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    Almost Here Chapter 1

    Story written on August 9, 2005 by flyingmudpie.
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    Alices packs up her things at Dana’s house. Memories come flooding back.

                6 months. 6 months isn’t a very long time. Yet, within this half a year, the avalanche of emotions Alice had experienced was so overwhelming – nothing, nothing in the past 28 years of her life came even remotely close.

               

    She looked at the bedroom she was in. It was fascinating how every fa&#231ade of their lives had come together, swirled and mixed around, emerging as a hilarious mesh-mash of its two former selves. Just look at Dana’s bedroom. It was still distinctively Dana. Bedsheets neatly tucked in, pillows fluffed up, everything was in order, at the perfect angle, in the right place. Yet, scattered around, you could still see some of the chaos that was Alice. Coffee stains on the bedside table on Alice‘s side of the bed, expertly hidden by old copies of ‘LA magazine’. A napkin from The Planet served as a bookmark for the book she was reading now – David Sedaris’ ‘Dress your family in corduroy and denim’.

               

    Speaking of stains, Dana could be really anal when it came to housekeeping and cleanliness. The last time Alice had dropped a few strands of stir-fried noodles (she was eating with ONE chopstick, the other one clamped between her toes, as a kind of extended limb as she tried to press the ‘volume up’ button on the TV remote) from their favourite Chinese take-away on the carpet, Dana had vacuumed, scrubbed and disinfected the ‘problem spot’ including its surrounding areas within a 20cm vicinity two times over.

               

    ‘It’s not like I dropped Anthrax!’ Alice said in disbelief.

               

                ‘Yeah but did you see how greasy those noodles were? The carpet would have been destroyed!’

               

                ‘Wow. I didn’t know Chinese noodles feed on carpets.’

               

                Alice smiled as she recalled the scene. Dana had shot her the ‘It’s not funny, Al’ look in return.

               

                There were just so many memories. Sighing deeply, Alice stopped in the midst of her packing, sat down on the bed and buried her head in her hands. Why is it always so hard? Time and again, she had made up her mind, only to unpack and return everything to their original state.

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    4. I really like it, loved the post-it notes on that lettuce shirt and on the tube that wasn’t the toothpaste (and on the forehead of course!) I never quite get the logic of breaking up with someone so you can stay together in the long run, but I’m sure Alice will convince me (and Dana) in Chapter 2. Great start mud!

    5. Hey my favorite Housefly! Beautifully written, I’m so happy you’ve decided to write. I think I’m gonna start sticking post it notes everywhere and I blame you.

    7. I said it before and I say it now: although this is full of angst there’s still hope for Danish. Alice clearly loves Dana and it doesn’t matter if you bring them back together or not.. there’s still the possibility to them to be together again. loving this! *5*

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