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Angel Fire – 16
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“And?” Bette asked.
“And I think that Angel and Stacy should read it. However, I think they should have their first experience with each other. It’s not the same as your first experience. These kids are in love; you weren’t…unless you’re hiding something from me.”
“No.”
Bette thought about being in love and what kind of difference that would have made with Brenda. It would have helped, certainly, but Bette was a woman who also believed in technique. To be sure, she believed in love, but semi-skilled love seemed better than fumbling love even on a first attempt.
“Being with a courtesan was really great for me,” Bette explained.
“Bette, sometimes you’re too hung up on being perfect.”
Tina saw a muscle jump in Bette’s jaw and knew that Bette was a little stung by this statement.
“Don’t you like having a really good lover? Or are you saying it doesn’t matter? Or are you saying that I’m not a good lover?” Bette asked.
“Of course, it matters and I love being married to a thrilling lover. I’m just saying it’s all the more thrilling because I’m in love with you.”
“The first time I had sex, I wasn’t in love either. But, the first time I had sex with you, I was in love with you. I would like for our daughter to have that experience with someone she’s in love with.”
“Yeah, I know,” sighed Bette who had calmed down. “And T, for the record, I wasn’t disappointed with Brenda because I wasn’t perfect. I was disappointed because I wasn’t even good enough to be called mediocre.”
Tina slid into Bette’s arms and thought about…a million things.
“When we left the house this afternoon…Angelica looked like a forlorn little kid,” Tina said worriedly. “Remember, it was the way she used to look when she was small and we were going away.”
“She was trying to hide it from us,” smiled Bette.
“Should we call her?”
“Tina. Let’s go home. I’ll make our excuses and we can leave right away.”
Tina backed away from Bette to look in her eyes. Bette’s eyes radiated love and concern and acceptance. The artist knew that her wife would be nervous until they got home and also knew there was no need to let this happen.
“Are you sure?”
“Yes.”
“You’re a wonderful wife,” Tina said, kissing Bette.
“Remember that the next time I leave dirty towels on the bathroom floor.”
“I always do,” Tina laughed and Bette started laughing, too.
“Angie will be asleep when we get there.”
“I know, but we can surprise her tomorrow morning, feed her a good breakfast, talk to her and give her that book to read,” Bette said.
“Maybe we can talk about Yvonne-Marie on the way home,” Tina said quietly. “Maybe we should tell our daughter so that she can make a choice. It’s really about her, not us.”
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As they drove home Tina rested her hand on Bette’s leg and Bette covered it. She understood that it was important for Bette to have Angelica be an excellent lover. It had taken Tina a long time to understand how badly Bette needed to be perfect. Then it had taken Tina a long time to convince Bette that perfection wasn’t necessary all the time.
It was late when they pulled up to their dark house and they tried to be very quiet as they entered, not wanting to awaken their daughter. They noticed that there was a faint light coming from Angie’s room through the partially open door.
“She must have wanted to sleep with the night-light on,” Tina whispered to Bette.
As a youngster Angie had often slept with the light on and even now she did this occasionally. They both walked over to the bedroom door to take a last look at their daughter before they went to bed.
When they looked into the room, they saw Angelica and Stacy lying naked in each others’ arms. Stacy was nestled partially on top of their daughter with her face buried in Angie’s neck and Angel’s arms were around her lover. They looked beautiful, satisfied, blissful.
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I originally planned to end the story here. However, I decided that that decision would not be popular so I will have a few epilogue chapters.
LOLThanks for the epilogue chapters, i am allready looking forward to them…Great! Now Bette gets to see that love is about love and not about ‘technique’ LOL
Wew that is so much better….should b an interesting breakfast…
I had skipped to the end to see if anyone had commented (yes sometimes I act like it’s a race…sue me =p) and saw your comment. I thought one of two things: Stacy came back and they got it on, or the ending was just really lame with Angie being lonely which could lead to a sequel. Honestly I would’ve been fine with this being the end but I won’t lie, I’m looking forward to an epilogue. ;)
so glad you aren’t ending it here…and glad her first was Stacy.
Beautiful. absolutely wonderful, and tastefully done. i so love this story. my god, it’s like a drug. thank you for not stopping. please post soon. PEACE.
Although you were too circumspect to let us peep in on the kids, evidently all went well between them, and that, no doubt, is the best way it could have happened. Let’s hope the parents confronted with the proof (not the same as talking about it in theory) can handle it at least well enough to shut the door before they start choking. I really would hate for them to wake the kids. It would be particularly icky for the young folk, to be caught like that.
Sometime thing just have a natural progression to them especially between 2 people in love. Or maybe Stacy has already taken the course from Yvone??? while we’re all worrying about Angie and her moms reaction :-) Fabulous as always. Thanks and Happy Independence Day to the USA.
pancha, so glad you are continuing, would hate to be w/o your writing again. I’m glad all went with the young ladies.
