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And it Started with a Phone Call Chapter 7
Alice, Shane said as she surveyed the damage. Now whyd you have to go and do that
That obviously wasnt what I was trying to do Shane, I wanted you to look at something Alice said.
Well, youve got my attention, what is it you want me to look at? Shane sighed.
Hey guys, why dont you get in, the waters perfect, Tina was leaning on the side of the pool, shading her eyes from the setting sun as she looked toward them.
Never mind, Shane, Ill talk to you later, Alice mumbled. Sorry about the spillage.
I think I will, Tina Shane rose from her lounge chair and walked over to set her bottle on the patio table.
Im going to talk to Bette for a while, Alice said.
Shane pulled off her top and dove in with her shorts and bra on, making her way the length of the pool underwater before coming up to allow for an intake of air. Alice took her beer inside to talk to Bette.
It would appear that you were right to take things slowly with her, Alice stated as she walked into the kitchen.
Well thank you for giving me permission to move at my own pace, Alice, but what are you talking about? Bette was hastening the thawing process of the fish by setting the vacuum-sealed salmon in cold water before getting them on the bar-b-que.
Did you know shes still seeing Eric? Alice asked, as she put her hands on her hips and adopted a sympathetic tone.
Bette paused at this piece of news.
She told you shes still seeing him? She could barely keep the hurt from her voice. She continued to slice the lemon that she had pulled from the crisper of the fridge, keeping her back to Alice.
Hey guys, two healthy and delicious salads, ready for serving, Dana walked into the kitchen and set both salads on the table, along with a loaf of French bread. Just in case anyone wants to carbo load. She said, referencing the bread.
Bette re-established her control over her emotions before turning to face them.
The salmon should be ready for grilling in a few minutes, she began. Im going to go light up the bar-b-que. Grab some plates out of the cupboard and cutlery from the drawer and well get the table set out there, okay?
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(24 votes, average: 4.67 out of 5)
I’m sending in my membership request to the justkeepswimming fanclub. Really enjoying your writing. Also like to add I don’t mind Alice causing trouble because I already know enough good things about Alice to even it out. Thanks!
i´m glad the thuth show up in time..great chapter post soon
hey now. i am not a silent reader. *mumbles* just because i don’t comment all the time and tell you to post again soon doesn’t make me silent. i know others will do the work for me, and seeing as i’m a lazy ass, i quite enjoy that knowledge. besides, if i found anything off about your stories, i would let you in on it, be assured. 99% of the time, your stories are more than fine.
so post again soon. *smirk*
Good chapter. Alice is crazy and she just uh I don’t know what to said about her. Post soon!
Hey JKS, great chapter! Love the pace just the way it is, and Alice is a perfect antagonist for the time being. :)
love the pace.. love the story..please post soon :)
I’m glad you like the comments… because honestly… sometimes it is hard to come up with something original to say. ;-) But then there is the old standard… nice update.
Warm and charming, as always. Thank you ( Bette’s gonna have to be careful though, with those nails ! Tina may have tears in her eyes rather unexpectedly !! )
I disagree with Bette…she doesn’t “have” to tell Alice anything about her personal life.
Nice to see an Alice theory causing it’s usual mischief, however. Also glad to have Bette keep things to minimum-assy and not drive Tina off.
Once again we can always count on Alice for drama.
Wonderful chapter. your moving at a good pace. And sometimes drama is not needed. good job.
I think a story without a designated antagonist is refreshing. Life itself and the process of becoming one will throw enough at them. I’m enjoying the pace you’re setting!
P.S.: more of you “lack of details” sex would be just fine with me.
K
Love it as always. I like your pace. Glad things didn’t get out of hand. Love it.
you actually had me scared for a minute
I’m all smiles. That was a magnificent chapter!
jks, No rush…I actually love the pace. Please continue! Thanks
phew..that was close! yup,love the pace as well..do post soon jks! :)
Hey Fins, I personally like the pace. I like the little things and conversations going on between everyone. Looking forward to the next installment…
I just caught up with all our chapters and thos is a great story. please contine with it.
Nice chapter. Just a bit of drama and a happy ending to it. Now let Bette make up to Tina for being a bit cold. ; )
Phew…close call! If only Alice could engage her brain a little faster and her mouth a little slower!!! Your pace is perfect with is funny, intelligent and well written story. Thank-you.