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Amicus Curiae
Story written on April 19, 2013 by justkeepswimming.
Without warning, Bette rose from the table and stepped behind the lunch counter. She returned shortly with a ramekin dish full of cherries.
”Show me how you did that,” Bette said as she slid into the booth.
”You want to see how I work my tongue…”
”Yes, please,” Bette replied, her eyes wide.
”Bette…” Tina said her name as a one word admonition – a warning that she should behave.
”Describe it, then,” Bette asked.
”It sounds salacious to describe it,” Tina replied.
”All the more reason to get you to do it,” Bette replied. She nudged the small bowl in Tina’s direction. ”Come on. Show me. Then describe it.”
”You get the cherry. I’ll take the stem,” Tina started. ”It has to be long or it’s impossible to do.”
She pointed to the end of the stem as her explanation continued.
”You can manipulate the end with your tongue because it’s a bit bigger and it…stays hard,” Tina shook her head as she spoke and the flush rose in her cheeks. ”And because the stem has been soaking in its own juices for so long…”
”Cherry juice, no less,” Bette interjected.
”Right. Anyway, it’s been soaking so long the stem is more malleable…it’s easier to curl your tongue around it. You can also make it softer and wetter by stroking your tongue along the length of it.”
She popped it in her mouth and with barely perceptible movement, managed to have a knotted stem emerge in a ridiculously short time frame.
”It’s a trick, it’s got to be a trick,” Bette said. ”You put it in with a knot already…you distracted me with all the ‘soft and wet’ talk.”
”You pick one,” Tina said. ”The one with the longest stem. You eat the cherry and hold the stem out for me.”
Tina repeated the trick, but this time, step by step she showed Bette how she did it. Bette felt warmth spread at the sight of Tina’s tongue protruding, even slightly, as the demonstration proceeded.
Tina placed the third knotted stem on the napkin.
”What else can you do with your tongue?” Bette asked quietly.
”It might be a while before you find out,” Tina replied. ”That’s information best discovered first hand.”
”I can be remarkably patient.”
”I’ll be keeping you busy with research pertaining to the case until the need for patience has passed.”
”I hope so,” Bette said. ”I’m going to be dreaming about this tonight.”
Melvin returned with their lunch, his glasses now perched on his nose as he glanced back and forth between them.
”Don’t you two look like the cats that caught the wayward canaries,” he said. ”I hope Bette isn’t coaxing you into some kind of trouble.”
”I don’t need any help,” Tina kept her eyes trained on Bette. ”I can find trouble on my own.”
And she was pretty sure she just did.
(tbc)
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Just one word: “WOW”!
I wish I could write as well as you. FanFic jealousy.
*swoon* Got to love that sensual TiBette tension. The banter you’ve developed between them is delicious. I would never guess you weren’t involved in law. I guess being involved with an attorney is very educational. Also, I like your version of Melvin so much more the IC’s. PPS
the cats that caught the wayward canaries – I bet !
More, more. PPS
The cherry on top for this Friday seeing an unexpected post from you! If you want to stay anonymous, you have to change the writing style of your comments. :) Anyhow, enjoying your writing under any name. Looking forward to the next update.
Gulp. After Tina’s description and demonstration, I will never look at cherries the same way again…EVER. Your dexterity with words and dialogue is truly marvelous. Almost every line they exchange has a double entendre. Ahhhmazing. I heart every twist and curl of this story so far, jks. Many thanks and please keep up this awesomeness! Have a great, relaxing weekend! Mwah! ;)
I´m going cherry hunting..This Melvin is a treat and your story is just awesome. Thanks for the update.
Amazing as always.Thank you.PPS
i love the dialogue. while a long stem is preferred it’s more challenging to tie a knot with a short stem which i can do. #justsaying
Fabulous as usual
Loving this, thanks
I am *loving* this, whether or not the story’s veered from where it was originally intended. Tina’s lesson in stem-knotting… I think the rating was fine, and a lot of fun to read. Thanks! :)
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Sorry about my last message. My keyboard went crazy on my other laptop.Great post. I love the flirting. These two are both risk takers and they push the flirting to the limit. I wonder how long they can hold out…
un, un, un. I can’t wait to see what else Tina can do with her tongue. PPS
Love it!!
Awwwwww Swimmie, I love you. If you weren’t already married I’d have to find you and beg for a date. That was just WOOOOOWWWWWWWWW! Loved it. Loved your Melvin too, now where is Maxine? Melvin had a great sense of humor as well, …the cats that caught the wayward canaries.” And she didn’t need any help finding trouble as she’d already found it.” I should say. I can hardly wait until those two get their groove on, it’s gonna be way too much to contain. I’ve heard of very talented women being able to tie those cherry stems but have never seen it done. Now I’ve got to go to the store.Loved this chapter, gotta read it again. Have a great weekend.
absolutely amazing, your stories have everything and always make me want to read more. thank you for sharing your talent with us
Sorry meant to say wonderful, stupid auto correct. :) thank you
W default thank you
This is good and fun, love it. Please post more, thanks
The dialogue is wonderful!!