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Alone part3
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“Yea… so you were checking me out huh?” (Carmen smiled)
“Maybe… but not they way you were checking ME out at the pond” shit…
“Look about that –” (Then a mango hit her on the head) “fuck!!!”
“Sorry!!!! Here goes more!!!” (Carmen grabbed them)
“Are you ok?”
“Yea…” (She said rubbing her head)
“Here are the last ones!!” (Dana said throwing 4 more mangos) “I’m coming down”
“OK…. But be careful Dan-”
“AAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!” (And Dana fell on top of Shane and Carmen)
“Shit Dana!!! what’s with you? always throwing yourself into people” (Shane said standing up and helping Carmen)
“I’m sorry!!”
“I heard that before”
“Ok, ok let’s get moving you too. Back there they are probably eating them self by know”
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(2 Hours later they were all finished eating and were now talking. Dana was sitting next to Lara to the left Jenny was sitting alone and so did Alice to the right, Shane and Carmen were sitting in front of them not that far apart)
“We still haven’t found the pair that was sitting behind us or the woman that looked like a man or Helena”
“Alice is right… but the fact is, we are still lost, guys… We have to figure out a way to get out of here… so any suggestions?”
“I say we rest for today”
“It’s 5pm Alice we still have the light of day”
“For how much longer ‘Dana’, an hour?”
“She’s right baby… here we have a nice spot and in an hour everything will go black and we are not going to be able to see a thing”
“She’s right… we’ll stay here tonight… tomorrow will go find the others and… well I don’t know”
“At least tonight isn’t raining… right Dana?… we were so cold last night… we were holding each other looking for heat… Dana was so cold” (Alice had the puppy dog eyes. Dana did the thing she does with her nose when she’s busted)
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i can ony say loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed it more more more more more.omg its great and shane and carmen ohhhh yaaaa, post soon please.
I love this story, please MORE MORE MOREE !! [[:
And of course…HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! O_o
Only, cuz you begged! LOL, JK. I like the idea of the gang stuck/stranded wihout their cellphones LMAO. Or er…food and water…and Planet Coffee. This chappy feels a bit rushed but I suppose it’s alright. I mean how long exactly would we have had to wait for them to find each other and start a fire? I love it. Now they just need to set the place on fire and get rescued. Or…would they actually build a boat? Holy balls of fire! I really wanna see that! Seriously! I think it would be funny as hell…unless you kill someone. Circa season one, I’d nominate Jenny. But I don’t know right now, they’re all prime except for Dana. I mean, she’s doing all the work here. Maybe they should build a shed for shelter and face/hunt some wild animals, then build a boat. I can already imagine Shane’s hair and in fact all their hair with that salt water. Hmm…what do you think about the women using coconut oil(it’s really gross to make) on their hair and skin? Okay, okay, I’m getting wild but you know survival skills are important… I like it when you beg. :D LOL