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Angel Fire – 16
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“I’ve noticed,” said Stacy “that we have spent a lot of evenings recently at this pool.”
“What does that mean?”
“It’s just that this is a not a place for serious making out.”
“I think I’ve come on too strong lately,” Angel admitted as she kissed Stacy.
Stacy began returning the kisses with passion until they heard Angie’s moms.
“Wow,” Angie smiled at Stacy. “That was some pretty impressive kissing.”
“I don’t like you ignoring me,” Stacy grinned.
Bette and Tina arrived and the four of them began to visit.
Angel remembered this evening with Stacy after her moms left for their business/social weekend. Tina was right, she thought. If she lightened up on Stacy, her girlfriend would become more interested.
“Pull back from being such an aggressive alpha,” Tina had grinned. “Right now Stacy’s spending too much time thinking about how she’s going to say ‘no’ to you without hurting your feelings. Give her time instead to think about how much she loves you and wants to be with you.”
“Isn’t that manipulating?” Angel frowned.
“Baby, it’s giving her time and space to think and she needs to do that. There’s nothing wrong with that.”
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Angie watched until her moms’ car was out of sight. Then she swam for a while and finally went inside where she gathered up some books, magazines and videos. She decided to read some of the publications and then watch videos when it got dark. The door bell rang as just as she finished one of the books.
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The bed and breakfast
“T, are you ready to talk about Angel and Yvonne-Marie?”
“Bette, I’ve practically thought about nothing else since we had brunch with her.”
They had spent the evening having dinner and then socializing at the B&B. Bette genuinely liked her colleagues and this helped all of them get to know each other better as well as getting to know the newer people of the group. Most decided to turn in early and Bette and Tina were in their room.
“I just don’t want her to have a bad first experience the way I did.”
“I read the little book,” admitted Tina, referring to the book that Yvonne-Marie had given them.
She had read it last night after Bette went to sleep because she needed to know what her child would experience if she chose to go to Yvonne. The book made sense and covered all the things one needed to know in a very clear but gentle way. It would certainly help guide any sensitive young woman through her first sexual experience.
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I originally planned to end the story here. However, I decided that that decision would not be popular so I will have a few epilogue chapters.
LOLThanks for the epilogue chapters, i am allready looking forward to them…Great! Now Bette gets to see that love is about love and not about ‘technique’ LOL
Wew that is so much better….should b an interesting breakfast…
I had skipped to the end to see if anyone had commented (yes sometimes I act like it’s a race…sue me =p) and saw your comment. I thought one of two things: Stacy came back and they got it on, or the ending was just really lame with Angie being lonely which could lead to a sequel. Honestly I would’ve been fine with this being the end but I won’t lie, I’m looking forward to an epilogue. ;)
so glad you aren’t ending it here…and glad her first was Stacy.
Beautiful. absolutely wonderful, and tastefully done. i so love this story. my god, it’s like a drug. thank you for not stopping. please post soon. PEACE.
Although you were too circumspect to let us peep in on the kids, evidently all went well between them, and that, no doubt, is the best way it could have happened. Let’s hope the parents confronted with the proof (not the same as talking about it in theory) can handle it at least well enough to shut the door before they start choking. I really would hate for them to wake the kids. It would be particularly icky for the young folk, to be caught like that.
Sometime thing just have a natural progression to them especially between 2 people in love. Or maybe Stacy has already taken the course from Yvone??? while we’re all worrying about Angie and her moms reaction :-) Fabulous as always. Thanks and Happy Independence Day to the USA.
pancha, so glad you are continuing, would hate to be w/o your writing again. I’m glad all went with the young ladies.
Hold on a sec, I thought Stacy was away for the weekend, I called myself dumb when I imagined that Tina and Bette could found Angie and Stacy together in bed for that reason… Anyway, I don’t want to sound morbid but are you going to narrate the girls’ first time? I’m happy you’re not ending the story here, the story is about Angelica’s insecurities about sex and her first time, so she had her first experience but it’s not fun to stopped reading there, my humble opinion :o)
You were thinking to end just like that? are you crazy??I want to know want happened in stacy’s room!!
this was a big surprise to her mommies! all the time that Bette spend thingking in courtesan or books and this two decide that they love eacht other to much, and take the opportunity! great chapter!
