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    Apogée 10

    Story written on June 5, 2006 by ClosetDana.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=61190
    Author Notes:

    Bette Tina and the bedroom, Dana Alice and the dining room. Shane in the woods and Carmen at the store.

    You guys are amazing, thanks for the comments (though I heard some of them were getting lost) what I always like to do is select my comment if they’re long and copy it then send it. That way if it doesn’t go through I still have a backup :) I appreciate all the love and support, PM me if you have any questions that might lead to spoilers…I  don’t mind questions, in fact I love them! Keep reading and let me know what you think!

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    ClosetDana 

     

     

        It was 3:30 in the afternoon and Shane hadn’t left her room, Carmen was worried but didn’t press the assassin. Since they’d been in the country hideaway, the bartender rarely saw the assassin, and when she did Shane was doing laundry or heading for the shower. The bartender’s eyes were puffy and tender from crying all night, it was rare that she cried about the past but with all the stress on her recently Carmen felt better after getting it all out. The Latina paced the living room, until 5:00 shaking her head.

        “Ok that’s enough,” Carmen headed for Shane’s room, preparing to bang on the old wooden door. As the bartender wound up to knock the door opened suddenly, Shane staring her in the face.

        “Yes?” Carmen looked confused and a little embarrassed realizing Shane’s excellent hearing is what probably tipped her off to the bartender’s impending blow up. Carmen smiled self-consciously,

        “Look Shane I’m sure that as a super bad ass you’re able to spend large amounts of time by yourself…and that winning friendly personality of yours has you trained well in silence, but I need to talk to someone at some point…” Shane only stared Carmen, hoping the Latina would get to the point.

        “We need food and I’ve got to get out of here for a while, I’m going to the store, is there anything you want?…or do you want to come with me?” The assassin only nodded closing the door quickly behind her and walking into the living room, the bartender following behind.

        “What do you do in there all day? I rarely see you and when I do you’re doing laundry…which reminds, me we need detergent.” Shane shrugged,

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    1. Great chapter…what kind of flashback was Shane having?? Danish is very hot!!! TiBette are cute together…I just figure out who Mark and Gomey was…Please forgive me, I’m very tired!! LoL…Anyways, Keep up the good work and hope to see another post REAL SOON!!!!

    2. Great update . . . What the hell is wrong wit’ my gurl, Shane. I hope she stays put so Carmen can make it all better. Now that I mention it, Carmen IS one hot medic (hahaha) . . . Post soon, LYLAS

    4. How did Shane get all those bruises? She is so lonely and yet she can’t seem to pull herself out of the shell that she has created around her. Alice is being a bad girl but oh so nice to Dana. Loved their sweet interaction there in the chair. Bette may get her wish yet, but I wonder is she so cold hearted that she does not feel any remorse in hurting Tina with the death of her husband? I wonder how long before Tina gives into her heart and sleeps with Bette. I can’t wait for the next chapter.

    5. I’m finally all caught up! Damn where do you live that you can get 2 cartons of cigarettes for $40? That much gets me one cartons of Marlboros with change leftover. O.o The Danish is pretty hot (whoa did I make a bad joke?), the Sharmen I kind of have to plow through since I’m not a big fan there, and the jury is still out on TiBette. I love B&T together but I just don’t know how Tina can forgive Bette for ordering Marcus’ death even if he was stealing money. Mark and Gomey are a couple of fucknuts. I hated them on the show and still don’t like them here. YUCK! I’m thinking Shane’s bruises are self-inflicted from nightmares or hallucinations, or maybe Carmen did it while sleepwalking? The description of Nikki makes me also think that she is somehow connected to Carmen. Perhaps a long-lost sister that Carmen cries for sometimes?

    6. Amazing update! Absolutely loved it. I loved the Danish! It was classic Dana and Alice role playing. I’m so glad Alice got the job, haha. I’m looking forward to reading more Danish, and I’m also interested to see what develops in the Tina and Bette department. Keep up the great writing. Please update soon.

