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Alone part3
“Wait”
“What?” (Both without breath)
“You didn’t have this T-shirt on the plane”
“No I had my uniform… I had this underneath”
“Oh”
“Why?”
“I just… well you looked sexy with it…”
“So I don’t look sexy now”
“NO…. ok I’m going to stop talking”
“Good idea” (They said laughing and getting back to the kissing)
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(Alice had lots of sticks and she was rubbing them together)
“What are you doing Alice?”
“What does it looks like I’m doing. I’m cold, so I’m trying to make fire”
“That’s not the way to do it… you need lots of wood and make like a little circle. Then you rub the two sticks or whatever. And you are rubbing them all wrong”
“You do it then!!!”
“You two keep trying. I will go look for more wood. Jenny would you come with me?” (Lara asked)
“Yes of course” (They got up and left. Leaving Alice and Dana alone)
“Alice come here, hold this please” (She said giving Alice lots of dried leaves) “Hold them close” (Dana was rubbing two sticks while Alice very close to her holding the leaves. Then in a couple of seconds they got it. They made fire)
“YES!!!”
“FUCK YEA!!!” (They were very happy and didn’t notice they were holding hands. When they did, the broke apart very fast)
“Put some more leaves in it” (Alice did)
“This is great….” (They were very close to each other. Both fell into an uncomfortable silence. Then Dana looked at Alice and Alice did the same. )
“So you and Lara-”
“I heard my name!!!”
“Guys you made it!!!”
“Ha-ha… we did…me and Dana… Dana and me” (They laughed nervously)
“Here it’s the dry wood” (They put it in the fire and it got higher)
“Fuck yea!!!! you guys are the best!!! I can’t believe you guys did this” (Shane said walking back to the familiar zone with Carmen in hand)
“There you are!!! We were starting to get worried” (Lara said)
“Sorry” (Carmen said. They both sat down close to the fire)
“So what did you guys do?” (Alice said with a wicked smile on her face)
“Um… talk. Why?”
“Oh nothing”
“God… look at the stars guys… isn’t it beautiful?” (Jenny said. Everyone looked up except Shane and Carmen that were looking at each other)
“Yea they are” (Carmen said smiling. They stayed like that for a couple of seconds. Then they looked at the guys to find all of them looking at them)
“OMG guys….. That’s so gay…” (Alice said in a sweet voice that made everyone laughed)
“We have to get some rest”
“Yea YODA is right” (Everyone got close and comfortable with each other. Lara, then Dana, then Alice, Jenny, Carmen and then Shane)
“Good night everyone”
“Night”
“Night”
“Yea, yea. Shut up”
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(Shane was half on top of Carmen. Her head on Carmen’s neck)
“I never had a hamster…. But I had a dog…….” (Carmen opened her eyes) “I have a brother, but… I never met him cause, we never grew up together……… My mom put me in foster care when I was 9… but I still love her very much ….” (Carmen smiled and kissed Shane’s forehead and in a few minutes fell asleep)
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please leave comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please
i accept the fact that i have 2 beg lol so yes i’m begging!!!!!!
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(29 votes, average: 3.45 out of 5)
i can ony say loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed it more more more more more.omg its great and shane and carmen ohhhh yaaaa, post soon please.
I love this story, please MORE MORE MOREE !! [[:
And of course…HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! O_o
Only, cuz you begged! LOL, JK. I like the idea of the gang stuck/stranded wihout their cellphones LMAO. Or er…food and water…and Planet Coffee. This chappy feels a bit rushed but I suppose it’s alright. I mean how long exactly would we have had to wait for them to find each other and start a fire? I love it. Now they just need to set the place on fire and get rescued. Or…would they actually build a boat? Holy balls of fire! I really wanna see that! Seriously! I think it would be funny as hell…unless you kill someone. Circa season one, I’d nominate Jenny. But I don’t know right now, they’re all prime except for Dana. I mean, she’s doing all the work here. Maybe they should build a shed for shelter and face/hunt some wild animals, then build a boat. I can already imagine Shane’s hair and in fact all their hair with that salt water. Hmm…what do you think about the women using coconut oil(it’s really gross to make) on their hair and skin? Okay, okay, I’m getting wild but you know survival skills are important… I like it when you beg. :D LOL