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    Apogée 12

    Story written on June 15, 2006 by ClosetDana.
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    Words: 5020
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=61328
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    Dana’s got chestnuts(get it!) Alice is cracking the case, Shane explains what’s wrong (kinda) Bette and Tina get close, and an old friend shows her face.

        “Would you come back to my place tonight?…I can’t remember the last time I had a good night’s sleep until I shared a bed with you. No gimmicks, I just want to hold you…if that’s alright.” Tina’s face lit at the offer, she took Bette’s hand and wove her fingers in the brunette’s speaking barely above a whisper.

        “I’ll get my things.”

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        Shane stared in the mirror at her chest and back, it had been three days since the incident in the woods and she was feeling stronger everyday. The assassin still hadn’t talked to Carmen about the bruises, and the bartender hadn’t pushed her. Shane ran her fingers along her ribs, no longer wincing in pain at the touch, the assassin turned around and looked at her back and arms.  Each wound was covered in the cayenne paste and she had to admit that even though it stung like hell at first she wish she’d know about the remedy sooner. The assassin eyed the scratches Carmen had left in passion down her arms, Shane couldn’t help but smile to herself.

        “Sorry about that, by the way…I didn’t think it would leave a mark like that.” Shane turned quickly to find Carmen sitting in the doorway, a small smirk on her face from surprising the assassin.  Shane stared silent at the bartender, the look on her face unreadable.

        The assassin couldn’t understand Carmen’s angle, what was the point in saving her? What could the bartender want from her? Shane closed the space between them, Carmen’s eyes trailed down her neck to the assassin’s exposed chest as Shane came closer testing her limits. The bartender swallowed hard, realizing the assassin’s intent, Shane stopped not an inch from Carmen’s lips. The assassin breathed heavy still staring at the Latina, Shane moved her hands toward Carmen’s body, stopping short and hesitating. The bartender closed her eyes anticipating contact that didn’t come. Shane only stood in front of her seemingly frozen, steel blue eyes closed for a moment before touching Carmen. The assassin’s fingers trembling slightly, Shane barely ran her fingers along the bartender’s stomach. Carmen’s breath caught as the assassin’s light contact shot electricity through her. The bartender closed the distance between their mouths pressing her lips firmly against Shane’s and letting the assassin do the rest. Shane kissed Carmen fiercely, her fingers still lightly stroking the bartender’s stomach just above her pants.

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    2. 00 L word… What an Awesome Fic you got here CD! Danish here is soo hot! lol Cant get over how the heck i missed this! :slaps self: no more, consider me hooked for sure :)

    3. I want to curl up with my blanket and read your story. I’m not leaving… even if you beg me to. I’m all yours, so be gentle, lol. I hope Dana doesn’t get herself in trouble for lying to Dunne. Alice/Dana make such a good pair..professionally and as lovers. I like how you’re drawing out the Bette/Tina thing.. it will make it that much steamier. I know what it’s like to wait and it only adds to the hellish tension. I see they both like to lick their lips.. I do the same damn thing, it’s such a bad habit. Thank you for finally revealing Shane’s problem.. I was wondering. Not a huge fan of Sharmen but you make the sex well worth reading. I’m feeling the slow burn with Bette and Tina… hope you make their time special. What you write in your chapters makes me want to get lost in the pages. You’re my escape, ClosetDana. So close but still too far away… hopefully that will change. Great chapter… looking forward to more.

    4. I remember when I was a sophomore my biology teacher gave us a family tree of some royal chick and she had hemophilia. Somehow she had quite a few children and this wasn’t anytime in the past few decades. It was maybe a couple of centuries ago. Freaky shit I tell ya. Anyway, the TiBette stuff is hot as always but I hope Bette knows what she’s doing. Danish is cute and sweet, and even the Sharmen was pretty good. Dunne needs to be fwapped upside the head with a boomwhacker or something. Just enough to get him to chill out and not be a jackass.

    7. Thanks. I thought this story could not get any better, but I was wrong. Terrific job, and you are doing fine with Bette and Tina. I do agree now that you mention it that they rarely seemed happy, BUT the illusion was there and that is the ILLUSION we fell for and LOVE to READ. Have a wonderful and safe vacation!!!!!

