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And Then There Were None, Ch. 6
Shes right there, too, Bette admitted again, wishing Helena were wrong.
Tina looked at Helena. What happened to Alice? she asked softly, looking as if she didnt really want to know the answer.
Helena bit her lip and quietly began to explain as Shane leaned over to Bette. Bette, do you know anything about Tinas parents?
Bette gave her a strange look. Im not sure what this has to do with anything.
Humor me, Shane prodded.
Well, they live on their farm in North Carolina. Mrs. Kennard is a retired teacher, and Mr. Kennard is a farmer. They didnt accept it when Tina came out, so they havent had much contact with her since then. Mrs. Kennard is coming around though, and she and Tina have begun to speak on the phone sometimes in the last few years. Ive spoken to her a few times myself. She sounds a lot like Tina, just with a much stronger Southern accent, Bette told her, a fond smile on her face. She looked at Shane curiously. Why?
Shane leaned back thoughtfully. No reason. She was wondering why Helena had lied to her about Tinas parents. Perhaps to remove suspicion from herself, and try to make Tina look suspicious at the same time?
Bette suddenly sat up straighter. Shane, do you notice anything strange?
Like what? Shane asked, glancing around the room.
Bette pointed. Wheres Marinas body?
Shane looked to the spot where Marinas body had lain earlier. *****, how long has it been gone?
Bette shook her head. I dont know. Where is it?
I dont know, Shane replied helplessly. The killer must have moved it, for some reason.
Do you think…? Bette began slowly, trailing off. She and Shane met eyes and both shook their heads. It was impossible. She was dead.
Youre not a doctor, Bette, Shane pointed out.
No, but Im sure shes dead. The killer is just trying to ***** with our heads, Bette decided.
Well he or she is doing a good job of it, Shane conceded with a sigh, running her hands through her hair.
Tina was beginning to sob softly across the table. Poor Alice. I just cant believe one of us here is a murderer.
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(40 votes, average: 3.38 out of 5)
oh shit..this is so good…and i don’t do murder mysteries…i think its like one of the old tv shows…where they all die but they all live in the end… i don’t know…please we need the end…soon
I don’t know if I’m suppose to laugh or be serious. Either way it’s good writing.
CLUE!!!!
“I gotta go now. I’m gonna see Dana.” First fic to make me cry. Well done, damn you!
That first part was so cruel! lol First I screamed out “Noooooo!” then “She’s Alive!!!!” and then…you went and killed her a second time. Evilness, but fun evil. Marina and/or her scary husband!
Who’s the killer, I’m stumpped. WAIT, I know!!!!!!! It’s the bulter, its always the bulter.
shit, i’m getting scared just reading this. very suspenseful. i have no clue who the killer(s)is. i wasn’t sure if this was something i wanted to read but i’m glad i continued. just a guess but maybe tina’s real parents died and the killers are the fake ones. but don’t know why they would want to kill the gang.
This is good. I think the killer is Tim. He is killing all the people that he thinks changed Jenny. I think, I don’t know. Ok, maybe not. Just guessing.
I’m seriously laughing, and not sure if it’s what I’m supposed to be doing…but I’m enjoying it.
Yeah, well, frankly I’m mostly laughing, but I’ve encased reality in a bubble and am really quite enjoying this. I still think it’s Marina, but let’s look at all the mentally unstable characters… Marcus Allenwood’s Whacko Asian Girlfriend, Lacey I Stalked Shane for Several Days… Jenny (well, rule her out – crushed by a boulder)… Marina Suicide Lady… Tonya the Cat Killer, Helena I Am Obsessed with Pregnant Lesbians…
All current flimsy circumstantial evidence/guessing points to Marina and Helena, but I still maintain Colonel Mustard or Melissa Rivers is the Evil Doer![Insert Scary Music Soundtrack]
Helena as “a blood-sucking, puppy-eating monster”. That’s GOLD, baby.
getting better still who is the killer?? please post soon can’t wait to find out
Wait it’s James right? finaly getting back at the lesbians in his life LOL just kidding!!!