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And it Started with a Phone Call Chapter 7
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Bette was getting the bar-b-que going when Tina called to her from the pool.
Are you going to have time for a swim before we eat? Tina asked.
I dont think so, Bette replied, pretending to be engrossed in the function of the appliance she was dealing with.
Youre sure I cant help with anything? Tina asked, as she stared at Bette. Anything at all?
I think weve got it all handled, thanks, Bette took a washcloth and placemats from the storage container under the awning and rinsed the washcloth under the outdoor tap to clean the table before setting down the placemats.
Tina sensed a coolness from Bette that she hadnt experienced before, but let it pass thinking she was simply trying to keep things quiet for a while, considering her friends were there.
Dana walked from the sliding doors to the table to set down the dishes and arrange the cutlery. Alice made her way straight to Bette, taking her firmly by the wrist.
I have to talk to you, Alice said.
I get it Alice, Bette said. You dont have to pound me over the head with your discovery.
Just come inside for one minute will you? Alice insisted, as she tugged at Bettes arm, willing her toward the door.
They were soon in the kitchen.
Okay, Bette, spill. Alice said.
What are you talking about now, Bette asked. She was in no mood for games given Alices revelation that Tina was still seeing Eric.
The scratches on Tinas back are from you, arent they? Alice confronted Bette with her theory, deciding she was getting nowhere by trying to coax the truth from her friend.
Well, yes, thats one of the reasons Im upset that she told you shes still seeing Eric, Bette admitted.
She didnt tell me that, Bette, I saw the scratches and thought they were from him, Alice defended her earlier theory. I thought my friend would let me in on it if she was getting some from the new girlie, but apparently I was mistaken, so I went with the obvious alternative of where they could have come from.
Bette breathed a sigh of relief and threw her arms around Alice.
Ive never been so happy to hear one of your theories was wrong, Al, Bettes emotions were really riding high as she hugged her friend.
Whew, man I thought you were going to be angry at me, Alice said returning the hug.
Well, obviously now that I look back, I should have told you, Bette began. She relayed what had transpired after she had gotten off the phone with Alice the previous evening.
I was enjoying basking in the warmth of this new relationship, Bette continued. Its not that I wanted to keep a secret from you, I just wanted to keep it to myself to enjoy it for a while.
Wow, youre already calling it a relationship? Alice was shocked this was the word Bette used to characterize what was transpiring between her and Tina.
Well, nothings official, Bette admitted. But considering how upset I was at the thought of her seeing someone else, Id better broach the subject of exclusivity with her before she decides to go on a date with someone else.
Thats great Bette, Im happy for you Alice truly was thrilled that Bette had found someone she was this enamoured of.
You understand why I didnt say anything, right Alice?
Of course I do, said Alice. Im sorry I jumped to the conclusion I did. And Im even more sorry I made you feel badly about it.
No more secrets? Bette asked.
No more secrets. Alice replied. “And unless you get those claws trimmed, there won’t be secrets from anyone.
They hugged to seal the promise and gathered the food to take out to begin the feast
tbc…
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(24 votes, average: 4.67 out of 5)
I’m sending in my membership request to the justkeepswimming fanclub. Really enjoying your writing. Also like to add I don’t mind Alice causing trouble because I already know enough good things about Alice to even it out. Thanks!
i´m glad the thuth show up in time..great chapter post soon
hey now. i am not a silent reader. *mumbles* just because i don’t comment all the time and tell you to post again soon doesn’t make me silent. i know others will do the work for me, and seeing as i’m a lazy ass, i quite enjoy that knowledge. besides, if i found anything off about your stories, i would let you in on it, be assured. 99% of the time, your stories are more than fine.
so post again soon. *smirk*
Good chapter. Alice is crazy and she just uh I don’t know what to said about her. Post soon!
Hey JKS, great chapter! Love the pace just the way it is, and Alice is a perfect antagonist for the time being. :)
love the pace.. love the story..please post soon :)
I’m glad you like the comments… because honestly… sometimes it is hard to come up with something original to say. ;-) But then there is the old standard… nice update.
Warm and charming, as always. Thank you ( Bette’s gonna have to be careful though, with those nails ! Tina may have tears in her eyes rather unexpectedly !! )
I disagree with Bette…she doesn’t “have” to tell Alice anything about her personal life.
Nice to see an Alice theory causing it’s usual mischief, however. Also glad to have Bette keep things to minimum-assy and not drive Tina off.
Once again we can always count on Alice for drama.
Wonderful chapter. your moving at a good pace. And sometimes drama is not needed. good job.
I think a story without a designated antagonist is refreshing. Life itself and the process of becoming one will throw enough at them. I’m enjoying the pace you’re setting!
P.S.: more of you “lack of details” sex would be just fine with me.
K
Love it as always. I like your pace. Glad things didn’t get out of hand. Love it.
you actually had me scared for a minute
I’m all smiles. That was a magnificent chapter!
jks, No rush…I actually love the pace. Please continue! Thanks
phew..that was close! yup,love the pace as well..do post soon jks! :)
Hey Fins, I personally like the pace. I like the little things and conversations going on between everyone. Looking forward to the next installment…
I just caught up with all our chapters and thos is a great story. please contine with it.
Nice chapter. Just a bit of drama and a happy ending to it. Now let Bette make up to Tina for being a bit cold. ; )
Phew…close call! If only Alice could engage her brain a little faster and her mouth a little slower!!! Your pace is perfect with is funny, intelligent and well written story. Thank-you.