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And Then There Were None, Ch. 6
Seeing her opportunity, Helena also turned and fled as well, hoping that Shane wouldnt shoot her, or that Bette or Tina wouldnt turn around and do so.
Shane also made a break for it, dashing out of the room, running fast enough where she figured none of those crazy ***** could get a bullet in her, no matter how good their aim was.
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Now what? Tina asked worriedly, popping her head up to look around the shower curtain.
Shhh! Bette hissed, pushing Tinas head back down and fixing the curtain.
Tina leaned her head back against the tile wall. Babe, I dont think this is a very good hiding place.
Its better than nothing, Bette pointed out, leaning her head back next to Tinas. Besides, with the door closed, if someone comes in, well hear them and be ready for them.
Tina shrugged. I guess. She turned to Bette. Bette, since it seems that we might not make it out of here alive, I just want you to know I love you.
Bette smiled. I love you, too, Tee. And Im so sorry for hurting you.
Tina smiled back and covered Bettes mouth with her hand. I know, babe. I forgave you a long time ago. She found Bettes hand and held it tightly, clasping it to her chest.
The couple was in one of the upstairs bathrooms, hiding in, of all places, the bathtub. Bette leaned closer to Tina, whispering out of the side of her mouth. Who do you think it is?
Tina made a face. Maybe its neither of them. Either way, I cant really see Shane killing all of us.
Bette nodded decisively, Its Helena.
Tina glanced at her, silently agreeing but not wanting to voice it aloud, for fear that it would cause Bette to take action and try to actually find Helena and confront her. She sighed. Im worried about Shane.
Maybe we should find her, Bette said.
Tina nodded. Yes, but be careful. We might not know Shane as well as we think we do. She stood up, helping Bette to do the same, and they climbed out of the bathtub, guns held high as they hesitantly made their way out of the bathroom.
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Helena gripped her gun tightly and peeked around the corner. There were Bette and Tina, slipping out of the bathroom. Were it not for the situation, Helena might have been slightly amused and suspected them of having a quickie.
Holding her breath and walking as quietly as she possibly could, Helena crept down the hall behind the couple, making sure to keep a safe distance away. She didnt know where they were going to, but she planned to keep them both in her sight.
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(40 votes, average: 3.38 out of 5)
oh shit..this is so good…and i don’t do murder mysteries…i think its like one of the old tv shows…where they all die but they all live in the end… i don’t know…please we need the end…soon
I don’t know if I’m suppose to laugh or be serious. Either way it’s good writing.
CLUE!!!!
“I gotta go now. I’m gonna see Dana.” First fic to make me cry. Well done, damn you!
That first part was so cruel! lol First I screamed out “Noooooo!” then “She’s Alive!!!!” and then…you went and killed her a second time. Evilness, but fun evil. Marina and/or her scary husband!
Who’s the killer, I’m stumpped. WAIT, I know!!!!!!! It’s the bulter, its always the bulter.
shit, i’m getting scared just reading this. very suspenseful. i have no clue who the killer(s)is. i wasn’t sure if this was something i wanted to read but i’m glad i continued. just a guess but maybe tina’s real parents died and the killers are the fake ones. but don’t know why they would want to kill the gang.
This is good. I think the killer is Tim. He is killing all the people that he thinks changed Jenny. I think, I don’t know. Ok, maybe not. Just guessing.
I’m seriously laughing, and not sure if it’s what I’m supposed to be doing…but I’m enjoying it.
Yeah, well, frankly I’m mostly laughing, but I’ve encased reality in a bubble and am really quite enjoying this. I still think it’s Marina, but let’s look at all the mentally unstable characters… Marcus Allenwood’s Whacko Asian Girlfriend, Lacey I Stalked Shane for Several Days… Jenny (well, rule her out – crushed by a boulder)… Marina Suicide Lady… Tonya the Cat Killer, Helena I Am Obsessed with Pregnant Lesbians…
All current flimsy circumstantial evidence/guessing points to Marina and Helena, but I still maintain Colonel Mustard or Melissa Rivers is the Evil Doer![Insert Scary Music Soundtrack]
Helena as “a blood-sucking, puppy-eating monster”. That’s GOLD, baby.
getting better still who is the killer?? please post soon can’t wait to find out
Wait it’s James right? finaly getting back at the lesbians in his life LOL just kidding!!!