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    And Then There Were None, Ch. 6

    Story written on May 24, 2005 by Foxfire.
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    And then there were four…

    Alice was lying on the floor in a pool a blood, a huge knife sticking out of her chest.

    How the ***** did the killer get in? We were right here! Shane wondered angrily.

    Helena glanced about the small bathroom and pointed. It was a setup. Look.

    Shane glanced up to see ropes going across the ceiling and attached to a pulley. The killer must have somewhere rigged it so that when Alice did something, it triggered the rope, causing the knife to pop up and stab her somehow, Shane realized, shaking her head.

    Thats certainly a new development, Helena stated.

    And an unexpected one. Wed better start watching for traps, Shane told her, struggling to keep from looking down at the body of her dead friend. That was when she heard a small gurgling noise. Peering down, she noticed something: Alice was alive.

    Falling to her knees beside her fallen friend, splashing in a puddle of blood, Shane quickly put a hand to Alices cheek. Al? Its me. Are you okay?

    Alices eyes blinked, and she tried to smile but coughed, a little bit of blood coming out of her mouth.

    Hey, Yoda, she croaked.

    Shane grasped her hand. Oh, Alice. Hang on. Were gonna get you help, somehow.

    Alice shook her head slightly. Its too late for me, she whispered. Find out who the killer is and take care of yourself. She coughed once more and squeezed Shanes hand lightly, using the last little bit of strength she had left. I gotta go now. Im gonna see Dana.

    Shane sniffed, feeling a tear run down her cheek and watching it drop onto Alices cheek. Thats right, you are, Al. Tell her hi for me.

    Alice coughed. Love…you, Shane. Her eyes stared straight ahead, unmoving, and her breathing stopped. Shane sat in silence a moment, still holding Alices hand, before standing up and facing Helena, who was respectfully standing out of the way.

    Helena murmured something, and Shane glanced her way. What did you just say, Helena?

    Clearing her throat, Helena repeated herself. I said, And then there were four.

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    1. oh shit..this is so good…and i don’t do murder mysteries…i think its like one of the old tv shows…where they all die but they all live in the end… i don’t know…please we need the end…soon

    5. That first part was so cruel! lol First I screamed out “Noooooo!” then “She’s Alive!!!!” and then…you went and killed her a second time. Evilness, but fun evil. Marina and/or her scary husband!

    7. shit, i’m getting scared just reading this. very suspenseful. i have no clue who the killer(s)is. i wasn’t sure if this was something i wanted to read but i’m glad i continued. just a guess but maybe tina’s real parents died and the killers are the fake ones. but don’t know why they would want to kill the gang.

    8. This is good. I think the killer is Tim. He is killing all the people that he thinks changed Jenny. I think, I don’t know. Ok, maybe not. Just guessing.

    10. Yeah, well, frankly I’m mostly laughing, but I’ve encased reality in a bubble and am really quite enjoying this. I still think it’s Marina, but let’s look at all the mentally unstable characters… Marcus Allenwood’s Whacko Asian Girlfriend, Lacey I Stalked Shane for Several Days… Jenny (well, rule her out – crushed by a boulder)… Marina Suicide Lady… Tonya the Cat Killer, Helena I Am Obsessed with Pregnant Lesbians…

      All current flimsy circumstantial evidence/guessing points to Marina and Helena, but I still maintain Colonel Mustard or Melissa Rivers is the Evil Doer![Insert Scary Music Soundtrack]

      Helena as “a blood-sucking, puppy-eating monster”. That’s GOLD, baby.

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