Glad you are not ending the story. It will be intersting to read the epilogue chapters.
haha, they did it! Glad to see Angie has Bette’s talent and didn’t scare Stacy away. For a minute I thought it’s YM at the door and Angie would talk/do it with her. lol
So glad that you will give us more of this story. I loved every episode. I thought that Tina’s advice to Angelica was interesting… to back off a little and let Stacy come to her…. and Angelica’s response… so inciteful and honest. But it seems that her advice worked for them. All’s well that ends well. Can’t wait for the continuation.
please don’t ever stop writing! even if u do end this story, i hope u continue to write more b/c i love to read your stories! =)
thank you for granting us the epilogue im really curios to see everyones reaction.
More More More !!!!!!!!!!!!! Epilogues and another story, please !
Pancha, I’m glad you’re not ending it right here. I’m curious to know what happened in Angie’s room (the voyeur in me!). If what I think occurred actually happened, then I’m glad Stacy was Angie’s first.
It ended beautiful, The two young ladies together.like it should be. I think that Bette and Tina has showed her over the years the love and tenderness. thanks
great ending…i’m glad that B&T made that decision to come back and make angie and stacy read the book together but again, tina is right, it’s more about love than technique, i’m glad stacy and angie were each other’s first…and waiting for the epilogue and a new story
Surprise for the two worrying Moms!! I guess Stacy really missed Angie while she’s been away and she’s finally decided to consummate the love they have for each other. Looking forward to the epilogue and perhaps a new story?! Thanks.
Um, excuse me while I pick my jaw up from the floor. High-5 to Angie…yet, never underestimate the importance of a blanket. Thank you for continuing this story for a few more chapters Pancha and sorry I haven’t commented for a few chapters. I was in hell aka very, very sick.
Yay! They did it. Blissful! :)
Great that you’ve decided to add a little more. Just love the open communication in this loving family. So, great that they have moved pass all the drama, and can concentrate on being loving and nurturing. Can’t wait for your mext posts.
se now thats the way it should be… thanks for not ending the story
Damn Angie and Stacy in bed and naked, didn’t see that on coming lol!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for not ending it here. I wonder how Tina feels seeing her beautiful daughter in the arms of her girlfriend/lover in their birthday suits. Bette is probably smiling, but Tina maybe a little uneasy with her baby girl growing up. Can’t wait to read what happens next.
They didn’t need any help after all. That was the perfect way it should have happened.
OH YES by all means we NEED a few more chapters. My fir st question is do B&T turn around and leave the house. For all they know Angelica and Stacy could have planned to make love all day since they wheren’t expected back home. Don’t BLOCK, give them a day to themselves and the newly confirmed love :o). Beside some private time together wouldn’t hurt B*T either :D
Was looking for Lamentamini’s 1st…….brb (you’ve done well grasshoppa!) LOL……………….I don’t necessarily NEED more chapters or epilogues, if you will, because as it stands, Angie and Stacy lying there wrapped naked in each others arms is a beautiful ending. I never did expect Tina to jump on the courtesan bandwagon, and truth be told, when it comes to matters like that (meaning one has to allow their mind to wrap around the thought), I’ve always seen Tina as some sort of prude.
WELL DONE! HER PARENTS WERE WORRIED AND THEY DIDNT NEED TO BE HER PARENTS ARE TIBETTE NOTHING TO WORRIED ABOUT. SHOULD BE A INTERESTING BREAKFAST THOUGH YOU KNOW THE MOMS ARE WANT TO KNOW SOMETHING JUST ALICE WOULD? THANK YOU FOR NOT STOPPING HERE LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE AND YOU CANT LEAVE US WE LOVE YA TO MUCH LOL!” HAPPY TRAILS TO ALL TILL WE MEET AGAIN “!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was aching FOR Angie. I’m glad Stacy was there, and you are here. Thanks!
i’ve been catching up tonight reading your wonderful chapters i’ve been spelled bound by them love the parents and how they treat each other and angel–what love was shown when bette finally confided to tina and how you had tina loving bette even more than before and that she went to brunch to discuss the topic– but i loved the way angel and stacy took matters into their own hands and moms were just moms–i’d never been that accepting with my girls we danced around the sex topic when they were teens—hate to see the end coming i’ve just loved this whole story–and maybe you can teach and old person something new–can help grandson some day if asked–please write more
Awwww so sweet.