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Apogée 10
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“I exercise and…what does it matter?” Carmen searched around the house, knocking on random planks.
“I guess I just don’t see how you can spend so much time by yourself…you don’t get, lonely?” The assassin never answered sitting on the couch, now accustomed to the pain and discomfort of her ribs. The bartender finally tapped on a hollow plank, sliding out the wood and pulling out a large metal box with a lock.
“There’s plenty of emergency money here…and there’s a town a few miles down the hill.” Carmen shoved a handful of bills in her pocket, closing the box and placing it back in its hiding place.
“How are your ribs doing? I’m sure they should be much better now…here let me look.” The bartender lifted Shane’s shirt looking confused, the cuts she’d bandaged were still bright red and there was a dark purple and yellow bruise the size of Carmen’s hand across Shane’s ribs. The bartender’s brow furrowed as she ran her fingers along the bruise, Shane pulling down her shirt quickly at the contact.
“Where did that bruise come from?” Shane stood up walking toward the door,
“I’m fine Carmen,” the bartender walked slowly toward the assassin her concern growing.
“Well it has to hurt, do you want an aspirin?” Shane shook her head no, pushing the screen door open.
“I’ll be waiting on the porch until you’re ready.”
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Dana walked into her house, Alice trailing behind staring at the agent’s ass as she strolled leisurely.
“You know you are like a totally different person at work,” Alice’s eyes trailed up to Dana’s shoulders, the agent taking off her jacket, virtually unaware of the writer’s stare.
“Different? How?” Alice smiled grabbing Dana by the hips and holding her against a nearby wall,
“Well for one you don’t swing your hips in that sexy way I like, your shoulders rise… your voice drops.” Alice pushed her hips against Dana; the agent’s quickly forgotten jacket allowed Alice to observe Dana’s muscular arms through her form-fitting tank. The agent’s eyes slanted a bit, trying to understand what the writer was saying,
“Are you saying I’m a tight ass boss?” Alice chuckled, her fingers touching the bit of exposed skin on Dana’s waist.
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Great chapter…what kind of flashback was Shane having?? Danish is very hot!!! TiBette are cute together…I just figure out who Mark and Gomey was…Please forgive me, I’m very tired!! LoL…Anyways, Keep up the good work and hope to see another post REAL SOON!!!!
Great update . . . What the hell is wrong wit’ my gurl, Shane. I hope she stays put so Carmen can make it all better. Now that I mention it, Carmen IS one hot medic (hahaha) . . . Post soon, LYLAS
It’s official – I’m totally hooked.
How did Shane get all those bruises? She is so lonely and yet she can’t seem to pull herself out of the shell that she has created around her. Alice is being a bad girl but oh so nice to Dana. Loved their sweet interaction there in the chair. Bette may get her wish yet, but I wonder is she so cold hearted that she does not feel any remorse in hurting Tina with the death of her husband? I wonder how long before Tina gives into her heart and sleeps with Bette. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
I’m finally all caught up! Damn where do you live that you can get 2 cartons of cigarettes for $40? That much gets me one cartons of Marlboros with change leftover. O.o The Danish is pretty hot (whoa did I make a bad joke?), the Sharmen I kind of have to plow through since I’m not a big fan there, and the jury is still out on TiBette. I love B&T together but I just don’t know how Tina can forgive Bette for ordering Marcus’ death even if he was stealing money. Mark and Gomey are a couple of fucknuts. I hated them on the show and still don’t like them here. YUCK! I’m thinking Shane’s bruises are self-inflicted from nightmares or hallucinations, or maybe Carmen did it while sleepwalking? The description of Nikki makes me also think that she is somehow connected to Carmen. Perhaps a long-lost sister that Carmen cries for sometimes?
Amazing update! Absolutely loved it. I loved the Danish! It was classic Dana and Alice role playing. I’m so glad Alice got the job, haha. I’m looking forward to reading more Danish, and I’m also interested to see what develops in the Tina and Bette department. Keep up the great writing. Please update soon.
