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    Almost Here Chapter 2

    Story written on September 25, 2005 by flyingmudpie.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=56778
    Author Notes:

    Dana realizes Alice’s insecurities with the help of Shane.

     

                ‘C’mon faster, faster! Move your legs, Dana! And higher! 90 degrees!’

     

                God. My quadriceps feel like they’re going to snap any minute. Dana thought as beads of sweat ran down her neck.

     

                ‘Dana! You’re not lifting your legs! One more minute!’

               

                Dana was just about to use her last ounce of strength to protest at the unwarranted extension of one minute when she heard a familiar voice shouting from across the tennis court.

     

                ‘Come on, Dane! You can do it!’ Alice was waving frantically and wearing her characteristic huge grin.

     

                Dana felt invigorated almost immediately. She began pumping her legs higher and faster, not once taking her eyes off the blonde who had not ceased her shouts of encouragement.

     

                ‘You’re doing grea..OUCH!’ Alice shouted as a tennis ball hit her head from behind.

     

                Dana gasped. She was just about to rush over and check on Alice when the journalist shouted, ‘I’m ok, Dane! Don’t stop!’ as she rubbed the spot on her cranium, wincing. Realizing that it was probably a hint for her to stop her antics, Alice shrugged and gave Dana one last goodbye wave.

     

                ‘Alright I got it, I’ll come in a shorter cheerleading skirt tomorrow!’ the blonde said as her parting shot, directing it to no one in particular, as she exited the court area.

               

                Dana stared longingly at the blonde’s silhouette until she was out of sight.

     

                It was amazing the effects Alice had on her. Ever since the journalist started accompanying Dana for nearly all her trainings, the athlete had shown a marked performance in nearly all aspects of her training, whether it was cardio, weight She even managed to improve on her serve! Somehow, hearing Alice‘s cheers of encouragement, seeing Alice grin and wave each time she looked in her direction, or just knowing that Alice was in the club caf less than 100m away, spurred her on. She wanted to give her best for Alice. Because that was what Alice deserved, nothing but the best.

     

                ‘What’s this?’

     

                ‘What?’ Dana got jolted back into the present.

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    1. Absolutely great story. You hit the characters head on. I hope you don’t wait over a month to post again. This story is too wonderful to let it be forgoten. Looking foward to your next update. Thanks for a well written story. Deb

    6. Haha you’re back! I was planning to drive over to your place and swat you for the delay. But you’re safe now that you’ve posted. Great update, Dana being oblivious and Alice hiding her feelings were spot on. Of course it will never be complete with Yoda. I love the agnst, bring them on!

    8. LMAO, mud-mud! Harrison and the Power Rangers figurine!? Ok, tell me which ranger? Your fic was loooonng overdue, but was definately worth the wait! Just make sure you don’t leave us hanging for much longer, otherwise ‘We’ll need dinosaur power, NOW!’ Yeah, I think I need to burn those figurines, now. Keep up the good work!

    9. Good fan-fic…I definately agree that you are hitting it spot-on with the characters and their behaviour. I hope that you’ll post back soon as I’d LOVE to continue reading your offerings! Thanks

    11. Yay, Joyce is back! Although your story has lots of angst beneath, this chapter was full of sweet Danish. Ally P, Fairy D and penguins were my favourite :). I may not be able to wait another month for next chapter.. *5*

    12. mudpie! not sure how i missed the first chapter- but apparently it’s just as well, i got to read them back to back and avoid withdrawal altogether…i LOVE this tale. you have a wonderful ear for detail and a great sense of humor. thanks for the post!

    13. Finally (I had to go back and read the first one again to remember what my doubts were!) But it was well worth waiting for. You write them really well. And indeed, “Mr P is not a THING”!

    14. Thanks all for your invaluable comments! :)
      debs: Thanks a lot. I’ve heard a lot about your fanfic! Though I haven’t read it yet, it’s right on top of my ‘must-read’ list! I will try to update ASAP.
      rbelinda18: Thanks. I hope Alice and Dana can talk this through too but… ok I shan’t give away anything. Heh. And yes, they are meant to be together! Danish forever!
      charlie5x5: hey charlie! Thanks! Angst? Who said anything about angst? :)
      Atenea73: Thank you. I will try to post soon, I won’t take another month, I promise!
      dananalice: Thanks! Nice nick! Maybe I should change mine to mudpiendanish. Nah, just joking. :)
      layla_gray: Jac! What can I say? I had to post, amidst all those death threats. And you wanna drive over? I’m right here waiting… Just keep your fly-swatter at home. :)
      capesquad: Thanks for your comments! I read the first few chapters of your fic and I must say it’s great!
      Anni_M: My yoda! I loved the penguins too…Well, I guess if you keep on reminding me to write in every e-mail, maybe I’ll be faster! Then again, wasn’t that what you did after Chap 1? LOL
      lenore: Thanks lenore. I think this chapter didn’t really address your doubts much… hope next chapter helps!
      danish_lvr: Thanks alot! :)
      Red: Red-red! You wanna know which ranger? Well, I would say Red Ranger Jason. (Yes I belong to the ancient Might Morphin Power Rangers era) You burning those figurines? Could you leave Yellow Ranger for me? LOL

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