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And it Started With a Phone Call Chapter 8
Let me rephrase slightly, Tina looked directly into Bettes eyes as she attempted to communicate her wishes in a more succinct fashion. It would arouse me to hear your voice describe how you want me to move my mouth over you, how you want me to move my fingers inside you, to hear you describe how your body is reacting to my touch.
God I love to hear you talk like that, Bette accepted that Tina was not going to let her reach a kiss, but couldnt help trying regardless of her cortical knowledge.
And Id love to hear you talk like that as well, Tina responded, as if concluding her case in front of a jury.
Every touch you honour me with makes me want more of you, Bettes words were delivered with precision. I hope that I give you as much pleasure as you have given me.
What in particular did you find pleasurable? Tina did lean in for a kiss at the end of this question. She was enjoying the repartee, now that Bette was leaning more toward full participation.
Well you know how much I enjoy hearing you talk, Bette began. But I also enjoyed it when you held my arms above my head and teased me with your kisses. It felt like you were exploring me.
And the discoveries I made Tina responded with a smile.
It made me crazy to hear your quiet moan the first time I felt you touch me with your tongue, Bette smiled as Tinas eyes almost imperceptibly rolled back in her head with the recollection as she spoke it. Your hands moved on my hips, continuing to caress as you searched with your mouth.
I didnt expect such softness, Tina tried to compose her continuing response. Youre delicious.
You were tentative at first, Bette placed her hands on Tinas waist as she spoke. But I could tell the moment you stopped feeling the need to be so tentative.
How could you tell, she rested her hands over Bettes and shifted her hips only slightly into her before settling in once again.
I felt you move your tongue inside me, Bette whispered.
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(37 votes, average: 4.68 out of 5)
Well…that got my heart pumping!!!!
K
Wow, that was totally hot. Very sexy. Just love it. Can’t wait for more.
Look , now I want a gf with a southern accent. That was HOTHOTHOT! Great Chapter swim…
Sexy!
I’d say that Tina is a keeper!!! I need to go take a cold shower now, post soon.
That was truly awesome very sexy and quite a turn on!lol so tho i havnt been commenting i really love this story thanks
Hot damn!!! Great chapter!!!
That was a nice chapter to go to sleep on. I dont think. How the hell am i suppose to go to sleep with thoughts of Bette doing that?? wish i was Tina. lol.Thanks swim.
they are made for each other that for sure…amazing chapter so very fucking HOT!!!..go on please..
I am sorry to hear you have been distracted, I envy the subject of your concourse. What an inspired chapter, you are merciless in your portrayal of lust, how can the reader help but fall in love, with the erotic tender images you paint. An eternal pleasure, thank you.
Is it getting hot in here? Swim, the dialogue between them was so over the top engaging, sexy and full of longing. Excellent chapter! Looking forward to the next one. Thanks so very much for sharing and writing!!
Seahurst couldn’t have said it better… heart pumping! H-O-T HOT!
Have Bette and Tina succumbed to the ‘Moving Van’ syndrome? It seems that Bette Porter is a goner. Well, she lasted all of 3 weeks! Ha! Tina must be this playgirl’s kryptonite!
Thanks for coming back from your ‘distraction’ and posting another chapter of this very entertaining story!
Hey I’m still love your Story keep going it’s really great I love it post soon.
Love this story, it is oh so sweet…..
Wonderfully scripted, Thanks.
is gettin HOT in here~ LOL.. post soon!
Very good! give us more soon.
Hot is the word. Great chapter. post soon.
wow, fantastic
You took us to the edge and back with this one. Lovely story you are telling.
Beautiful and yes Tina is the one and only. Post soon!
So tender and sensual. Look forward to your next post.
got a fan anybody it is hot in here
Yes she is the one. That was Hot!
Very, very nicely done.
Can we have a scene like this in the show? They don’t have to even undress. Your dialogue would have the same effect. Good job.
Yeah, I’m thinkin’ she’s the one, Bette! I love the way these two communicate. Your well chosen dialogue makes these scenes so sexy. I’ll continue to hang on your every word. Thanks!
Wow that was the best love scene I think I have ever read. I am speechless thanks so much.