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    Almost Here Chapter 2

    Story written on September 25, 2005 by flyingmudpie.
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    Dana realizes Alice’s insecurities with the help of Shane.

                ‘Oh!’ Dana gasped and gathered up the Post-Its lying around on the bed. ‘ I was making erm some reminder stuff for training! I need to give Lucia a call!’ After which, she rushed out of the room, clutching on to the Post-Its.

     

                ‘Ally P, don’t you think Fairy D’s acting weird?’ Alice pulled up both edges of the wristband and made Ally P shrug her shoulders.

     

                Dana pulled up some distance away from The Planet. Sometimes, it was so difficult to even get a parking lot during peak hours. She gathered up some travel brochures and magazines on the front seat beside her and attempted to get out of the car without dropping any.

     

               ‘Oops!’ A few of the pamphlets slipped out from the untidy pile Dana was holding on to and blew onto the sidewalk.

     

                ‘Well well what do we have here?’ A familiar figure gathered up the loose papers effortlessly and proceeded to look intently at their contents. It was Shane. ‘Mauritius Europe India? You planning on a round-the-world trip, Dane?’ Shane teased with a smirk, making Dana blush slightly.

     

                ‘No I just I don’t know I just thought it would be good to be to include some variety. You know Al She would be more interested in places that are more’ Dana mimed quotation marks with her fingers. ‘exotic. Oh dear!’ In the process of miming, Dana had dropped more brochures onto the sidewalk and was now frantically trying to pick them up.

     

                Shane chuckled at the goofiness of her good friend. Some things just never change, she thought. Even amidst everything that had happened in the past few months; but it was all good. She and Carmen getting together, Bette and Tina reconciling and of course, her two best friends – Alice and Dana, finally realizing that what they had both been looking for right was right beside them all along. Even she didn’t see it coming; but ever since that night at the Chinese restaurant where she caught them exchanging those looks, she realized they were so right for each other. The chemistry between Alice and Dana was palpable all the while, even back when the three of them used to hang out together. Yet, she never attributed it to anything more than being best friends. Now thinking back, they were already like an old married couple, what with all the bickering and all.

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    1. Absolutely great story. You hit the characters head on. I hope you don’t wait over a month to post again. This story is too wonderful to let it be forgoten. Looking foward to your next update. Thanks for a well written story. Deb

    6. Haha you’re back! I was planning to drive over to your place and swat you for the delay. But you’re safe now that you’ve posted. Great update, Dana being oblivious and Alice hiding her feelings were spot on. Of course it will never be complete with Yoda. I love the agnst, bring them on!

    8. LMAO, mud-mud! Harrison and the Power Rangers figurine!? Ok, tell me which ranger? Your fic was loooonng overdue, but was definately worth the wait! Just make sure you don’t leave us hanging for much longer, otherwise ‘We’ll need dinosaur power, NOW!’ Yeah, I think I need to burn those figurines, now. Keep up the good work!

    9. Good fan-fic…I definately agree that you are hitting it spot-on with the characters and their behaviour. I hope that you’ll post back soon as I’d LOVE to continue reading your offerings! Thanks

    11. Yay, Joyce is back! Although your story has lots of angst beneath, this chapter was full of sweet Danish. Ally P, Fairy D and penguins were my favourite :). I may not be able to wait another month for next chapter.. *5*

    12. mudpie! not sure how i missed the first chapter- but apparently it’s just as well, i got to read them back to back and avoid withdrawal altogether…i LOVE this tale. you have a wonderful ear for detail and a great sense of humor. thanks for the post!

    13. Finally (I had to go back and read the first one again to remember what my doubts were!) But it was well worth waiting for. You write them really well. And indeed, “Mr P is not a THING”!

    14. Thanks all for your invaluable comments! :)
      debs: Thanks a lot. I’ve heard a lot about your fanfic! Though I haven’t read it yet, it’s right on top of my ‘must-read’ list! I will try to update ASAP.
      rbelinda18: Thanks. I hope Alice and Dana can talk this through too but… ok I shan’t give away anything. Heh. And yes, they are meant to be together! Danish forever!
      charlie5x5: hey charlie! Thanks! Angst? Who said anything about angst? :)
      Atenea73: Thank you. I will try to post soon, I won’t take another month, I promise!
      dananalice: Thanks! Nice nick! Maybe I should change mine to mudpiendanish. Nah, just joking. :)
      layla_gray: Jac! What can I say? I had to post, amidst all those death threats. And you wanna drive over? I’m right here waiting… Just keep your fly-swatter at home. :)
      capesquad: Thanks for your comments! I read the first few chapters of your fic and I must say it’s great!
      Anni_M: My yoda! I loved the penguins too…Well, I guess if you keep on reminding me to write in every e-mail, maybe I’ll be faster! Then again, wasn’t that what you did after Chap 1? LOL
      lenore: Thanks lenore. I think this chapter didn’t really address your doubts much… hope next chapter helps!
      danish_lvr: Thanks alot! :)
      Red: Red-red! You wanna know which ranger? Well, I would say Red Ranger Jason. (Yes I belong to the ancient Might Morphin Power Rangers era) You burning those figurines? Could you leave Yellow Ranger for me? LOL

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