    7. Well, well, well ClosetDana.. I love that you always give me such nice comments back but you really have me curious about your disclaimer… there has to be a good story there,lol. I find you to be so fascinating…what motivates you to write so well? I’d like to skip over the sharman this time and jump to the Alice/Dana. So.. Alice likes a little dominance huh? You make it so hot between them… at least they don’t have to ache. I like how you changed gears with Shane in the woods.. with the click and flashing back.. very creative. I laugh at the two lame brains… new suits, summery!Damn I don’t know if I want to be the interviewer or the person applying… they both have their advantages, lol. Bette and Tina sleeping in the same bed… without doing anything, hmmm.. wonder how long that will last. Love the idea of Tina falling asleep in Bette’s arms… sounds so wonderful. You really bring it home… everytime, sugar. I commend you on this chapter and bow down to you. I’ll be waiting for more…

    9. Okay, I think I got it now. If not please dont tell anyone. usually I’m pretty sharp. Okay so far you have the gang with their partner. Cigarette for 20 a carton. I dont smoke so ,I see them for Thirtyseven a carton. Love Shane and Carman thanks

    10. I really love your take on B&T and, trust me, you write them very well. I can’t get enough of your version of them, and I am looking forward to more soon!

    13. This story is really f-ing good. But it would be great if you fixed one thing – a lot of the time it’s confusing who says what. Maybe you could have someone proof for you before you post? The story however, is simply amazing though, keep it up!

    16. He ClosetDana another great update. I love reading your stories. Of course I’m a big Danish fan so those parts are my favorite. Man I want a job interview like that someday!! haha anyways keep it up and surprise me again with your comedic genious.

    17. Danish = hot stuff. Very, very impressed. And I’m really liking the other segments as well (which is saying something because besides Danish & Lace, I’m not really a keen fan of the other ships) so you’re doing a good job!And just a quick o/t thing – Malboro Reds? Possibly the grossest cigarettes ever. My friend smokes them and they make me feel sick, and I smoke as well. Eew. Completely unrelated, I know. Anyway post soon!

    18. it’s simply great. Especially about Shane and Carmen part you tend to wrap the story around a sort of mist; that’s really intriguin’. I always need to read the following post to understand what has happened and it’s a great way to create suspence.yours is one of my favourite stories!Bye

    19. Ok, so I guess it’s easy for you to think of the plots (*a big hoorah for us readers!*). You’re very good in portraying the characters in each situation. You stay true to the characters on the show (I might add that with the huge personality changes some of the character made over the seasons you chose the right ones. E.g. I’m glad you chose for the personality of S3 Helena, it does suit her a lot better!). I did get a tiny bit of a snippet. After reading it I forgot to say I just love your Alice and Dana. You’re always right on spot (no pun intended :P ) when it comes to them. Yep, Alice is definitely screwing the government in some way or another. :D Awww, such a sweet memory of Shane and Nikki. Were people actually chasing Shane in the woods or was she hallucinatng? Shane is in a really bad condition. I hope Carmen will be back in time. I really like the developement of those two characters. Does Carmen’s crying has to do with a lost of a baby (maybe even her baby?)?? Good to see that Tina and Bette could find peace in eachothers arms. To anwer the timezone-question, I’m in GMT +1 (I guess that’s how it’s officially put…when we talked last time I think I was about 6 hours ahead of you).

    24. fantastic update, shane and carmen really amaze me, i want to know whats going to happen with them, and what the hell is wrong with shane. i can’t wait to read more, as always, you’re fabulous!

    25. fan bloody tastic !! love it, it always cheers me up when i see your posts. thank you. oh and that club in amsterdam. sounds familiar apparently i was in something very similar and there are photos but hell if i can rmember any of it lol!!

    26. I could just kiss you, you know that right? I love your story, but I am a big Sharmen fan and I need some Sharmen loving, *wink wink*. The Danish loving is really hot though, I love them in your fic!

    29. I am very curious to see how this all plays out with every character so interlaced with one another, but on opposite sides and deceit all around. Sorry about the crazy run-on, its late :). Really enjoying your story, thanks for posting.

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