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Apogée 12
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“Inspector Dunne I decide what access level my agents are granted, Agent Bell has clearance to task any vehicle she wants because she has legitimate reason which is more than I can say about your Las Vegas boy’s night out excursion last month. I would also suggest Inspector Dunne you take the time to come up with a valid argument for your ranting before stepping into my office. Agent Bell took one SUV with my permission, and if that affects your fiscal bonus this year, well I could care less; I’m trying to do my job. Thank you Inspector, I hope you have a wonderful evening. ” Dunne’s lips pursed and his jaw tightened as he made his way out of Dana’s office, the agent feeling pleased with her discussion with the barely senior Inspector. Dana did however make a mental note to tell the writer to stay on her toes, they’d both just made a new enemy.
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Alice pulled a pair of Aviator sunglasses over her eyes and began to pull out of the FBI’s parking lot when her phone rang. The writer answered, a smiled already plastered across here face when she saw who was calling.
“Hey I was just about to pull out, are you in your office? I didn’t see you.” Dana smiled the moment Alice picked up, the writer never really said ‘hello’ anymore, the blonde would just answer the phone and start talking. Dana took a deep breath, not wanting to convey her frustration to Alice at this point.
“The Planet is a coffeehouse during the day right? The writer could hear the tension in Dana’s voice as she spoke and Alice got a little worried and speaking cautiously,
“Yeah it’s a coffeehouse…what’s wrong?” There was a small silence on the other end as Dana tried to gather her thoughts. After Inspector Dunne left her office, the agent became more and more worried about their situation. Alice wasn’t a real FBI agent, after all, and if Dunne started sticking his nose around, chances are he’d smell their bullshit eventually. Dana took a deep breath speaking as lively and clear as possible,
“Why don’t you meet me there before you leave say 20 minutes?” Alice looked at her phone before answering, Dana sounded worried but was trying to hide it. The writer smirked saying,
“Twenty minutes, I’ll be there.”
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i like this story-looking forward to tuesday-to read the next post
00 L word… What an Awesome Fic you got here CD! Danish here is soo hot! lol Cant get over how the heck i missed this! :slaps self: no more, consider me hooked for sure :)
I want to curl up with my blanket and read your story. I’m not leaving… even if you beg me to. I’m all yours, so be gentle, lol. I hope Dana doesn’t get herself in trouble for lying to Dunne. Alice/Dana make such a good pair..professionally and as lovers. I like how you’re drawing out the Bette/Tina thing.. it will make it that much steamier. I know what it’s like to wait and it only adds to the hellish tension. I see they both like to lick their lips.. I do the same damn thing, it’s such a bad habit. Thank you for finally revealing Shane’s problem.. I was wondering. Not a huge fan of Sharmen but you make the sex well worth reading. I’m feeling the slow burn with Bette and Tina… hope you make their time special. What you write in your chapters makes me want to get lost in the pages. You’re my escape, ClosetDana. So close but still too far away… hopefully that will change. Great chapter… looking forward to more.
I remember when I was a sophomore my biology teacher gave us a family tree of some royal chick and she had hemophilia. Somehow she had quite a few children and this wasn’t anytime in the past few decades. It was maybe a couple of centuries ago. Freaky shit I tell ya. Anyway, the TiBette stuff is hot as always but I hope Bette knows what she’s doing. Danish is cute and sweet, and even the Sharmen was pretty good. Dunne needs to be fwapped upside the head with a boomwhacker or something. Just enough to get him to chill out and not be a jackass.
I right there with brteyes! Nice! OMG josh..will henry be making an appearance?lol
Don’t worry ClosetDana yourliving up to the The Maestro’s expectations :)Another great chapter and another 5 stars
Thanks. I thought this story could not get any better, but I was wrong. Terrific job, and you are doing fine with Bette and Tina. I do agree now that you mention it that they rarely seemed happy, BUT the illusion was there and that is the ILLUSION we fell for and LOVE to READ. Have a wonderful and safe vacation!!!!!
I hope that Dana and Alice doesn’t get caught by Inspector Dunnefuck! LoL…I wanna see more from Carmen and Shane…They’re my favorite couple of the show…As for Bette and Tina, lets hope that things work out for those two..And what will happen when Tina finds out that Bette got her husband killed?? The shit will hit the fan!! KEEP IT GOING!!! I want to read MORE!