Hold on a sec, I thought Stacy was away for the weekend, I called myself dumb when I imagined that Tina and Bette could found Angie and Stacy together in bed for that reason… Anyway, I don’t want to sound morbid but are you going to narrate the girls’ first time? I’m happy you’re not ending the story here, the story is about Angelica’s insecurities about sex and her first time, so she had her first experience but it’s not fun to stopped reading there, my humble opinion :o)
You were thinking to end just like that? are you crazy??I want to know want happened in stacy’s room!!
this was a big surprise to her mommies! all the time that Bette spend thingking in courtesan or books and this two decide that they love eacht other to much, and take the opportunity! great chapter!
Glad you are not ending the story. It will be intersting to read the epilogue chapters.
haha, they did it! Glad to see Angie has Bette’s talent and didn’t scare Stacy away. For a minute I thought it’s YM at the door and Angie would talk/do it with her. lol
So glad that you will give us more of this story. I loved every episode. I thought that Tina’s advice to Angelica was interesting… to back off a little and let Stacy come to her…. and Angelica’s response… so inciteful and honest. But it seems that her advice worked for them. All’s well that ends well. Can’t wait for the continuation.
please don’t ever stop writing! even if u do end this story, i hope u continue to write more b/c i love to read your stories! =)
thank you for granting us the epilogue im really curios to see everyones reaction.
More More More !!!!!!!!!!!!! Epilogues and another story, please !
Pancha, I’m glad you’re not ending it right here. I’m curious to know what happened in Angie’s room (the voyeur in me!). If what I think occurred actually happened, then I’m glad Stacy was Angie’s first.
It ended beautiful, The two young ladies together.like it should be. I think that Bette and Tina has showed her over the years the love and tenderness. thanks
great ending…i’m glad that B&T made that decision to come back and make angie and stacy read the book together but again, tina is right, it’s more about love than technique, i’m glad stacy and angie were each other’s first…and waiting for the epilogue and a new story
Surprise for the two worrying Moms!! I guess Stacy really missed Angie while she’s been away and she’s finally decided to consummate the love they have for each other. Looking forward to the epilogue and perhaps a new story?! Thanks.
Um, excuse me while I pick my jaw up from the floor. High-5 to Angie…yet, never underestimate the importance of a blanket. Thank you for continuing this story for a few more chapters Pancha and sorry I haven’t commented for a few chapters. I was in hell aka very, very sick.
Yay! They did it. Blissful! :)
Great that you’ve decided to add a little more. Just love the open communication in this loving family. So, great that they have moved pass all the drama, and can concentrate on being loving and nurturing. Can’t wait for your mext posts.
se now thats the way it should be… thanks for not ending the story
Damn Angie and Stacy in bed and naked, didn’t see that on coming lol!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for not ending it here. I wonder how Tina feels seeing her beautiful daughter in the arms of her girlfriend/lover in their birthday suits. Bette is probably smiling, but Tina maybe a little uneasy with her baby girl growing up. Can’t wait to read what happens next.
They didn’t need any help after all. That was the perfect way it should have happened.
OH YES by all means we NEED a few more chapters. My fir st question is do B&T turn around and leave the house. For all they know Angelica and Stacy could have planned to make love all day since they wheren’t expected back home. Don’t BLOCK, give them a day to themselves and the newly confirmed love :o). Beside some private time together wouldn’t hurt B*T either :D
Was looking for Lamentamini’s 1st…….brb (you’ve done well grasshoppa!) LOL……………….I don’t necessarily NEED more chapters or epilogues, if you will, because as it stands, Angie and Stacy lying there wrapped naked in each others arms is a beautiful ending. I never did expect Tina to jump on the courtesan bandwagon, and truth be told, when it comes to matters like that (meaning one has to allow their mind to wrap around the thought), I’ve always seen Tina as some sort of prude.
WELL DONE! HER PARENTS WERE WORRIED AND THEY DIDNT NEED TO BE HER PARENTS ARE TIBETTE NOTHING TO WORRIED ABOUT. SHOULD BE A INTERESTING BREAKFAST THOUGH YOU KNOW THE MOMS ARE WANT TO KNOW SOMETHING JUST ALICE WOULD? THANK YOU FOR NOT STOPPING HERE LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE AND YOU CANT LEAVE US WE LOVE YA TO MUCH LOL!” HAPPY TRAILS TO ALL TILL WE MEET AGAIN “!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was aching FOR Angie. I’m glad Stacy was there, and you are here. Thanks!
i’ve been catching up tonight reading your wonderful chapters i’ve been spelled bound by them love the parents and how they treat each other and angel–what love was shown when bette finally confided to tina and how you had tina loving bette even more than before and that she went to brunch to discuss the topic– but i loved the way angel and stacy took matters into their own hands and moms were just moms–i’d never been that accepting with my girls we danced around the sex topic when they were teens—hate to see the end coming i’ve just loved this whole story–and maybe you can teach and old person something new–can help grandson some day if asked–please write more
Awwww so sweet.