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Apogée 11
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“I should go get ready then,” Bette smiled knowingly, it was obvious what Tina wanted but the widow would come around in her own time. Bette stood up and walked slowly toward the door to leave, she wanted to stay, but the thought of Tina naked in the shower so close to her did not inspire chaste thoughts. The widow turned quickly when she saw Bette moving for the door,
“Are you going somewhere?” Tina rambled off, the words tumbled out before she could catch them, the widow didn’t want to sound needy but she really wanted to be around Bette for as long as possible. The brunette took a step back into the room, shooting her thumb over her shoulder and explaining.
“I was just going to run home and change, I’ll come back for you in an hour and a half is that alright?” Tina nodded and Bette turned around to leave, the brunette taking a second look and being rewarded with the widow’s bare back. Bette shuddered inwardly forcing herself to leave before things got out of hand.
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Carmen pulled the truck around the back of the grocery store, the thick tires peeling through grass and kicking up dirt as she slammed on the brakes. The bartender left the engine running, hopping out and rushing to the place where Shane lay. Carmen pushed her way through thick branches, navigating around fallen tree trunks and the heavy wild vines that ran under her feet. The Latina became worried, no longer seeing Shane in the very small clearing where she’d left the assassin, Carmen reached down studying the place where Shane had fallen. The bartender shook her head looking at the crushed leaves under foot; she noticed bright red blood drops and followed it to Shane who had managed to stand and stumble her way deeper into the forest. Carmen approached Shane cautiously, she knew the assassin was hallucinating and could be more than potentially dangerous.
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Excellent update! I loved it. When the dotted line made its way across Alice’s computer screen, a huge grin appeared on my face. It’s Alice’s chart! That was a very inovative way to put her chart in there. Great job. I absolutely can’t wait for more.
I just have to comment. I TOTALLY DIG this fic. I would prefer a lot more Bette and Tina though. Love the Dana and Alice. I am not a fan of Shane and Carmen. Now with that said, I am a little confused. Bette and Shane are criminals right. So, how is it going to work. What is Tina going to do when she finds out that Bette KILLED her husband (something that has not been mention lately). Love your writing of the different characters and their emotions. Please give Bette and Tina more time and let’s dive more into them and Bette’s occupation.
again as usuall another fan bloody tastic chapter, im totally hooked, it brightens up my rather hectic days when i read your stories. Thanks for your words of kindness regarding my story its really great to get such good feedback. :-)
Alice is my hero! She figured it all out on her own…it’s the out-of-the box thinking that does the trick. ;) (Btw, this whole story is greatbecause it’s all about that! :D). Ok, I googled the cayenne pepper, it’s one of the most valuable herbs on earth, who would have guessed?! :) Shane must have been in real pain, but it saved her day. Carmen is one smart lady. :D I still think the storyline of those two is very intriguing! So many questions need to be answered. Bette got what she wanted, Tina giving in to her. Good for her! They’re getting there, slowly, but surely… I’m still a bit clueless on Bette’s background (maybe because it’s getting reallt late here and it’s been way too hot all day, my brain doesn’t seem to work how it’s supposed to be).
ClosetDana did I ever tell you.. you make me smile? The disclaimers get more interesting… just like the chapters. Damn.. Alice/Dana sure know how to have fun, glorious condiments, lol. The strawberry thing was rather sexy… even better if you added chocolate. Would love to know what’s up with Shane…. what’s wrong with her. Still curious from the last time why Carmen was crying. Alice/Dana work so well together.. and they have such great chemistry. I would love to be able to fall asleep with my head resting on someones chest… listening to their heart beating, unfortunately I’m not that lucky. I’m usually not a big Tina/Bette fan… but how you write always keeps me interested. You don’t need me for motivation to write… you have enough for the both of us. Your comments always leave me wondering about you… and what you’ll say next. I’m hooked and never leaving… get busy on that next chapter. I love everything you do…
I am glad that someone knows the problem with Shane. Not only is Shane in physical pain but seems to be also in emotional pain. Jenny put some of the bruises there but that does not account for all of them. Sounds like she has internally bleeding taking place. Got to love Alice’s mind, how she was able to come up with her theory. Dand has a lot of confidence in Alice. Whoa, Tina kissed Bette. Still wondering how Tina will react to the news that it was Bette who had Marcus killed. Can’t wait for the next post.
my eyes lit up when i saw that you had a new chapter up. sorry i didn’t comment last time, but i just have nothing witty to say. i could bake you cookies..?btw: it doesn’t cease to amaze me how true these characters are despite how the complexity of the storyline.
Wow Bette is cooking and for Tina, that is sweet and cute. Alice is cool, Shane and Carmen are in trouble and still curious about them. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Oi, I love this fic…hadn’t much time to sit as I used too, but I’m still reading even if it’s to catch up…The scene w/Alice and Dana reminded me of an CSI ep…it was well written. Loving it, loving it…ta…cheers mate.
I totally love this! You’re amazing! But about the thing I said earlier, it’s still a bit confusing. If you want to, I can explain a bit more what I mean. My email is “darkness @ darkness-descends.net” (remove the spaces). Just contact me if you want my help
Nice update…I think I have been a silent reader thus far. And the story is very enjoyable to read. I can’t wait to find out what happens next. Does Helena make an appearance?
I really love this story ClosetDana, I can’t wait to read the next chapter..Five Stars from me =)
Bette can cook? lol Alice’s editor at work is a dumbass. And cayenne pepper…I wonder how drinking that will stop a nosebleed? I suppose it’s time to Google it! Heh glad you liked “fucknuts.” =p
Your story keeps getting better! Well done with this chapter, it kept me very entertained.
Another well written chapter leaves us wondering what the next piece of the puzzle will be. Tell us soon! Thanks for writing.
Acooking Bette and the house is still standing. Shane and Carman are so tight Hey love that Alice she has a mind like a steel trap thanks
I’m loving this story every moment!! Will our characters crash into one another?? I can’t wait for the next chapter!! Take your time and let it come to you!!! BUT MAKE IT FAST!!! I’m FEENING!!! Keep up the good work!
oh god, shane and her whole ‘keep it to myself’ attitude. I just watched the episode where Dana dies a couple hours ago so I’m really invovled in the Danish at the moment. I love the idea of her being a cop, it reminds me of one of her and alice’s sex games, lol
This is fuckin’ ‘A’ . . . . I really have fallen in love with this story. My Sharmen girls are clickin’ on a closer level, I’m really feelin’ dat’!!! Just continue, and soon!!! LYLAS ;-p
Hé ClosetDana, this was a great update this story is getting better and better. Hope you find the time and inspiration to update on your other story as well.