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Apogée 15
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“I don’t have to take a shot for each time I have, do I? Because this game will be over quick and I’ll be way past drunk.” Shane said swallowing the shot and tossing the glass back on the table, Carmen laughed loudly.
“That was kind of like a joke, wasn’t it?” The bartender asked as Shane shrugged, smirking.
“I do have a sense of humor Carmen,” The bartender smiled wider saying nothing, Carmen was sure the assassin had said it before, but hearing her name out of Shane’s mouth made her smile.
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Helena stood up just as Tina walked back in the house,
“Sorry Helena, that was a friend of mine, she’s a little reserved.” Tina said as the heiress walked past the widow to the closet, slipping on her shoes and jacket and heading for the door.
“I apologize Tina, there is some pressing business I seemed to have neglected on my arrival. Can I ring you tomorrow…for lunch perhaps?” The heiress said Tina looking confused for a moment; Helena seemed to go from relaxed to extremely tense in a matter of minutes. The widow nodded opening the door for the heiress and waving a befuddled goodbye as Helena left in a whir.
Tina thought a moment running to her cell phone and hitting the speed dial,
“Hello?” a familiar voice rang in the widow’s ears and Tina smiled.
“So do you want to try and sleep tonight? Because I can think of some other things we can do instead…but you’ll have to turn that car around.” The widow grinned wide, walking through the house, picking out fresh wine glasses. Bette swung the car around quickly, stepping on the gas to get back to Tina’s house faster.
“Already turning, and halfway there…See you in a second.” The brunette pulled into Tina’s driveway but waited in the car for a moment, Bette suddenly felt the guilt she had been putting off and she wasn’t sure why it would rear it’s ugly head now. She was positive the guilt was over having Marcus killed but the brunette wasn’t sure why she felt shame about it now. Contracting was always the answer to rectifying wayward business partners, but this had become so complicated Bette couldn’t see how she could come out of this smoothly.
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nice make the post longer
I wonder what has Helena so unsettled. Has she figured out that Marcus was on the take or is she covering her own misdeeds? What is Carmen hiding from Shane? Dunne is an ass and you know that he is going to make serious trouble for Dana and Alice. Bette is falling hard for Tina as is Tina falling for Bette. I wonder if Kit went out and killed someone that Bette did not know about (like this person messed with Bette and Kit took it upon herself to fix the problem). Maybe even Bette did time to cover for Kit. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
I love’em both, but made Shane open up to Carmen so easily and pretty much teach Carmen everything she knows? But I’m soooo diggin’ it!!! I still want to know what my girl, Carmen, is hiddin’ . . . and I can’t wait for the next chap, please post soon and make it LONGER!!! LMFAO!!! Anyways, doin’ a great job, keep it up. Post soon!! LYLAS ;-p
I meant to say WHAT made Shane do what she did . . . sorry ;-p
Hi, just read this fic from the beginning and i think it is really interesting with lots of drama, twists and turns.Im a really big Danish fan myself but im liking all the other characters too. Lookin forward to see how Alice and Danas relationship will go,Dunne is a nasty piece of work.Keep writing and post soon.Thanks.
OK… i admit im as far as a bette and tina fan.. BUT i guess i cant help but try to “like” them because its you who is writting them lol and of course you gave some Danish! so no hard feelings! oh wellll yeah suspense! lol I’m glad Alice told dana and that she didnt aplogize for her thesis and what not. oh and the charts were just awesome not im just like post again post right now! do it do it! lol tnx for posting :)
oh i almost forgot! Dunne! that lil rat! ok im done lol
First things first: Dunne is a fuckin’ dick! I hate him!!! As for TiBette, they are great together, but I feel sorry for her even though this is on her! Shane and Carmen, I’m afraid they will get caught, but they gotta ride out Bonnie and Clyde style!!! Dana and Alice: so sweet, but powerful…Continue soon girlie!!