Well, well, well ClosetDana.. I love that you always give me such nice comments back but you really have me curious about your disclaimer… there has to be a good story there,lol. I find you to be so fascinating…what motivates you to write so well? I’d like to skip over the sharman this time and jump to the Alice/Dana. So.. Alice likes a little dominance huh? You make it so hot between them… at least they don’t have to ache. I like how you changed gears with Shane in the woods.. with the click and flashing back.. very creative. I laugh at the two lame brains… new suits, summery!Damn I don’t know if I want to be the interviewer or the person applying… they both have their advantages, lol. Bette and Tina sleeping in the same bed… without doing anything, hmmm.. wonder how long that will last. Love the idea of Tina falling asleep in Bette’s arms… sounds so wonderful. You really bring it home… everytime, sugar. I commend you on this chapter and bow down to you. I’ll be waiting for more…
great as always…sharmen puzzles me but i like it…
Okay, I think I got it now. If not please dont tell anyone. usually I’m pretty sharp. Okay so far you have the gang with their partner. Cigarette for 20 a carton. I dont smoke so ,I see them for Thirtyseven a carton. Love Shane and Carman thanks
I really love your take on B&T and, trust me, you write them very well. I can’t get enough of your version of them, and I am looking forward to more soon!
i love this fic to no end i can usually guest whats gonna happen next but you keep me guessing … and i love it keep em coming
Alright, this one of those rare stories i find that keep me reading till I’m cross-eyed. I’m lovin’ the sharmen storyline, intruiging stuff, keep it up!
This story is really f-ing good. But it would be great if you fixed one thing – a lot of the time it’s confusing who says what. Maybe you could have someone proof for you before you post? The story however, is simply amazing though, keep it up!
Hope Shane will be ok. Bette and Tina are sweet and let see what’s next, thanks!
Another great chapter Hun, I can’t wait to see what U write next =)
He ClosetDana another great update. I love reading your stories. Of course I’m a big Danish fan so those parts are my favorite. Man I want a job interview like that someday!! haha anyways keep it up and surprise me again with your comedic genious.
Danish = hot stuff. Very, very impressed. And I’m really liking the other segments as well (which is saying something because besides Danish & Lace, I’m not really a keen fan of the other ships) so you’re doing a good job!And just a quick o/t thing – Malboro Reds? Possibly the grossest cigarettes ever. My friend smokes them and they make me feel sick, and I smoke as well. Eew. Completely unrelated, I know. Anyway post soon!
it’s simply great. Especially about Shane and Carmen part you tend to wrap the story around a sort of mist; that’s really intriguin’. I always need to read the following post to understand what has happened and it’s a great way to create suspence.yours is one of my favourite stories!Bye
Ok, so I guess it’s easy for you to think of the plots (*a big hoorah for us readers!*). You’re very good in portraying the characters in each situation. You stay true to the characters on the show (I might add that with the huge personality changes some of the character made over the seasons you chose the right ones. E.g. I’m glad you chose for the personality of S3 Helena, it does suit her a lot better!). I did get a tiny bit of a snippet. After reading it I forgot to say I just love your Alice and Dana. You’re always right on spot (no pun intended :P ) when it comes to them. Yep, Alice is definitely screwing the government in some way or another. :D Awww, such a sweet memory of Shane and Nikki. Were people actually chasing Shane in the woods or was she hallucinatng? Shane is in a really bad condition. I hope Carmen will be back in time. I really like the developement of those two characters. Does Carmen’s crying has to do with a lost of a baby (maybe even her baby?)?? Good to see that Tina and Bette could find peace in eachothers arms. To anwer the timezone-question, I’m in GMT +1 (I guess that’s how it’s officially put…when we talked last time I think I was about 6 hours ahead of you).
*lots*
Glad to see your post. The Danish is sure heating up. Looking forward to reading what develops between B/T. Thanks for writing!
I agree.. loys more danish! I love how you wrote them role playing, very hot, just like in the programme. Good stuff xx
Damn, Carmen is one hot medic. I love the story, hope to find an update soon!
fantastic update, shane and carmen really amaze me, i want to know whats going to happen with them, and what the hell is wrong with shane. i can’t wait to read more, as always, you’re fabulous!
fan bloody tastic !! love it, it always cheers me up when i see your posts. thank you. oh and that club in amsterdam. sounds familiar apparently i was in something very similar and there are photos but hell if i can rmember any of it lol!!
I could just kiss you, you know that right? I love your story, but I am a big Sharmen fan and I need some Sharmen loving, *wink wink*. The Danish loving is really hot though, I love them in your fic!
Hope Shane & Carmen open up about their demons to one another. Damn, Bette’s a slick one, she’s skillfully pulling Tina into her web.
Great story. So glad to know that there is a talented writer such as yourself posting here. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
I am very curious to see how this all plays out with every character so interlaced with one another, but on opposite sides and deceit all around. Sorry about the crazy run-on, its late :). Really enjoying your story, thanks for posting.
Read it!! Awesome