…….”

     

     

     

     

    “Fine Shay…..but don’t let her talk you into anything……and her either!”

     

     

     

     

     

    Jenny spat at someone as she left the room. I turn and see Carmen just leaning against the wall directly behind me. She wiped the spit from her face and Jenny laughed in approval. Carmen was as unreadable as I have ever seen her. She did not look at me. I was in too much shock to really get down about it.

     

     

     

     

    My brother cleared his throat.

     

     

     

     

     

    “You know….Jenny told me that you loose focus when she’s around. It’s kind of unreal. You are so in love with her…..how do you do it?”

     

     

     

     

    “I……”

     

     

     

     

    “No I don’t want my first question for my sister to be about her……..fucking waste…..anyway……do you know who I am?”

     

     

     

     

    “Shamus…..you are my brother Shamus……”

     

     

     

     

    “That’s right…..and you are my sister…my big sister…..the only blood beside mine…..that’s left……I have been looking for you for a long time…….I thought you where dead…..”

     

     

     

     

    “Shamus…..”

     

     

     

     

    “Shane…..”

     

     

     

     

     

    He crosses the gulf between us and embraces me in a fierce hug. I can smell the soot and scorched fibers of his black t-shirt. The blood on his hands is cracked and flaking….his eyes are so beautiful….his eyes are mine….but rounder….and blue….mine are green……he kisses my cheek one then the other. His sigh is heavy…..he smells like death and tequila.

     

     

     

     

     

    Carmen still has not said a word.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    TBC……

     

     

     

     

    Featured Song: Anarchy by KMFDM

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

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    2. I don’t like Shamus. Maybe it’s from Carmen but I think he is like the bad side of Shane. Like a evil one of Shane even though he didn’t do anything yet. Or did he? Thanks for fast and awesome update.

    4. wow you’re on a roll, updating so frequently. as much as i love this, i am also dreadin the end since you said this is your final piece. anyway, I’m still waitin for more to be revealed, what is carmen’s role in this capture and who’s side is she on. poor thing, jenny has authority over her…interesting

    6. huh…as always, such a well written ride…i’m a bit behind, also not unusual, so i’m going to have to go over some things (reading too fast) but damn, the mood you set, it’s just fantastic. and you know i’m up for anything and everything involving helena, though you always do give us a shane/carmen story to sink our teeth into…as a fellow apocalyp/futurist? writer, i applaud you for taking the genre to new heights with every chapter. incidently, helena’s an anarchist in one of my stories, so i loved that little song toss in. great work:)

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