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    Apogée 9

    Story written on June 1, 2006 by ClosetDana.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=61132
    Author Notes:

    Shane takes her own shower, Mark and Gomey might not be as stupid as they appear. Agent Alice? Tina shows Bette the bedroom.

    Thanks for all of the support guys, I was thinking of going on hiatus but with all the reader support I couldn’t do that, I appreciate the comments and all the love. (It almost took me longer writing the replies than the actual chapter)

    Much love everyone,

    ClosetDana

    Carmen stared at her hands seeing faint red splotches where she’d touched Shane’s arms. The bartender ran her finger along her palm, the splotch spreading and drying brown, similar to blood. Carmen stared at her hand then in the direction Shane staggered in worried, she stood up making her way to the bathroom door tapping on it gently.

    “You sure everything’s alright Shane?” The assassin turned on the shower but never got in,

    “I’m fine…I just need another shower.” Shane’s voice echoed in the small bathroom and Carmen leaned on the wall.

    “Ok well when you get out, come find me and I’ll bandage those cuts for you.” The bartender leaned her ear against the door and Shane sat on the toilet leaning back against the tile wall holding her ribs.

    “I’ll be fine, I can bandage them.” Carmen was going to argue with the assassin, there was no way Shane could reach the cuts on her back especially with those ribs. The bartender shook her head throwing her hands up in the air and letting them fall at her sides as she walked back down the hallway.

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    Tina sat on her bed resting her face in her hands,
    “What are you doing? Marcus’ body isn’t even cold and you’re ready to fuck someone else? A friend no less.” Tina threw her body back onto the bed, her arms spreading out on the soft goose down that covered her bed.

    ‘She’s so sexy though, that soft hair and deep eyes, God.’ The widow bit her lip looking at the clock, then the ceiling. 1:26, she’d been over Bette’s house for hours…Bette with that sexy lean body and those full soft lips that made you want to bite them. Bette, whose voice dripped over her like honey, and whose broad shoulders were perfect for resting her thighs on. Tina’s hand rested on her belly, rubbing slowly the widows fingers touching her own belt with each soothing circle. As if they had a mind of their own Tina’s fingers reached lower, touching the band of her panties and pushing forward to touch her clit. The phone ringing suddenly and scaring the shit out of Tina,

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    1. I can’t imagine how hard it is to come up with new plots every time, but I’m glad you continued this story. :D And yes, no arguing from me on forgiving Dana easily. I would totally do the same. :P Your Helena has the personality of S3, I really like that. :) She will be joining them soon? So Alice is gonna help Dana out. I hope Alice really is trustworthy and doesn’t take it to the paper. The slapstick duo has golden information in their hands…they could asked a lot more money (if they only knew). :) Shane had a troublesome childhood. I would like to explore that a little deeper. And I’m with theotherlife, why is Carmen crying? I saw you added me on IM. We’re in different time zones..but I’ll be there for a snippet. Don’t know if I can handle it tough? ;)

    3. Excellent update. I just wanted you to know that I did leave a comment the day you posted the previous update but it never showed up. So…you get 2 in 1 today because I don’t feel like doing 2 seperate comments. Sorry I guess I’m being a little lazy. I’m going to try and remember what I wrote for the last one. Here goes. Read it, loved it, want more soon. I’m really enjoying this story. I loved the last chapter due to all the Danish. I think that you write the characters very well. I’m actually able to picture the characters doing these things, which is really amazing. I loved it when Alice scratched here head with her pen and pushed her glasses up. It was something so little, but it fit her perfectly. I think you do a very good job with detail, without over doing it. Keep up the excellent writing. I can’t wait for more.I think I got it all…or most of it anyway.oh yeah! I loved that the “drive-by” comment stuck. I had to laugh about it. :)

    6. i left one last time. but it didn’t show… thought i’d try again since i did sign up just to tell you that i’ve read your story.glad you didn’t take the hiatus.your story’s a rare harmony of the foreign and the familiar and i adore it very much.

    9. Now to which bedroom is Tina taking Bette to? I love that Dana trust Alice enough to bring her into the case. She not only trust her but allows her to voice her own opinion. Shane I believe is fighting her own feelings towards Carmen. I would love to see those two move closer together. As for Kit she just scares me. Is the reason that Bette had Marcus killed because he was stealing money from her? If that is true then maybe when Helena’s people go over his books they will find the missing money. Then maybe Tina will not look on Marcus as the once suitable mate for her. Great post.

    10. Hope this doesn’t float off in cyper space.been having a time with comments Sometimes its hards to keep up with this story, makes me stop and think. So I go a wee bit slower and ,yes I understand it. I will read if you write. thanks

    12. I’ll have you know I left three lengthy comments the last time but I was rejected(guess I wasn’t worthy enough to get approved… makes me want to cry) Does that mean three strikes I’m out? Hope not. I know I’m fortunate to get to read all or most of your story ahead of time but I was tricked by the Tina/Bette daydream again. I love that you have Alice/Dana working together… I’m hoping for some of that wonderful tension. No offense but i hope you pull the plug on Jenny the circus freak. The woman drives me insane….and I would rather have you drive me crazy, lol. You have me curious as to why Carmen is crying. I love a late night visit… er Bette/Tina. My stomach does flip flops when I’m feeling that lovely sexual tension…you know what I mean? I’d say more but I’m so very tired…. and my mind has been occupied with so many torturous thoughts. Love the story and the way you make me feel!

    20. I love your story and it is getting better and better. Such an ingenius story. And the frequency of posts makes me very happy, and helps me brighten up my dull days at work.BTW, I agree on the bit about Hawkgirl. But her feistiness and her aggressiveness is so enticing. And she is gorgeous. Reminds me a little of Carmen too…

    25. Well I haven’t started from the beginning yet. lol I’m still trying to catch up on some other stories, plus I’m probably gonna fall behind due to spending the next month playing an online game hardcore. It’s a juggling act, but I promise to find time to start on this. :)

    26. I’m so happy that you didn’t go on hiatus. I love this story and I love where you have taken it thus far and am still dying to see what happens next.

    27. I would’ve really missed your story! I save it to read where it’s nice and quiet and I can give my full attention! Which bedroom is Tina leading Bette toward? Let us know soon! Thanks for writing.

    28. It’s safe to say if I read the back installments, I’m in it for the long haul. ‘Nother chapter. And I definitely like where B&T are headed! ;)

    33. Great update! The combination of strong, confident Dana and quick- witted Alice is so sexy…not to mention Alice taking note of her ass. I love it, it’s so Danish. Can’t wait for the next installment!

    34. I love this…I feel so bad for Shane, she’s still on my good side though; even if she kills ppl. Yeah, shag is universal, and my fav. word. You keep working your magic w/this fanfic & I’ll do mines…LOL…ta mate.

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