All Tina needs to do is kick all those people to the curb and head back to Bette’s. Sounds like things are starting to unravel for Bette with her business. Hopefully if and when Tina finds out there will be a very good reason for her husband’s death. That Dunn dude is an ass. He needs to be shown up Dana and Alice. Alice is so a Bond girl now. Special Agent Alice to the rescue. Blood disorders are very hard to deal with especial when not treated. Hopefully with Carmen’s help Shane will get better. Can’t wait to read what happens next.
Things are moving right along! Interesting about Shane. Only knew women could carry the hemophilia gene. So what’s the one thing B/T haven’t done in W. Hollywood? Have a fantastic weekend. Thanks for writing!
Things are moving right along! Interesting about Shane. Only knew women could carry the hemophilia gene. So what’s the one thing B/T haven’t done in W. Hollywood? Have a fantastic weekend. Thanks for writing!
LOL @ the box comment! :D Actually I do know what you’re talking about. ;) I guess slang doesn’t know any boundaries (in a literal and figurative way). We use the term here too (ofcourse in the Dutch translation).We even use it as a nickname, we say it to women who are really dumb (it’s not really flattering when someone says that to you). Anways, totally getting off topic here. :) Great update as always! So many things to remember with this story. The readers sometimes might be ahead of you, but we don’t know were you’re heading. So some small detail, we forget (or at least I forget), can be very important later on. So, Shane is opening up to Carmen. She must feel vulnerable right now (ofcourse physically, but more emotionally), but I’m sure Carmen is a person who she can really trust and will stick with her till the end. As I can see Helena has a great timing. Bette knew how to hide her frustration. If she only knew…this was probably her last chance (at least for a while) for getting with Tina. Do I smell trouble in TiBette-paradise? Nothing new to say on Danish, except for I love them…as always (am I getting repetitive? :) ). Btw, will Betty show up for our own musical pleasure in this story? Singing the new themesong for this Bond-story for example? ;)
You have a hell-of-a-good time on vacation!!! Hope Dana and Alice don’t get caught. HAHAHAHA!!! I’m so proud of my girl Shane for opening up . . . I think Carmen is really the one for her in her time of need. NOW, lets find out what’s the problem with Carmen. LMFAO!!!! Anyways, you’re doin’ an amazing job, and due continue!!! LYLAS ;-p
I loved the update! I really hope that Dana and Alice can pull a fast one on Dunne. I think that they are intelligent enough to out-smart him. I love Danish! Uh…not the pastry…uh, nothing against the pastry…I like the pastry too but,…oh, you know what I mean.It has been an absolute pleasure reading your fic, and I can’t wait to read more. I think that I was able to identify the chart because you write the characters so well. It just fit, and for me it was clear. You should totally be proud of being able to pull that off. I’m really glad that you were able to get me to stop lurking and to actually comment. It makes the story so much better. It kind of makes it more personal. So…thank you. I also see that more people on the site are using the drive-by comment…that’s really funny.Update soon. I can’t wait!
Have wonderful time on your vacation. Try not to think of us poor saps pining away for your story :). Great as always. Can’t wait until the perfect storm of drama hits these ladies. Thanks for posting.
I love Dana and Alice together both professionally and as girlfriends. You do them justice. Thanks for this update and have a nice trip. See ya!
LOVE IT. Ok, I have NO clue why you worry about writing for your Bette & Tina… You do an amazing job.
im really enjoying this story, i love it, you write really well as always fan bloody tastic. and yes you do need to post again lol, only kidding. enjoy your vacation have fun :-)
Awesome as always. Can’t wait for more.
ah! It was longer than the others! It was really good too. I had to leave in the middle of reading to go to work and the first thing i did when i got back home was finish reading, lol. I’ll be waiting for more!
Thank you for the sharmen loving… this is getting intense! and while I am rooting Danish to uncover the mysterious of Shane, I am also really apprehensive as to what you have install when Alice and Dana finally finds Shane! This story totally rocks!!! you rock!!! I love how everything is linked, and everyone has a part in this whole fic! great JOB! I LOVE YOU!
This is getting more excited and love it!