    8. I hope that Dana and Alice doesn’t get caught by Inspector Dunnefuck! LoL…I wanna see more from Carmen and Shane…They’re my favorite couple of the show…As for Bette and Tina, lets hope that things work out for those two..And what will happen when Tina finds out that Bette got her husband killed?? The shit will hit the fan!! KEEP IT GOING!!! I want to read MORE!

    9. All Tina needs to do is kick all those people to the curb and head back to Bette’s. Sounds like things are starting to unravel for Bette with her business. Hopefully if and when Tina finds out there will be a very good reason for her husband’s death. That Dunn dude is an ass. He needs to be shown up Dana and Alice. Alice is so a Bond girl now. Special Agent Alice to the rescue. Blood disorders are very hard to deal with especial when not treated. Hopefully with Carmen’s help Shane will get better. Can’t wait to read what happens next.

    10. Things are moving right along! Interesting about Shane. Only knew women could carry the hemophilia gene. So what’s the one thing B/T haven’t done in W. Hollywood? Have a fantastic weekend. Thanks for writing!

    11. Things are moving right along! Interesting about Shane. Only knew women could carry the hemophilia gene. So what’s the one thing B/T haven’t done in W. Hollywood? Have a fantastic weekend. Thanks for writing!

    12. LOL @ the box comment! :D Actually I do know what you’re talking about. ;) I guess slang doesn’t know any boundaries (in a literal and figurative way). We use the term here too (ofcourse in the Dutch translation).We even use it as a nickname, we say it to women who are really dumb (it’s not really flattering when someone says that to you). Anways, totally getting off topic here. :) Great update as always! So many things to remember with this story. The readers sometimes might be ahead of you, but we don’t know were you’re heading. So some small detail, we forget (or at least I forget), can be very important later on. So, Shane is opening up to Carmen. She must feel vulnerable right now (ofcourse physically, but more emotionally), but I’m sure Carmen is a person who she can really trust and will stick with her till the end. As I can see Helena has a great timing. Bette knew how to hide her frustration. If she only knew…this was probably her last chance (at least for a while) for getting with Tina. Do I smell trouble in TiBette-paradise? Nothing new to say on Danish, except for I love them…as always (am I getting repetitive? :) ). Btw, will Betty show up for our own musical pleasure in this story? Singing the new themesong for this Bond-story for example? ;)

    13. You have a hell-of-a-good time on vacation!!! Hope Dana and Alice don’t get caught. HAHAHAHA!!! I’m so proud of my girl Shane for opening up . . . I think Carmen is really the one for her in her time of need. NOW, lets find out what’s the problem with Carmen. LMFAO!!!! Anyways, you’re doin’ an amazing job, and due continue!!! LYLAS ;-p

    14. I loved the update! I really hope that Dana and Alice can pull a fast one on Dunne. I think that they are intelligent enough to out-smart him. I love Danish! Uh…not the pastry…uh, nothing against the pastry…I like the pastry too but,…oh, you know what I mean.It has been an absolute pleasure reading your fic, and I can’t wait to read more. I think that I was able to identify the chart because you write the characters so well. It just fit, and for me it was clear. You should totally be proud of being able to pull that off. I’m really glad that you were able to get me to stop lurking and to actually comment. It makes the story so much better. It kind of makes it more personal. So…thank you. I also see that more people on the site are using the drive-by comment…that’s really funny.Update soon. I can’t wait!

    15. Have wonderful time on your vacation. Try not to think of us poor saps pining away for your story :). Great as always. Can’t wait until the perfect storm of drama hits these ladies. Thanks for posting.

    16. I love Dana and Alice together both professionally and as girlfriends. You do them justice. Thanks for this update and have a nice trip. See ya!

    18. im really enjoying this story, i love it, you write really well as always fan bloody tastic. and yes you do need to post again lol, only kidding. enjoy your vacation have fun :-)

    21. Thank you for the sharmen loving… this is getting intense! and while I am rooting Danish to uncover the mysterious of Shane, I am also really apprehensive as to what you have install when Alice and Dana finally finds Shane! This story totally rocks!!! you rock!!! I love how everything is linked, and everyone has a part in this whole fic! great JOB! I LOVE YOU!

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