I always get excited when I’ve seen that you’ve posted… finally some thing to read besides mine, over and over again, lol. The chart idea was a fantastic.. it will make following along so much easier. You always have new mysteries to unveil and I’m caught in your web. I want to know what Carmen’s plans are. And Helena.. what is her part in all this. Am I repeating myself? The Tibette sex was so intimate and left me with the slow burn… even though it wasn’t Danish. It was all so sad, too.. all the feelings that remain hidden… that should happen to no one. I can tell the stress is getting to both Alice and Dana… I hope that the work doesn’t mess with their personal lives. I can’t wait till Dunne gets his. Thank you for this chapter and I can’t wait for the next. I’ll stay right here with my security blanket.
ummmmmmmm, interesting, my first read so I’ll have to do the go backwards thing to catch up….different but definiltely intriguing…more soon please
Wow this is amazing and excited and love it. OK post soon please, thanks!
1st brb
I’m surprised that Shane is teaching Carmen all that stuff. Maybe Shane will teach her then kill her. =p I see more drama for Alice and Dana. I wonder why Tina didn’t ask Bette about her tears? I’m sure Bette would’ve lied, but it’s still odd that Tina didn’t ask. Perhaps Tina knows more than she’s letting on. HAHA You called Dunne and asslick. lol Too funny. And yes, WV is known for mountains and skiing and stuff. Oh and bungee jumping off the New River Gorge Bridge. There’s also the Mothman (I often say he lives in my backyard) but I’d rather not go there. It would take too long to talk about it.
Very good chapter as always… Damn I liked to see Shane put a cap. between Dunne’s eyes.
Every chapter I feel like I’m watching an episode of Lost. With every question that is answered, 5 more pop up. I’m riveted and can’t wait until you pull everything all together. Thanks for the B&T scenes. I hope you can find a way to keep them together–don’t know how, but I have faith in your abilities to spin a plausible web. Wonderful chapter.
This story is great, definately one of my favourites. You’re a great writer and all the characters are really well written… I’m a big Danish fan but I love all the relationships in this fic, and they all intertwine really well… can’t wait to read more, I agree with Dani F. Shane should totally get Dunne – he’s such a meanie, anyway… great story, keep it coming :)
You made a drawing of the chart!!!! That’s so cool!! You’re the best!! :D I’ve been away for a few days. And it’s been hot as hell here the last couple of days (again…sigh), so I’ve been avoiding my own house (/sauna) like the plague. I think I just remembered what Carmen’s agenda is. :D But I let Carmen suprise Shane. Bette is going to be in so much trouble when Tina will find out what Bette has done. But she already knows that… Oh no, Dunne has been watching Alice and Dana! I officially hate him now. :) I’m really curious what business Kit and Bette will talk about during the dinner Friday evening. Btw, I had my own run in with the cops earlier this week (I lost my wallet and they called me later that day that I could collect it at the station). Funny, the agent wasn’t even near as hot as agent Bells or agent Fairbanks…strange huh? ;)
Damn. Love this fic…but you already know that. post soon :D
As always, loved the B/T scenes. Would have liked to read how Tina responded after their first time(s). Looking forward to more, more, more! Good job keeping Helena intriguing. Have a great weekend, and thanks for writing!
Wow! That was an awesome chapter, I really liked it!! This is a story which is very different from all the other ones and I have to say you`re doing a great job! So please, update soon!! And thanks for the chart!
Great update, And I really hate Dunne for watching Dana and Alice together. But they can beat him of I’m sure. Keep em coming…
Sorry I didnt comment earlier! But I read and re-read this chapter, and I just have to say that you are an AMAZING writer! The detail you put in your stories is incredible, and I always know that an update from you is going to be a good read. Hell, you make TiBette interesting to me, and I hate TiBette with a passion! I fast forward through their scenes on the show, so actually getting me to read it is a miracle. Sharmen is awesome in your story, and Danish…what can I say. I always love Danish! :-) Great job!! By the way, thanks for giving a shout out to my story. You’re way too sweet to me! Please update soon!