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And it Started With a Phone Call Chapter 8
I dont want you to come to the touch of my hand. Bettes voice was failing her again. I want you to come to the touch of my tongue. She guided Tina to lie down on the couch and encouraged her to relax back as she moved between her legs.
Feel free to tell me what Im doing right Bette smiled as she spoke. The warm air that spilled from Bettes mouth as she spoke almost finished Tina right there.
Please, Bette, you know Im so ready, Tina almost whimpered her request.
Where are the eloquent descriptions that were so plentiful in the car this afternoon? Bette licked of Tinas desire, evident as it was, but kept from giving Tina the release she wanted.
Ill beg if you want me to, Tinas body moved independent of her mind, hopeful of achieving the end that was so near to her.
Bette could no longer resist as she dragged her tongue over Tina, concentrating immediately on the tender flesh that would provide almost immediate satisfaction.
Oh God, Bette, please dont stop Tina moaned between the words of her sentence as she struggled to say it.
Tina clenched Bettes fingers inside her as she came again and again, her body shaking from the tips of her toes through her torso as her eyes remained clenched shut. Her mouth moved in an effort to create words, but none passed her lips. She was muted by the overwhelming feeling of her ***** as it continued to spread through her. Finally the movement of her body stilled, allowing Bette to move up beside her on the couch and take her in a tender kiss that quickly lost all innocence as Tina reached for Bettes mouth with her tongue.
Bette? Tina finally found the strength to speak after they had been kissing for a few minutes.
Yes? Bette stroked Tinas face awaiting what she was about to say.
I dont want to see anyone but you either, Tina said smiling. And I havent wanted to see anyone but you for the last three weeks.
Bette rested her head on Tinas shoulder as she let Tinas words sink in.
I think shes the one, she thought to herself.
tbc
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(37 votes, average: 4.68 out of 5)
Well…that got my heart pumping!!!!
K
Wow, that was totally hot. Very sexy. Just love it. Can’t wait for more.
Look , now I want a gf with a southern accent. That was HOTHOTHOT! Great Chapter swim…
Sexy!
I’d say that Tina is a keeper!!! I need to go take a cold shower now, post soon.
That was truly awesome very sexy and quite a turn on!lol so tho i havnt been commenting i really love this story thanks
Hot damn!!! Great chapter!!!
That was a nice chapter to go to sleep on. I dont think. How the hell am i suppose to go to sleep with thoughts of Bette doing that?? wish i was Tina. lol.Thanks swim.
they are made for each other that for sure…amazing chapter so very fucking HOT!!!..go on please..
I am sorry to hear you have been distracted, I envy the subject of your concourse. What an inspired chapter, you are merciless in your portrayal of lust, how can the reader help but fall in love, with the erotic tender images you paint. An eternal pleasure, thank you.
Is it getting hot in here? Swim, the dialogue between them was so over the top engaging, sexy and full of longing. Excellent chapter! Looking forward to the next one. Thanks so very much for sharing and writing!!
Seahurst couldn’t have said it better… heart pumping! H-O-T HOT!
Have Bette and Tina succumbed to the ‘Moving Van’ syndrome? It seems that Bette Porter is a goner. Well, she lasted all of 3 weeks! Ha! Tina must be this playgirl’s kryptonite!
Thanks for coming back from your ‘distraction’ and posting another chapter of this very entertaining story!
Hey I’m still love your Story keep going it’s really great I love it post soon.
Love this story, it is oh so sweet…..
Wonderfully scripted, Thanks.
is gettin HOT in here~ LOL.. post soon!
Very good! give us more soon.
Hot is the word. Great chapter. post soon.
wow, fantastic
You took us to the edge and back with this one. Lovely story you are telling.
Beautiful and yes Tina is the one and only. Post soon!
So tender and sensual. Look forward to your next post.
got a fan anybody it is hot in here
Yes she is the one. That was Hot!
Very, very nicely done.
Can we have a scene like this in the show? They don’t have to even undress. Your dialogue would have the same effect. Good job.
Yeah, I’m thinkin’ she’s the one, Bette! I love the way these two communicate. Your well chosen dialogue makes these scenes so sexy. I’ll continue to hang on your every word. Thanks!
Wow that was the best love scene I think I have ever read. I am speechless thanks so much.