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Amicus Curiae
Story written on April 19, 2013 by justkeepswimming.
”Make it beautiful?”
”Yes, Daddy,” Bette smiled. ”Two straws. No whipping cream. Don’t try to sneak it in!”
”One scrawny chocolate shake and a double order of breakfast love, coming up. Won’t be but a few minutes.”
Tina smiled as she followed his progress back towards the counter.
”He’s lovely,” Tina said. ”I can see him in you.”
”I’m a quirky black man?”
”You’re confident in his affection for you,” Tina said. ”And that confidence allows you to try anything – knowing you can always come home again if you’re met with a challenge in your journey.”
”He taught me that raising children secure in a parent’s love is more important than any material thing you can give them.”
”Do you think you’ll pass that lesson on to a child some day?”
”It would be nice to do it from the confines of a legally sanctioned marriage,” Bette replied.
”We’re working on it.”
Melvin returned with a large stainless steel milkshake container, still half full of the rich, creamy ice cream concoction. He also had two parfait glasses filled to the brim, complete with a cherry and a straw each.
”Wow,” Tina exclaimed. ”My mouth is watering in anticipation.”
”Pace yourself,” Melvin warned. ”I’ll get you a refill if you finish these before your meal is done.”
”He will,” Bette confirmed. ”He’s not kidding.”
Tina picked up the cherry, stem and all and popped it in her mouth. Moments later, she slipped the stem from her mouth, having tied a knot in it with her tongue, and placed it on a napkin.
”That is quite a skill,” Bette’s lips pursed over the end of her straw, depositing ice creamy goodness over her tongue in a mini flood of flavour.
”I’m more than just a legal scholar,” Tina said with a grin. ”My hidden talents are some of my best features.”
”You’re teasing again. Is that on purpose?”
”I wouldn’t want you to lose interest simply because we’re working towards a common goal that I can’t be distracted from.”
”Tricks like that will ensure my continued curiosity,” Bette said.
”This really is the best milkshake I’ve ever had,” Tina said.
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Just one word: “WOW”!
I wish I could write as well as you. FanFic jealousy.
*swoon* Got to love that sensual TiBette tension. The banter you’ve developed between them is delicious. I would never guess you weren’t involved in law. I guess being involved with an attorney is very educational. Also, I like your version of Melvin so much more the IC’s. PPS
the cats that caught the wayward canaries – I bet !
More, more. PPS
The cherry on top for this Friday seeing an unexpected post from you! If you want to stay anonymous, you have to change the writing style of your comments. :) Anyhow, enjoying your writing under any name. Looking forward to the next update.
Gulp. After Tina’s description and demonstration, I will never look at cherries the same way again…EVER. Your dexterity with words and dialogue is truly marvelous. Almost every line they exchange has a double entendre. Ahhhmazing. I heart every twist and curl of this story so far, jks. Many thanks and please keep up this awesomeness! Have a great, relaxing weekend! Mwah! ;)
I´m going cherry hunting..This Melvin is a treat and your story is just awesome. Thanks for the update.
Amazing as always.Thank you.PPS
i love the dialogue. while a long stem is preferred it’s more challenging to tie a knot with a short stem which i can do. #justsaying
Fabulous as usual
Loving this, thanks
I am *loving* this, whether or not the story’s veered from where it was originally intended. Tina’s lesson in stem-knotting… I think the rating was fine, and a lot of fun to read. Thanks! :)
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Sorry about my last message. My keyboard went crazy on my other laptop.Great post. I love the flirting. These two are both risk takers and they push the flirting to the limit. I wonder how long they can hold out…
un, un, un. I can’t wait to see what else Tina can do with her tongue. PPS
Love it!!
Awwwwww Swimmie, I love you. If you weren’t already married I’d have to find you and beg for a date. That was just WOOOOOWWWWWWWWW! Loved it. Loved your Melvin too, now where is Maxine? Melvin had a great sense of humor as well, …the cats that caught the wayward canaries.” And she didn’t need any help finding trouble as she’d already found it.” I should say. I can hardly wait until those two get their groove on, it’s gonna be way too much to contain. I’ve heard of very talented women being able to tie those cherry stems but have never seen it done. Now I’ve got to go to the store.Loved this chapter, gotta read it again. Have a great weekend.
absolutely amazing, your stories have everything and always make me want to read more. thank you for sharing your talent with us
Sorry meant to say wonderful, stupid auto correct. :) thank you
W default thank you
This is good and fun, love it. Please post more, thanks
The dialogue is wonderful!!