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Almost Here Chapter 1
‘Come on, Dana. It’s ok. Let’s not create a scene.’
‘But Al He called you names! No one is allowed to call my baby names, especially not in front of me.’
Seeing how protective Dana was over her,
‘I was going to say that if he didn’t keep his mouth shut, I’ll shove my tennis racket into that big mouth of his.’
The couple laughed hysterically as they both mentally conjured up an image of Dana’s
‘Morning, girls.’ A familiar voice greeted them as they entered the gym.
‘Hey Lucia.’ The couple said simultaneously as they spotted Dana’s trainer at the side rolling up exercise mats.
Dana put her training bag down on the floor and turned to face
‘No no I’m not going to the caf today. I’m going to stay here with you! And while you do your weight training, I can work out too!’
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(33 votes, average: 3.91 out of 5)
i love the flashbacks they are so danish! you are a great writer
Well I’m hooked! Great job, I really loved it, and that says a lot for me cos i’m more of a TiBette fic girl. But..good job! please continue!
I agree with Minna, always hope for Danish :D I like the 2nd part a lot, really gives insight into Alice’s reasons, lets hope Dana understands.
I really like it, loved the post-it notes on that lettuce shirt and on the tube that wasn’t the toothpaste (and on the forehead of course!) I never quite get the logic of breaking up with someone so you can stay together in the long run, but I’m sure Alice will convince me (and Dana) in Chapter 2. Great start mud!
Hey my favorite Housefly! Beautifully written, I’m so happy you’ve decided to write. I think I’m gonna start sticking post it notes everywhere and I blame you.
good story , you’re an ecellent writer. I love the post it notes too, so cute!
I said it before and I say it now: although this is full of angst there’s still hope for Danish. Alice clearly loves Dana and it doesn’t matter if you bring them back together or not.. there’s still the possibility to them to be together again. loving this! *5*